河南省郑州市高考英语一轮 短文改错书面表达训练18.docx

1、河南省郑州市高考英语一轮 短文改错书面表达训练18郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（18）附参考范文Passage *Mark Twain was born in a small town of Horid.When he is only 1_twelve years old, his father died.Late he became a river boat pilot.2_Mark Twain was her pen name.During the American Civil War 3_He worked as a reporter and write a lot

2、 of stories.Gradually he 4_made his mark and his work were popular.He became one of the 5_best known writer of the 19th century in the U.S.A.In his life 6_Mark Twain wrote the number of stories and novels, on which 7_ “Adventure of Tom Sawyer” is the most famous one.His writings 8_have been translat

3、ed to many other languages, and they are 9_deeply love by the readers all over the world. 10 _【参考答案】Key 151iswas 2 Late-later 3.herhis 4.writewrote 5 workworks 6.writerwriters7.thea 8.right 9 tointo 10.loved *结束一、导语 What does beauty really mean？ Everybody has own definition. The standard of beauty c

4、hanges with different society， culture and nations. Some hold the point that the beautiful appearance is of great importance， which is visible to all. Others have the idea that the spiritual beauty is the loveliest one, which lasts long. However different it might be， their opinions are all acceptab

5、le. 什么是美呢？每个人都有自己的定义。美的标准因社会、文化和国度不同而产生差异。有的人认为相貌上的美是最重要、最直观的美，有的人则认为心灵上的美才是最可爱、最长久的美。无论哪种美，这些对美的定义都是有道理的。 二、创设情境 以“What is beauty in your mind”为主题，发表自己的看法，题目自拟。要求：1. 行文流畅，观点鲜明；2. 内容丰富，层次分明；3. 词数150左右。 三、学生习作 Beauty will buy no beef Everyone admires beauty. Nowadays some people tend to think that th

6、ey own beauty if they have a good looking. They are not satisfied with their appearance. They spend much money taking a kind of operation. Can beauty really be man-made？If so， everybody can get beauty. As a result，there is no beauty at all. The appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the

7、 world. Everyone should value it. Id rather prefer nature as the standard of beauty. Just accept yourself, accept everything the god gives to you，and create the beautiful life belong to you. Many heroes dont have beautiful surface. However，their beautiful images often come to our minds. Their beauty

8、 comes from their contributions to the society. Dont be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him. A beautiful person is not the one with a good looking，but with a broad and kind heart. Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more importan

9、t. As an old saying goes，“Virtue is fairer than beauty.”If you have a kind heart，you own real beauty. 【点评】 本文以谚语“漂亮不能当饭吃”为题，直截了当地亮出了自己的观点。全文以“美德胜于美貌”为主线，阐述了“追求外形的美而放弃了内在的美不是真正的美”。文章观点鲜明，结构严谨，用词恰当，作者能运用谚语来强化自己的观点，有较强的英语语言组织能力和表达能力。 本文有两处语言错误： Id rather prefer应改为 Id prefer。would rather表示“宁愿”，prefer也是“

10、宁愿”的意思，两者不能连用在一起。 belong to 改为belonging to，在此处作定语。*结束 (201*内江、广安模拟)Last Saturday we had a party at home. Dads friends come1._along with their families. Since Mom was not at home, Dad2._and I had to prepare everything, so it turned out such a miracle3._that they did make it! Everything went perfectly

11、 fine.4._A lot of kids who came that day. I had the most wonderful time5._with Steven. It was just amazed to find someone so much6._like me. We had a lot of things by common. The time seemed7._short to me, and I wished we could have had some more time8._to continue the conversation. Hopeful were goi

12、ng on9._a trip together next summer, and also summer after next.10._答案与解析：1comecame整篇文章为一般过去时，应把come改为came。23sobut前后语境为转折关系，应把so改为but。4theywe根据上文可知作者使用了第一人称，此处指作者和父亲俩人，因此应把they改为we。5去掉who本句为简单句，去掉who。6amazedamazing主语为it，应用amazing作表语，表示“令人惊异的”。7byin固定短语have.in common表示“有相同之处”。8去掉hadwish后的宾语从句用虚拟语气，谓语

13、应用情态动词动词原形，因此把had去掉。9HopefulHopefully副词hopefully放在句首，表示“希望”副词作状语修饰整个句子。10在also后加thenext summer指明年夏天，the summer after next指后年夏天。*结束近几年的高考考试说明中,关于高考英语书面表达评分标准第五档(很好)中有这样一段话:应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。这就是说,学生仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型,不能体现出较强的语言运用能力,即使表达无语法错误,也不能得高分;相反有些错误,目的在有意识地使用复杂结构或较高级词汇

14、,也不扣分,仍属于最高档次。高考把写作要求提到了这样一个高度,有利于反映学生的水平层次,有利于指导教学。原来要点完整,语言无误,行文连贯,表达清楚的标准就落后了。在平时的教学中,训练最多的,学生们也最习惯的是五种基本句型:主语+谓语;主语+谓语+宾语;主语+谓语+间接宾语;主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语;主语+谓语+宾语+补足语。用这些句型组织的句子单一、无生气,不能给人一种含金量高的审美享受。客观形势对我们提出了高难度的要求,我们怎样才能对书面表达进行科学的操作?怎样才能控制写作呢?本文拟就这一课题进行讨论,希望能给学生以启迪,调动积极性,开拓思维,培养创新精神。首先,在整篇文章中,避免只使

15、用一两个句型,要灵活运用各种语法结构,使文章有声有色。一、改变时态例:The bell is ringing now.(一般)There goes the bell! (高级)二、改变语态例:People suggest that the conference be put off.(一般)It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级)三、使用不定式例:He is so kind that he can help me.(一般)He is so kind as to help me.(高级)四、使用过去分词例:She walked ou

16、t of the lab and many students followed her.(一般)Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.(高级)Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten.(一般)Once seen, it can never be forgotten.(高级)五、使用V-ing形式例:When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.(一般)On arriving/his arrival, please give me an e-mai

17、l.(高级)If the weather permits, Ill come tomorrow.(一般)Ill come tomorrow, weather permitting.(高级)六、使用名词性从句例:It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up.(一般)The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.(高级)I happened to have met him.(一般)It happened that I had met him.(高级)To his surprise, th

18、e little girl knows so many things.(一般)What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(高级)七、使用定语从句例:The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.(一般)The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(高级)八、使用状语从句例:I wont believe what he says.(一般)No mat

19、ter what he says, I wont believe.(高级)If you come back before six oclock, you can go out.(一般)You can go out on condition that(provided that) you come back before six oclock.(高级)If she doesnt agree, what shall we do?(一般)Supposing that she doesnt agree, what shall we do?(高级)*结束高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）5. 根据图画写

20、一篇短文，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。 妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩；儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理。要求：1不仅要表述出图中的内容，还要发表自己的感想；2字数：100字左右；3开头已给出。One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Dont do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” A few days la

21、ter, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be. And Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I did something about the bottle, you would think that it was I who knocked it over.”I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to th

22、eir children. They should not only care for their childrens health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?*结束

23、【3】Baloney is a kind of sausage that many Americans eat oftenThe word also has another meaning in EnglishIt is used to describe somethingusually something someone saysthat is false or wrong or foolishBaloney sausage comes from the name of the Italian city，BolognaThe city is famous for its sausage，a

24、mixture of smoked，spiced meat from cows and pigsBut，boloney sausage does not taste the same as beef or pork aloneSome language experts think this different taste is responsible for the birth of the expression baloneyBaloney is an idea or statement that is nothing like the truthin the same way that b

25、aloney sausage tastes nothing like the meat that is used to make itBaloney is a word often used by politicians to describe the ideas of their opponentsThe expression has been used for yearsFifty years ago，a former governor of New York State，Alfred Smith，criticized some claims by President Franklin R

26、oosevelt about the successes of the Roosevelt administrationSmith said，“No matter how thin you slice is，it is still baloney”A similar word has almost the same meaning as baloneyIt even sounds almost the sameThe word is blarneyIt began in Ireland about 1600The lord of Blarney castle，near Cork，agreed

27、to surrender the castle to British troopsBut he kept making excuses for postponing the surrenderAnd，he made them sound like very good excuses，“This is just more of the same blarney”The Irish castle now is famous for its Blarney stoneKissing the stone is thought to give a person special powers of spe

28、echOne who has kissed the Blarney stone，so the story goes，can speak words of praise so smoothly and sweetly that you believe them，even when you know they are false1Whats the main idea of the text？(No more than 5 words) 2According to Americans，what does baloney refer to？(No more than 8 words) 3What d

29、o you know about the lord of Blarney castle，near Cork？(No more than 6 words) 4Why do people kiss the Blarney stone？(No more than 6 words) 【参考答案】1The other meaning of baloney2It is something false or wrong or foolish3He was a clever man4To get special powers of speech*结束 （广东卷）写作(共两节，满分40分第二节：读写任务阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought he would be able（） to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.He w