高考英语精选考点专项突破27 书面表达提纲类.docx

1、高考英语精选考点专项突破27 书面表达提纲类专题27 书面表达（提纲类）1.【2018天津卷】书面表达（满分25分）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。学科%网（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 t

2、he World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you. _Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【参考范文1】Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July so as to promote the development of rob

3、otics. What I would like to stress is that it is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know youve just won first prize in the Robotics competition held in your institute and have shown great talent in designing robotics. Therefore, you are the

4、 most suitable person, I suppose.The training schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions. I will send its details to you by e-mail. I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perf

5、ect. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【参考范文2】Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobb

6、y Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice becaus

7、e you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【解析】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2.介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获

8、奖； 4告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。2.2017天津卷假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近

9、况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。1简要介绍自己的学习和生活；2告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等)；3希望她有机会重访天津。注意： 1.词数不少于100；2可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National GamesDear Mrs Green，Im so glad to hear from you. _ _ Yours，Li Jin【解析】 首先，内容要点要全，三个要点都要包含：(1)介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告诉她你作为第十三届全运会志愿者所做的准备；

10、(3)希望她重访天津。其次，要准确并恰当地使用词汇和各种复合句。注意使用定语从句，非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要注意时态的正确运用。第三，要注意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。注意使用一些表示连接和转折的词。最后，要注意一下卷面整洁，书写工整。【答案】Dear Mrs Green,_Im so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. Im very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken

11、 English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well. I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be

12、 a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin. I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again. Yours，Li Jin3. 【2016全国新课标I】书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外

13、贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am

14、planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I dont know if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter, hoping y

15、ou can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【试题分析】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌

16、。【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an a

17、pplication and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。4.【2016全国新课标II】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1主题：环境保护； 2展览时间； 3投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow.注意： 1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High Scho

18、ol student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember

19、you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours Lihua【解析】试题分析：本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学

20、生摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要对：1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及串联过渡用语；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，并在力所能及的范围之内使用复合句或者谚语，增加获得高分的可能性。【名师点睛】本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一

21、直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.时间状语从句. theme the last time you visited our school.条件状语从句If you want to join.；等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。考点：考查半开放作文5.【2016全国新课标III】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；

22、3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday mornin

23、g? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去书向Bob道歉，使用第一

24、人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that well have more time to read and select books；条件句If its convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合

25、，使内容更加丰富。考点：书信类作文【名师点睛】题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。6. 【2016北京】书面表达（共两节，35 分） 第一节（15分） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 该人物是谁； 2. 该人物的主要贡献； 3. 该人物对你的影响。 注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 De

26、ar Jim, _ _Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Its great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduc

27、ed modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：题材新颖，要求介绍中国历史人物，内容包括喜欢

28、的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于50词，使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。亮点说明：范文使用了词组hear from, As for, In fact和搭配 inspire sb to do sth等，丰富了作文内容；范文注意上下文的语意连贯。 考点：应用文写作【名师点睛】题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。7.【2016天津】书面表达（满分25分）假设你是晨光中学的

29、学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。（1） 回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；（2） 谈谈收获或感情；（3） 表达祝愿语期望。注意：（1） 词数不少于100；（2） 可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；（3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends,How time flies! Thank you.【答案】One possible version: Dear_friends,_How_time_flies! Two weeks went by before we realized that our exchange activities ende