中考英语书面表达达标检测卷有答案经典.docx

1、中考英语书面表达达标检测卷有答案经典2020-2021年 中考英语书面表达达标检测卷（有答案）经典一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。【答案】My

2、junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. Im glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowle

3、dge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来

4、时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is，Im glad to，Our campus is，Our teachers teach us等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encoura

5、ge sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名

6、和学校名。2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。4. 至少80词。Dear Billy,Its my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. _Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,Its my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. Ill tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the coming

7、 physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I dont do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed

8、by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy，because I have，Doing exercise can help，So I adv

9、ise you to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3书面表达随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set up traditi

10、onal culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestionDear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge

11、because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, its necessary for schools to set up traditiona

12、l culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldnt give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last

13、 but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Lets call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文

14、主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing，its necessary for schools to，we shouldnt，They can raise，it is of great importance to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课

15、。此处because of， in ones opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4 假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。To: lihua china. comFrom: bill006 america. comSubject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China i

16、s developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?What is your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if y

17、ou have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teachin

18、g is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the schools environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have t

19、o make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后

20、向Bill提出问题，结束全文。【点睛】本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。5 “美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或

21、地名；4. 词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,_Lets take action now. Our actions can mak

22、e a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are

23、 a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. Its kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we sho

24、uldnt do. We shouldnt make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We cant spit anywhere and we shouldnt throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldnt break traffic rules.Lets take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【详解】琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健

25、康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创”活动中来。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称we来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。

26、语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双创”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well.

27、 、Its kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We cant spit anywhere and we shouldnt throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldnt break traffic rules.等等。6随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变， 购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购

28、群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。优点（advantage）1.不需要出门；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累2.价格通常比较便宜3.可供选择的范围广，品种多缺点（disadvantage）1.只看到图片， 看不到商品本身2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西， 造成浪费你的观点提示词汇：网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；3.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mou