英语九年级上册英语书面表达提高训练.docx

1、英语九年级上册英语书面表达提高训练（英语）九年级上册英语书面表达提高训练一、英语书面表达1 如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以Bike-sharing为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。要点提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力）Take exerciseProblems Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolenAdvice Civilized

2、（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of注意：1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Bike-sharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. _【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-shar

3、ing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. Its known that it has many advantages. So its enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, its very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besid

4、es, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, its helpful to peoples health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题） In my opinion, everyone should try to be ci

5、vilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）【解析】【详解】这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: Its known that it has many advantages.，Fi

6、rst of all, its very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。【点睛】本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。2亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多

7、的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorfu

8、l junior middle school life is coming to an end. Im glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well wit

9、h our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is，Im glad to，Our campus is，Our

10、 teachers teach us等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学

11、习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study._【答案】Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I

12、had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset. How to make good use of our time? I think

13、 we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how t

14、o do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词结构Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each

15、 thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句

16、式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4（题文） 书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定时做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；2. 词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数） 3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时emergency 紧急情况 ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for at

17、tending our robot show. Now Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing

18、 at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. Whats more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.Im sure my new invention will be

19、a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，Id like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，

20、deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

21、它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5书面表达你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实

22、姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, _【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvanta

23、ges.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding scho

24、ol. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。【详解】写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下

25、关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语

26、，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。6书面表达根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（lucky money）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？请结合自己的实际写一篇文章，词数 80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下：1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途；2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议（至少 3 点）；3. 呼吁大家节约用钱，把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。【答案】Every Spri

27、ng Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we

28、 can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our