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1、自动评英语作文自动评英语作文 篇一：英语作文例文点评88篇 借鉴和模仿是提高写作的基石。先借来再转为自用是巧学者之法。内容可适用于读写任务正文部分。 -Miss.Q 英语作文例文点评88篇 （收集于网络） 【要求】 英语课上老师教给同学们一句英语格言“No Pains, No Gains” （不劳则不获），并让大家围绕如下三方面以这句格言为题写一篇短文。 人们在困难面前容易气馁，并产生不劳而获的想法。 “不劳则不获”这一格言能给予人鼓励。 学生要取得优异成绩离不开苦功夫，所谓成功的秘诀即是辛勤的劳动。 【范文】 No Pains, No Gains People attempting a ta

2、sk may be discouraged in front of difficulties. They start with a great interest and passion. When they find that the task will take much more effort than they thought, their interest diminishes and their passion wanes. At that time, they are likely to have the idea of reaping a good harvest without

3、 much labor. The old saying “No pains, no gains” comes as a word of cheer to these discouraged persons. No task that is really worth doing can be done either easily or quickly. No mastery of any knowledge or skill can be gained without painstaking efforts. We students shoulder the task of learning k

4、nowledge that calls for exertion. To improve our grades is what every student wants. We may envy those who have achieved excellence, and wonder what makes them succeed. In fact, their secret of success is no secret. It depends largely on their efforts. Good grades only belong to hardworking students

5、. Many thanks for the favor you did for me! 【评语】 该文紧紧围绕题目给出的三方面加以论述，层次清楚，语言流畅易懂。“interest diminishes and their passion wanes” 中词语搭配讲究，“reaping a good harvest without much labor” 用另一个习惯表达法点出了“No Pains, No Gains”的含义，同时又避免了重复。文章句式灵活，长短搭配得当，使文章朗朗上口，虽然是议论文，但却没有枯燥之感。 【要求】 根据下面的提示写一篇短文，内容须包括下面几个要点。 没有坚强的意志

6、就不可能取得成功。 事业成功须非凡的干劲。 有些人害怕困难，则一事无成。 【范文】 Where there is a Will, There is a Way No man can win success without strong will. We hear some men have got good results, but hardly realize that the great men had been making more efforts before they achieved success. Success requires an unusual amount of e

7、nergy to overcome difficulties. So it is important for us to have great resolution. Some men tend to be afraid of difficulties. If they meet with some difficulties, they will give in. So they get nothing eventually.So let's make up our minds, stick to it and surely win success in our career. Foc

8、us on the most important things to do to help your organization be successful. Don't focus on the easiest things. 【评语】 对这种提纲式作文，一定要囊括所给提纲中的全部内容，但又无须拘泥于提纲，更不能逐字逐句地“翻译”。对此应发挥自己的想像力和创造力，大胆地创作扩展。 【要求】 很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就，但不是所有人都能取得胜利。成功需要顽强的意志，锲而不舍的努力，勤奋学习的精神。请你以此为主要内容，准备一篇百字左右的简短发言。 【范文】 The way to suc

9、cess Everyone tries to achieve success in his/her career. But some finally attain their aims while others fail. Why? Some continue their cause to the end through long period of hard struggles, but others are easily disappointed and stop halfway. Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three

10、essentials of success. A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Life is short and we have too much to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything. I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that

11、 success belongs to those who can make constant efforts. Don't be afraid of life. Believe that life is worth living, and your belief will help create the fact. 【评语】 这是一篇议论文，作者首先提出问题，再提出自己观点：意志坚强、锲而不舍、勤奋，是成功的三大要素。作者在结尾，巧妙地运用了谚语“where there is a will there is a way”，使文章增色不少。 【要求】 坚强的意志(Man's S

12、trong Will)请以下面三句分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇以坚强的意志为题的文章。 Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality. There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will. It is not easy to cultivate a strong will. 【范文】 Man's Strong Will Strong will is universally regarded as a ver

13、y praisable quality. It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship that befalls. It is strong will that enables us to endure the trying situation and to attain our goals. Strong will gives us light when we are in the dark, and encourag

14、ement when we are frustrated. With this meritorious quality, no enemy can overwhelm us, and no obstacles can stand in our way. As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. All pain helps to make us rise, how-ever much we may hate it at the time. There have been many examples that succe

15、ss can be achieved by strong will. During the Long March, the Red Army soldiers met with the greatest hardship men have ever experienced. They had nothing to eat but grass roots and barks of trees. It was their strong will that made them defeat the hardship. Helen Keller, a strong willed American bl

16、ind woman, mastered the English language and became a well-known educator. Such instances abound, and suffice it just to enumerate the two. Develop a high tolerance for ambiguity-you'll be more satisfied. It is not easy to cultivate a strong will. First of all, we must set up a firm faith in our

17、 cause, namely, the causeof communism, and be ready to devote our lives to it. Secondly, we must learn from strong-willed persons, especially, from revolutionary martyrs who fought for communism to the last drop of blood. Finally, we should boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so

18、 as to get rid of the weak points of our moral character. 【评语】 本文为议论文。首段的“neither?nor?”“It is strong will that?”，和“no enemy?no obstacles?”的运用，加强了文章的语气，突出了坚强意志的重要价值。段末的格言起到了画龙点睛的作用。第二段用了红军二万五千里长征和海伦?凯勒这两个例子，有力地证明了坚强的意志能使人获得成功这一主题。末段谈如何培养坚强的意志，层次清晰，观点正确，具有说服力。 【要求】 以“Don't Stop Halfway”为题写一篇议论文。 论

19、证具体 结构完整 字数100150 【范文】 Don't Stop Halfway When a man is doing some work, he desires some benefit from it. In order to get this benefit, the must do the task to the end and completely finish it. To finish a task, whether hard or not requires patience and firmness. Therefore when you have some wor

20、k to do, you must do it faithfully, irrespective of the difficulty. Difficulties and obstacles are unavoidable; if you turn your back on meeting them, you will succeed in nothing, but if you can overcome them, you will accomplish something. To stop halfway is very bad. Suppose that a precious stone

21、is at a great distance from you and you want to obtain it; you must reach for it; you must not stop halfway. If you stop halfway, you will not only get nothing, but also lose something, because your time and strength will be wasted. It is a good thing for one to do one thing at a time, and never sto

22、p halfway. Cultivate a reputation for being reliable and hardworking, even if it means bucking peer pressure. 【评语】 作者对不要半途而废的论证具体而有说服力，告诉我们半途而废不仅无法达到目标而且浪费时间、精力。段落安排逐层深入，循循善诱。全文整体结构完整、自然。 【要求】 题目：Failure（失败）是一个人经常遇到的。失败不是好事，因为它使人的努力(efforts)付之东流。但是，失败也是好事，它可以教育我们使我们学到更多的东西。试写一短文就此谈谈你对失败的看法。 【范文】 Fai

23、lure Nearly everybody regards failure as a bad thing. The efforts we have made seem to be of no use and we feel very disappointed. Some people even lose the courage to start again or lose interest in life when the failure is a very great one. But failure can also benefit us. It can teach us a good l

24、esson and make us experienced. Also, we can realize our own shortcomings and get a better knowledge of ourselves. So when we start again, we can succeed more easily. Therefore, failure not only disappoints us but also benefits us. When we fail, we should make full use of our failure and learn from o

25、ur experience. Then, we may succeed in the future. Life is made up of ambiguous victories and nebulous defeats-claim them all as victories! 【评语】 本文最大的优点是正反对照，条理清楚。高考作文时间很短，所以谋篇布局显得十分重要。本文脉络清楚，浅显易懂，应该说在考场中是容易取胜的。此外，本篇行文简练，显得干净利落。要求】 每个人的生活中都有过失败的经历，失败对于我们来说，到底意味着什么？请你按如下提纲写一篇文章，谈谈你对失败的理解。 失败是生活中的常事。

26、人们对失败的态度各不相同。 就我而言，我认为失败? 【范文】 Is Failure a Bad Thing Failure is quite a common thing in our life. As long as we do things we will surely encounter difficulties. Of course we should try our best to get over them, but in many cases, it is not so easy, or even impossible. Then how should we face failu

27、re? Different people take different attitudes towards failure. When faced with failure, some people become frustrated and lose their selfconfidence. They refuse to make any further efforts. These people will probably never amount to anything in life. Some people just don't fear failure. They fir

28、mly believe that failure is the mother of success. As a result, not only can failure stop them, but they draw useful lessons from it and try even harder. Such people are sure to succeed someday. As for me, I don't think failure is a bad thing. Failure can never discourage me but only eich my exp

29、erience and steel my will. With this positive attitude in mind, I will try hard in anything I'm determined to accomplish and attain success in the end. 【评语】 本文按题目所给纲要分为三段。首段简要地论述了失败是每个人都会遇到的，末句用了一句设问，起到了承上启下的作用。第二段谈到了人们对失败的两种典型态度，先写错误观点进行铺垫，而后再写正确观点。这种安排自然突出了作者所赞同的态度，同时为引出第三段做好的了准备。末段作者则阐明了自己的观点

30、。全文层次清楚，段落间衔接紧密而自然，主题突出，语言流畅，用词准确。 【要求】 失败，是人人都不愿体验的结果。有人说失败使人消沉，有人说失败是成功之母。你对失败的态度怎样？写一篇短文。 字数150200字，题目自拟。 【范文】 Is Failure a Bad Thing? Failure is a common thing in our daily lives. As students, We sometimes fail to get high scores on our examinations. When we play game, we sometimes can't avo

31、id losing to others. And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work. All these failures happen naturally and almost every one of us has had such experiences. However, there are different attitudes towards failure. Some people lose heart in failure, they think the world has come to an end.

32、Some people don't take failure seriously and just ignore it, while some others learn much from it. In my opinion, what really counts is not failure itself, but what we think of failure and do after failure. As long as we believe in ourselves and don't give up, and in the mean time learn something from our failure, We'll certainly be successful in the end. So I'm never afraid of failure, for I believe that failure is not a bad thing, but the mother of success. 看问