英语 中考英语书面表达点解析Word版附答案.docx

1、英语 中考英语书面表达点解析Word版附答案【英语】 中考英语书面表达点解析（Word版附答案）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1书面表达同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。内容提示：暑假计划学习博览群书；学习技能 （或自拟一点）生活健康饮食；坚持锻炼 （或自拟一点）其它热爱公益；亲近自然 （或自拟一点）注意：1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Dear classmat

2、es,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. Thats all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.First, Id like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help

3、 me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think its necessary for me to learn at least one skill. Im interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat mo

4、re fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. Whil

5、e travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. Thats all. Thank you.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如

6、Id like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。而First, Id like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Thi

7、rd, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用，既使短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2 假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一

8、封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。To: lihua china. comFrom: bill006 america. comSubject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?What is your dream job? W

9、hy do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。Dear Bill,Thank

10、you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get o

11、n well with children. Besides, the schools environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell

12、me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bill提出问题，结束全文。【点睛】本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。3

13、书面表达假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。1位置:中国东部,安做省南部: 2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽3.景点:山和古村落: 4.文化:茶、黄梅戏5.建议提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera注意:1.词数80-1002.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are plan

14、ning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is

15、 in autumn, because its really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese

16、culture, dont forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. Whats more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. Its easy to understand and wont let you down!Welcome to Anhui! Im looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你的家乡安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲

17、，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。短文应使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并注意上下文的连贯。另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，以及使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游，并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特

18、点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后具体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等，并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰，层次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，还有一些好的句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because its really cool and you can

19、 just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、Whats more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. Its easy to understand and wont let you down!、Im looking forward to seeing you here!等。4书面表达根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文（80词左右）文章内容

20、必须包含所给的所有信息开头已给出，不计入总词数内容要点：过去现在1旧房1高楼2河水肮脏2河水清澈（clean and clear）3步行、骑自行车上班3乘公交车、小汽车上班4道路狭窄（narrow）4街道宽阔（wide），干净整洁5居住条件（livingconditions）差5生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适6你的感想（写两到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn

21、 the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings i

22、n our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great chang

23、es in my hometown. But I think its still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think its still impo

24、rtant to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5书面表达难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgett

25、able Middle School Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。注意:1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;2.短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺;3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school lif

26、e is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big fam

27、ily. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didnt do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didnt have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better.

28、 I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中 not only but also，help a lot，share happiness and sadness