届高三新题英语高考复习考点10 书面表达解析版.docx

1、届高三新题英语高考复习考点10 书面表达解析版考点10 书面表达Writing 1（武威六中2021届高三一轮复习过关考试）假定你是校乒乓球队队长李华，在学校网站上获知你校国际班学生Peter发帖寻找一位同学做乒乓球教练。请你给他写一封自荐邮件，内容包括：1. 自我介绍；2. 自荐理由；3. 表达期望。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,_Yours truly, Li Hua【范文】Dear Peter,I have learned from the school website that you ar

2、e looking for a classmate to be a table tennis coach. Im writing to recommend myself to be your coach.I am interested in table tennis when I was young. I began to practise table tennis when I was 5 years old. I took part in the table tennis competition when I was in Grade 5, where I won the first pr

3、ize. And I am outing and helpful too. Besides, I can speak fluent English, which means we shall have no difficulty in communication.I think I have all the qualities of being a table tennis coach. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li HuaWriting2（2020江西临川一中高三二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack听说你大学准备攻

4、读“中医药学”专业，发邮件向你询问原由，请你回复邮件。内容包括：1. 中医简介；2. 家庭影响；3. 个人愿望。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：中医药学 Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM)Dear Jack,_Yours,Li Hua【范文】Dear Jack,Thanks for your letter! Im very glad to share with you my idea about furthering my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine at universi

5、ty in reply to your email.With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit. I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction an

6、d hope. So Ive made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. I believe itll turn out an excellent cause for me to pursue.Best wishes.YoursLi Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封信向朋友解释自己大学选择中医药学的原因。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构：总分要求：1.回信的目的2. 1）中医简介（中医的历史，中医对国人的或世界的影响

7、）2）家人的影响（祖辈行医，耳濡目染）3）个人愿望（成为出色的中医） 第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be glad to do /diagnose / cure illness / made up ones mind to do/ major in /turn out 第三步：连词成句I am glad to share with you why I choose TCM as my major when I attend university.With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose

8、 and cure illness.It has left a long-lasting influence on Chinese even people from other countries.As you know, my father, grandfather and great grandfather are all doctors.I am deeply impressed when watching them treating their patient, and feel really happy and proud when the patients get well. As

9、 if they were cured by myself.Ive made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. I believe after some studying and training, I will turn out a good doctor.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词和从句）1. 表并列补充关系：whats more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not the least2. 表转折对比关系：however/

10、 on the contrary/ but/ although/ in spite of/ despite/ on the one hand, one the other hand/ as for3. 表文章结构顺序：first of all/ firstly/ second/ and then/ finally/ in the end/ at last4. 表因果关系：because/ so/ as/ thus/ therefore/ as a result第五步：修改润色(加入从句)【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用

11、了一些主从复合句，例如：With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit.中的which引导非限定性定语从句；I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction

12、 and hope. 中的whenever让步状语从句。范文看似短小，却言简意赅。尤其是第二自然段，总共4句话，但包括了题干要求的内容。几处长句子的使用显示了考生扎实的语言基础和表达能力。Writing3（2020湖北黄州高三二模）假定你是李华，想邀请你的新西兰朋友Kevin参加你校将要举行的“劳动周”相关活动。请给他写 封邮件，内容包括：1.活动时间；2. 活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；3. 活动意义.参考词汇：Labour Week劳动周注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【范文】Dear Kevin,I feel extremely delig

13、hted to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week. Im writing to invite you to experience the great activities.The Labour Week will start on June 10th and last for five days, when we will hold various activities. To beautify our school, we will pla

14、nt trees that are definitely good for our physical and mental well-being. Moreover, its a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus cleaner and more fascinating. There is also a labor knowledge competition which is so rewarding that we cant afford to miss it.As for the

15、 significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly. Our awareness of labour can be developed. Besides, we will learn to cherish and respect the fruits of peoples work.Looking forward to your favorable reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇写作属于应用文，主要是邀请新西兰的朋友Kevin参加学校举行的劳动周活动。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应

16、为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。写作要求：1. 活动时间；（the time of this activity）2. 活动内容（如：校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；（the content of this activity）3. 活动意义。（the significance of this activity）第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）inform; relevant; upcoming; various; beautify; definitely; physical and mental; as for the s

17、ignificance; undoubtedly; cherish第三步：连词成句I want to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week.Im writing to invite you to experience the great activities.We will plant trees that are definitely good for our physical and mental well-being.We will hol

18、d various activities to support our Labour Week. Its a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way.Sorting garbage can make our campus cleaner and more fascinating.As for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly.Our awareness of labour can be developed.We will learn to cherish an

19、d respect the fruits of peoples work.在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1. 文章的结构顺序：劳动周具体时间和地点；劳动周的活动内容；劳动周的实际意义。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰.第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，

20、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。范文开头I feel extremely delighted to inform you that our school will hold some relevant activities during the upcoming Labour Week. 既使用了一个宾语从句，又开门见山的点出了写作的主题和目的。此外范文中形容词和副词用得特别好，比如extremely和definitely等，都能够表达出作者的情感。 还用到了非谓语结构Moreover, its a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendl

21、y way, making our campus cleaner and more fascinating. 文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。Writing 4（2020渝中重庆巴蜀中学高三月考）你是李华，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你需要写一 封邮件，包含以下两点:1. 提出你觉得需要改进的地方；2. 需要改进的原因。徒步活动主题:发现重庆时间:5月1日下午2点路线:从人民大礼堂(the Great Hall of the People)到解放碑、(Liberation Monument),全程徒步。注意:1. 词数100左

22、右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,_Yours sincerely,【 范文】Dear Sir/Madam,Im really excited to hear that a hiking activity from the Great Hall of the People to the Liberation Monument is going to be held on the Labor Day holiday.However, there may be further improvement of the schem

23、e youve posted on the campus website,as Id like to point out.First of all, the hike needs to be planned in more details as the information released online appears to be too general. As participants, we need to know how long the hike will last.In the mean time, we are willing to have a clearer pictur

24、e of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity.Only by doing so are you likely to make it a success.Whats more, I suggest the hike be more suited to the theme “Discover Chongqing” through additional activities. I propose an introduction of the architecture on Chaotianmen Sq

25、uare.By appreciating the artistic style of the landmark, we can gain a deeper insight into the prosperity of our city.All in all, if the hike is organized in more details and in a more supportive way, it is sure to succeed.I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity

26、a great success.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求李华写一封邮件，对徒步活动方案提出修改意见。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：建议信人称：第一人称时态：一般将来时；一般现在时要点： 1.听说学校徒步方案，指出有待改进。2.需改进的地方和具体原因。第二部 列要点 写提纲Para. 1 be excited to hear that; is going to be held; further improvement; post on the campus websitePara. 2 plan in details; have a clearer picture of sth; security precautions; medical support; propose an