书面表达301400.docx

1、书面表达301400绝密启用前2014-2015学年度?学校11月月考卷试卷副标题考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx题号一二三四五六七八九十十一十二总分得分注意事项：1答题前填写好自己的姓名、班级、考号等信息2请将答案正确填写在答题卡上第I卷（选择题）请点击修改第I卷的文字说明评卷人得分一、单项选择（题型注释）评卷人得分二、完形填空（题型注释）评卷人得分三、阅读理解（题型注释）第II卷（非选择题）请点击修改第II卷的文字说明评卷人得分四、句型转换（题型注释）评卷人得分五、单词拼写（题型注释）评卷人得分六、补充句子（题型注释）评卷人得分七、翻译（题型注释）评卷人得分八、改错（

2、题型注释）评卷人得分九、单词造句（题型注释）评卷人得分十、选词填空（题型注释）1许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享。内容包括：同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么?(同学间的相处，对考试的担忧)我的压力是什么？（父母希望我成为班级中的尖子生。周末送我去参加各种培训班）我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。（与父母交流，表达自己的看法，得到他们的赞同）得出自己的结论。（交谈是解决问题的必要途径）注意：1.文中

3、不得出现真实的姓名和校名。2.词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure._Thats all. Thank you!【答案】One possible version：Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a seriou

4、s problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training clas

5、ses on weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.Thats all. Thank you!【解析】试题分析：这是一篇演讲稿，介绍同学们存在的压力问题以及自己解

6、决压力的方法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，要把提纲中所列的要点书写清楚。注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Students in our class are.；Some students cant.；Im always.；I told her .；So I think.等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系以及演讲稿的格式。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍现在同门的压力很大，接下来介绍自己的压力，最后指出自己解决压力的方法。此处用了under too

7、 much pressure， get on well with，worry about，want me to， all kinds of ，had a talk with，agreed with等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。考点：提纲作文。2假如你是李明，请你用英语向校长写一篇80个词左右的建议信。信中不能出现真实的班名和姓名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear headmaster,Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school l

8、ife. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school willHope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear headmaster,Im very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my

9、 suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next, I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as wellAs for our teachers, I h

10、ope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. Whats more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.Hope my suggestions will be helpfu

11、l. Thanks for reading my letter!Yours sincerely,Li Ming【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:be glad to很高兴做某事；talk about谈论；thanks for谢谢等。序数

12、词first，second及联系as，and等的使用使得本文逻辑清楚，上下文联系紧密。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。考点：考查提纲类作文3如今，在我们身边，父母均在外打工的留守儿童比比皆是。关注留守儿童（left-behindchildren），构建和谐社会的重要内容。关注留守儿童，要靠全社会的共同努力。你认为留守儿童面临的主要问题有那些？为了解决留守儿童的问题，请你向当地政府提建议：提示：1.缺乏父母的关爱(be short of love)，性格孤僻(lonely)，学习压力大、自卑。2.缺乏安全保障，缺乏家庭关爱（familiescare）

13、，容易犯错误甚至犯罪（dosomethingagainstthelaws）。建议：1.学校建立留守儿童心里咨询室（Psychological Counseling Room），老师应该把爱播撒到每一个留守儿童的心田。2.政府利用节假日建立留守儿童家长学校（parentsschoolforthesechildren）。3.社会各界开展与留守儿童一帮一结对子的活动（hand-in-handactivity）。4.父母尽可能回到孩子身边，给孩子生活上和学习上的帮助和关爱。表达要求：语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁、字数不少于80个。DearMayor:Imamiddleschoolstudent. Im

14、writingtotellyousomethingaroundus.【答案】DearMayor:Im a middle school student. Im writing to tell you something around us. Nowadays, there are many-left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them are from the countryside, you know, they have many problem. They are always

15、 lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents love. At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because theyre short of their families care. How to solve their problems? In my eyes, the government can set up a parents school for these chil

16、dren on holidays, you can organize hand-in-hand activity to call on more people to help them. You can also raise money to donate to these children. As the song says: If everyone gives their love, the world will be better. Its very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want t

17、o build a harmonious society.Best wishes to you!【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提示性作文。要求根据所给提示写写一封建议信。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。考点：提示性作文评卷人得分十一、书面表达（题型注释）4如今，运动变得越来越受人们的

18、欢迎。你喜欢运动吗？请你结合实际，和我们大家分享你最喜欢的运动及球员（或明星）。内容可适当扩充。提示词:become, favorite, make strong, in the future，要求：1. 文章内容符合题意，可参考所给提示词。2. 文中不得出现真实姓名，校名和地名。3. 字数70个左右【答案】 My favorite basketball player is Lin Shuhao. His English name is Jeremy Lin. He is another basketball star after Yao Ming. So many people call h

19、im the second Yao Ming. But he doesnt like it. In the 1970s, his family moved to America from Taiwan, China. He is twenty-five years old. His elder brother is Josh and Joseph is his younger brother. He studied at Harvard University (哈佛大学) from the year 2006 to the year 2010. His father, a fan of the

20、 NBA, taught him to play basketball when he was young. Now Lin Shuhao plays for the Houston Rocket. He works hard and plays very well. Now he is popular with many people. I want to be a basketball player When I grow up.【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，要求写一篇介绍自己喜欢的运动或者明星。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句

21、式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第三人称，主要用一般现在时态进行叙述，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的宾语从句和短语，为文章增色不少. 如: grow up长大；be popular with受到的欢迎等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.考点：考查提纲作文5假如你是林华，就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Daniel发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。林华爱好对实践颜色疗法(therapy)感兴趣；时常建议同学（自由发挥）；在业

22、余时间经常到图书馆阅读资料，或熬夜到很晚观看相关的记录片(documentary)困惑得不到父母的理解观点1.业余爱好有助于从中学到很多知识；2.业余爱好将对未来的发展有利；3. (至少一点)父母观点时间应花在功课上；成绩就是一切注意：1. 词数：100词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2. 可适当发挥，但文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。Dear Daniel,I am writing to tell you about my problem with my parents._What shall I do? Can you offer me some advice? I am loo

23、king forward to your early reply.Best wishes.Yours,Lin Hua【答案】 Dear Daniel,I am writing to tell you about my problem with my parents. I dont know how to deal with it and would like your help.You know I am crazy about therapy。 In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. And

24、I advise often my classmates to join me. I often stay up late watching documentaries that is on therapy. This makes my parents. very angry. To them, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can ac

25、hieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I dont think my parents understands me. I feel bad about that.What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward toyour early reply.Best wishesYours,Lin Hua【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇

26、利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍自己的爱好及因为爱好给自己造成的困惑及父母的观点和自己的见解。材料所给内容较详细，在写作时注意句式的应用及语言的逻辑性。【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色.如: In my spare time，I often stay up late watching documentaries that is on therapy，it will be of great value to my future development等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。考点：表格作文。6内容提示：赵刚今天有点感冒，头痛，嗓子痛且乏力。他看了医生，医生说他没什么大毛病，只要吃点药，多喝水，躺着休息一下，两天后就好了。词数：60词左右。_【答案】Zhao Gang had a little cold today. He had a headache and a sore throat. He felt tired. So he went to see a doctor. The