1、高考英语二轮复习专题五短文改错第1讲词法错误靶向训练专题五 短文改错第1讲 词法错误真题演练Passage 1(2017全国卷)(导学号 58210041)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday,I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car,I thought I had learned the instructors orders,so once I started the car,my mi
2、nd goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the word,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late,the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a sud
3、denly stop just in the middle on the road.答案:In the summer holiday following my birthday,I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car,I thought I had learned the instructors orders, once I started the car,my mind blank.I forgot what he had said to me alt
4、ogether.The instructor kept repeating the,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“ left!”I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes,the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road.【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者学车第一天的经历。71解析:词法错误。
5、表达多少岁生日用序数词,因此eighteen应该改为eighteenth。答案:eighteeneighteenth72解析:词法错误。句意:我仍然记得第一天有多艰难。表示第几天,序数词前要加定冠词the或者用限定词进行修饰。答案:first之前加the或my73解析:行文逻辑错误。根据前后句意思可知这里表示转折概念,并非因果,所以把so改为but或yet。答案:sobut/yet74解析:句法错误。文章描述过去的经历,上下文均使用了相应的过去时态,这里应保持一致,用一般过去时,所以把goes改为went。答案:goeswent75解析:词法错误。根据后面引号内的内容可知word应该用复数形式
6、words。答案:wordwords76解析:句法错误。根据前面教练发出的两个指令可知,这三个属于并列结构,都是祈使句,都以动词原形开头。答案:TurningTurn77解析:句法错误。这句话中含有so.that.(如此以至于)结构,故much在此处是多余的。答案:去掉much78解析:词法错误。“一段时间later”表示多长时间之后,是固定用法。答案:latelater79解析:词法错误。此处stop是名词,名词前用形容词修饰,所以把suddenly改为sudden。答案:suddenlysudden80解析:词法错误。in the middle of.意为“在的中间”,是固定搭配。答案:o
7、nofPassage 2(2017全国卷)Mr.and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school,and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up earlier
8、 and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside,they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came,they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案:Mr.and Mrs.Zhang work in our school.They live far from the school,and it ta
9、kes them about hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are in planting vegetables in their garden, is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up and water the vegetables together.They have also bought some gardening tools.,they often get some useful from the Internet.Wh
10、en summer,they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍了一对张氏夫妇的工作以及他们的业余爱好。71解析:词法错误。Mr.and Mrs.Zhang是两个人,故用both。因both在此作同位语,也可以去掉。all指的是三者或三者以上。答案:allboth或去掉all72解析:词法错误。hour是以元音音素开头的单词,前面要用不定冠词an。表示“一个小时”可以用an hour也可以用one hour。答案:aan/one73解析:词法错误。interesting意为“有趣的
11、”,多指事物;interested意为“感兴趣的”,多指人。该句的主语是they,故用interested。be interested in意为“对感兴趣”。答案:interestinginterested74解析:句法错误。此处是非限制性定语从句,应用which而不能用that引导。答案:thatwhich75解析:行文逻辑错误。此处叙述他们经常早起这一事实,没有比较的意思,故不用比较级。答案:earlierearly76解析:词法错误。表示“买某物”直接用buy sth.。buy还可用于buy sb.sth.或buy sth.for sb.,表示“为某人买某物”。答案:去掉for77解析:
12、词法错误。此处表示“此外,而且”,应用besides。beside“在旁边”。答案:BesideBesides78解析:词法错误。information是不可数名词,没有复数形式。答案:informationsinformation79解析:句法错误。when引导的时间状语从句通常用一般现在时表示将来。答案:camecomes80解析:词法错误。invite sb.to do sth.“邀请某人做某事”。答案:pick前加toPassage 3(2016全国卷)The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about
13、how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case,we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad,we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from book
14、s.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many,yet we can still learn a lot.答案:The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about to do during the holiday.We can between staying at home and a trip.If we stay at
15、home,it is comfortable there is no need to spend money.But in that case,we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad,we can broaden view and gain we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we go to places of interest nearby.I that it is a good idea.It does not cost,yet we can sti
16、ll learn a lot.【语篇解读】本文主要讨论了暑假我们应该去做什么。1解析:句法错误。do后缺宾语,应将how改为what。答案:howwhat2解析:句法错误。情态动词后接动词原形。chose的原形是choose。答案:chosechoose3解析:词法错误。between.and.意为“在和之间”,是固定结构。and前后连接的是并列成分。and前用了动名词(staying),and后也应用动名词(taking)。答案:taketaking4解析:行文逻辑错误。comfortable与no need to spend money之间是并列关系,不是转折关系。答案:butand5解析
17、:词法错误。world是独一无二的事物,前面要加定冠词the。答案:world前加the6解析:行文逻辑错误。由前面的we go on a trip和we can broaden可知,应把your改为our。答案:yourour7解析:词法错误。knowledge意为“知识”,是不可数名词,没有复数形式。答案:knowledgesknowledge8解析:句法错误。suggest在此处表示“建议”,后接宾语从句时,从句要用虚拟语气,即谓语用“should动词原形”,should可以省略。答案:去掉can或者canshould9解析:句法错误。由前面的suggest和后面的does not co
18、st可知,此处用一般现在时。I thought表示“原以为,本以为”。答案:thoughtthink10解析:词法错误。cost表示“花费(时间、金钱等)”时,宾语是不可数名词,故用much。答案:manymuch模拟演练Passage 1(2017广州高三模拟)(导学号 58210042)Last night,I dreamt that I was digging a hole in my backyard.After which seemed like hours of digging,two objects come into view.One was mental box.In the
19、m was an old treasure map.The other object was an oil lamp covering in mud.This was my chance to get rich,I thought.I was still thinking about my new wealth while out of nowhere 20 sailor appeared.They wanted for me to lead them on the treasure hunt.I glad agreed.Suddenly,my alarm clock went off and
20、 I woke over.It was only a dream.答案:Last night,I dreamt that I was digging a hole in my backyard.After whichwhat seemed like hours of digging,two objects comecame into view.One was mental box.In themit was an old treasure map.The other object was an oil lamp coveringcovered in mud.This was my chance
21、 to get rich,I thought.I was still thinking about my new wealth whilewhen out of nowhere 20 sailorsailors appeared.They wanted me to lead them on the treasure hunt.I gladgladly agreed.Suddenly,my alarm clock went off and I woke overup.It was only a dream.【语篇解读】本文主要讲述了作者的一个荒诞离奇的梦境。1解析:本句为名词性从句,应用引导词w
22、hat。答案:whichwhat2解析:讲述的是过去的事情,所以用过去时。 答案:comecame3解析:其中一个物体是一个盒子,可数名词单数缺冠词。答案:mental前面加a4解析:指代box,用it。答案:themit5解析:oil lamp被覆盖在泥土中,应用被动形式。答案:coveringcovered6解析:根据结构was/were doing sth.when.“正在做某事,这时”,was/were about to do.when.“将要做某事,这时”可知将while改为when。答案:whilewhen7解析:根据20个水手可知,sailor应用复数。答案:sailorsail
23、ors8解析:want sb.to do为固定搭配,删除for。答案:删除for9解析:副词修饰动词,将glad改为gladly。答案:gladgladly10解析:wake up为固定搭配。答案:overupPassage 2(2017济宁高三检测)One of the most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love.I remember when my mom takes me to an English class in primary school,I suddenly found that
24、 learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it.The voice at the bottom of my heart said,“Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.”It was not easy at first.For almost one and a half year,I didnt do very well in all my English exams.Disappointing and frustrated,I doubted that whether
25、 I could follow my dream.But I told me not to accept this reality.Gradual,my grades started to improve and I had much confidence than before.答案:One of the most important rulerules of finding happiness in life is to do what you love.I remember when my mom takestook me to an English class in primary s
26、chool,I suddenly found that learnlearning English was fun and I really enjoyed it.The voice at the bottom of my heart said,“Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.”It was not easy at first.For almost one and a half yearyears,I didnt do very well in all my English exams. and frustr
27、ated,I doubted whether I could follow my dream.But I told not to accept this reality. ,my grades started to improve and I had confidence than before.【语篇解读】本文主要讨论怎样才能生活的快乐。1解析:one of后面接名词复数。故rule改成rules。答案:rulerules2解析:根据语境可知,这里应用一般过去时。故takes改成took。答案:takestook3解析:found后面是宾语从句,宾语从句用动名词作主语。故learn改成lea
28、rning。答案:learnlearning4解析:泛指“一位老师”用不定冠词,English是元音音素开头的单词,用an,或者将become改成turn,因为turn后面接名词不需要冠词。故become后面加an或become改成turn。答案:become后加an或becometurn5解析:one and a half 后面接名词复数。故year改成years。答案:yearyears6解析:这里作状语说明主语的状态,主语是I,需用过去分词形式。故Disappointing改成Disappointed。答案:DisappointingDisappointed7解析:doubted后面接w
29、hether引导的宾语从句,that是多余的。故去掉that。答案:that去掉8解析:根据句意“我告诉自己不要接受现实”可知将me改成myself。答案:memyself9解析:修饰整个句子用副词。故Gradual改成Gradually。答案:GradualGradually10解析:confidence是不可数名词,根据后面的“than before”可知,这里应用比较级,故much改成more。答案:muchmorePassage 3(2017合肥高三质量检测)I still remember the first day when I come to this new school.Ev
30、erything was new to me,what made me realize I was no longer a small child.I had to depend on me.Luckily,I made several good friend.Their interests were similar with mine.I had great English teacher,Maggie.She let me know the important of English.So I decided to learn English hardly.Although it was v
31、ery difficult at first,but with the help of my teacher,I made rapidly progress.Just as the old saying goes,“Where there is a will,there is a way.”答案:I still remember the first day when I to this new school.Everything was new to me, made me realize I was no longer a small child.I had to depend on .Luckily,I made several good .Their interests were similar mine.I had great English teacher,Maggie.She let me know the of English.So I d
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