英语中考英语初中英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题.docx

1、英语中考英语初中英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题（英语）中考英语初中英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题一、英语书面表达1随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括：1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication

2、methods now. As for me,【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only

3、 hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much t

4、ime on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are，I prefer to，Mobile phones bring，we can，we should，So lets等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现

5、代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in ones opinion, try one s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2（B）根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己.3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.4.女孩也

6、喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条.5.你对运动的观点.6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.8.参考词语:keep slim （保持苗条）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports._【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different

7、 reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, b

8、asketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【详解】本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点）。3

9、.提出自己对运动的观点。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。3 “inspire” 一词的汉语解释是“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。请以 “The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she

10、？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。【答案】The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two bi

11、g black eyes. He doesnt talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a t

12、ree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last years ping-pang competition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He i

13、s my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息

14、，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主

15、来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesnt talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need

16、any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。4人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们不同的观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法1. 广交朋友2. 可自由表达思想3. 有利

17、于外语学习1. 浪费时间2. 影响学习3. 可能上当受骗（be cheated）1. .2. .注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。2. 词数80词左右，短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think_【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should

18、make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of

19、time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇提

20、纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点，第三段要表述作者自己的观点。【详解】本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提示，确定文章中心。注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你的看法。注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。5书面表达某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以“The Changes i

21、n My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。过去生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。污染严重，垃圾遍地。.（适当发挥一至两点）现在环境：政府采取措施来改善污染，城市变得越来越整洁。生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多的人有自己的汽车；生活舒适。交通：新的飞机场已投入使用多年。be in use（投入使用）；旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。将来希望（两点）要求：1. 短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。Changes my homet

22、ownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government

23、takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tou

24、rists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以The Changes in My Hometown为题，介绍一下自己的家乡这些年来发生的变化。题目中用表格的形式，给我们对比的家乡的过去和现在，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，并对将来提出两点希望。审题可知，作文的基本框架和大概内容都有了，需要注意的是在描写过去的时候，需要适当发挥一到两点；还有对将来的希望也需要学生自己发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合理

25、发挥，注意要与文章的其他部分能够很好的结合起来，内容也要统一，符合题目要求，合情合理。表达时，需要注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译表格中的语句，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型来表达。注意句式的多变，长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句穿插使用，提升文章的档次。语句之间注意使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者按照题目要求，介绍了自己的家乡这些年来的变化。文章是按照时间的顺序，先介绍了家乡过去的面貌，这一部分使用了过去时态，谓语动词都变成了过去式，形式准确。然后是家乡现在的样子，这里主要以一般现在时态为主。最后对家乡的未来表达了自己的愿望

26、。整篇文章内容充实、完整，叙述清晰、条理，结构合理。文章中语言得体，语句通顺，句式表达符合英语的习惯，语法规范、准确。短文里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live

27、 a comfortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.等等。6共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势随处可见，出行方便有益健康，减少污染费用不高，负担得起存在问题未及时归还占道挡路你的观点我认为-参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Public bicycles are becoming mo