完整版上海中考真题初中英语作文.docx

1、完整版上海中考真题初中英语作文上海中考英语备考训练上海中考英语备考训练：写作一， 一等文要求，1，结构三段式：第一段：简单明了，开门见山。如我们想表达小强很强壮，直接说XQisextremelystrong.观点明确，一句足矣。第二段：分析为什么他强壮。每天吃10顿饭，Hehastenmealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。每天运动2小时，Hedoesexercise2hoursaday!详举做了什么运动。第三段：结论，与第一段照应，但不能完全照，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，HowstrongandrobustXQis!Ihopetobehimoneday!2，内容和要点：话题t

2、opic必须符合题意，提示的要点必须写全，一个都不能漏写。确定主题、要点是要发表观点，还是举出例子。如果有具体提示，写作就等于翻译，把提示内容变换句式翻译到位，全面切题。如果没有提示，自已提炼，找到主题,跟主旨无关的话不要写。3，逻辑合理：递进：first,second,third,finally,tobeginwith,firstofall,inaddition,whatsmore,moreover,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,thelastbutnottheleast。转折：but,yet,however,asfarasIamconcerned,inthemea

3、ntime。总结：inaword,allinall,inconclusion。4，语法和亮点：单词拼读和语法必须准确，不可以有错误。在此根底上，用几个有难度的词汇，编几个高级的句型。一般词汇和简单句型要限量用，不可占字太多。二， 三段十句话：1，三段布局：高考作文题型多样,有命题作文和材料作文。材料作文是根据给出的书面材料,按要求作文。话题主要三方面：学生学习生活，学生日常生活，社会热点现象。无论哪种文体：记叙文、议论文，夹叙夹议文，应用文、说明文、图片描述文都可以用三段法：引入，具体，结尾。记叙文：A.背景介绍：时间、地点、人物、事件。B.故事开展经过结果。C.结局和感受。议论文：A.发表观

4、点。B.论据理由。C.结论照应论点。图片文：A.描述图片内容，提炼观点。 B.论据理由。C.结论照应论点。日记写法同一般记叙文或议论文。通知，书信，演讲稿在引入局部写话题，意图，主题；在具体局部写活动要求，具体内容，观点陈述；在结尾局部写活动时间、地点、联系方式、结语、总结、希望或号召。2，十句成篇：Passage1,1Topic话题2Thesis论点Passage2,3Transition过渡句4Argument1论据11/10上海中考英语备考训练5Detail1论据1的支持句6Argument2论据27Detail2论据2的支持句8Argument3论据39Detail3论据3的支持句Pa

5、ssage310 Conclusion总结以上为议论文的三段十句结构。根据具体情况可调整加减。其它文体在此根底上略作修改即可。三， 具体各类题型写法：1，描述图片类：P1图片描述,图片主旨。P2过渡句加论据和支持句。视字数调整论据和支持句个数。P3总结。2，夹叙夹议文：写法1，P1话题记叙或描述。P2观点或感想，写 2个论据和2个支持句。P3总结。写法2，P1话题和观点。P2事件起因、经过、结果以证明论点。P3总结说明事件，再次证明话题和论点。写法3，P1回忆记述事件。P2感受、观点。P3总结。3，两主旨议论文：有时需要写两个主旨，如第一个为什么喜欢读书，另一个喜欢读什么书。或第一个水为什么珍

6、贵，另一个怎么节约水。可以分成两大局部写：P1 话题、一个论据和支持句。 P2过渡句、另一个论据和支持句。 P3 总结4，建议型议论文：写法1，倾向建议：提出一个问题，简单说明该问题，并针对此问题给出多个建议：P1写信目的，一个问题。P2针对这个问题假设干建议。P3总结希望。写法2，问题建议并重：提出两个问题，然后给出相应的两条建议：P1写信目的。P2提两个问题并说明。P3针对两问题给两建议。写法3，倾向于问题：提出一个问题，详细阐述问题并分析原因，结尾给出一个建议。P1写信目的。P2提出一个问题，原因及危害等。P3建议、总结。5，说明文和纯事实新闻报导：同纯记叙文，不涉及议论，只将起因、经过

7、、结果写清即可。重事实轻情义。四， 写作四步骤：1，审题：主题，体裁，人称，时态，内容要点。在试卷中画出要点。2，框架：打草稿：一定要打草稿，正式写作再梳理锤炼。3，成文：一要凝练，二要变化。使用过渡词、从句、不同句型和词组搭配。4，检查：内容要点，语法错误。名词查单复数和冠词，动词查时态语态和主谓一致。变换句式：不用过于简单的结构。总之：认真审题,提炼要点;紧扣主题,扩词成句;表述准确,连句成文;通篇检查,确保无误。五，英文文章开头有两种可以选择：1，每段开头空两格，四或五个字符，段落之间不空行。标题和文章间不用空行。2，每段开头顶格写，段落之间空行。标题和文章间不用空行。两种都可以，但是空

8、格与不空格不能混用，第一种用的比拟多。2/10上海中考英语备考训练上海中考英写作：真范文2021VI.Writing(作文)(共20分)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopicMyprogress(以“步了,写一信不少于60个的短文,点符号不占格)你在生活或中一定取得不少步,比方生活枝能的得、学方法的掌握、良好慣的养成。取其中一个方面,合自身,一你是如何取得一步的。注意:短文中不得出任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否不予分。)Thefollowingisforreferenceonly(以下表达供参考)usedtodo/be trymybesttodomakeprogressi

9、n(doing)MyProgressIusedtobepoorinEnglish,especiallyinspeakingEnglishasIwastooshytoopenmymouth.ThingshavebeenchangedsinceIhadanewEnglishteacherwhowasverykindandtoldmethecorrectwaytolearnEnglish.Withhisencouragement,Igainedconfidenceandbegantospeakalittle.Inthemeantime,IspentmoretimeinEnglishlearninga

10、ndtrymybesttoimprovemyEnglish.IlistenedtoEnglishbroadcastingandimitatedthepronunciation.IalsowenttoEnglishCornertopracticemyspokenEnglishwithforeignerseverySunday.Stepbystep,IhavemadesubstantialprogressinlearningEnglish.NotonlycanIreadEnglishnovelsnow,butalsoIcanspeakEnglishfluently.Asaproverbsays,

11、“Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartinit. Imyprogress.2021VII.Writing作文共20分Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic “Theresalwayshope以“常希望，写一篇不少于 60个的短文，点符号不占格面困惑的候、化的候、感挫的候、遭遇逆境的候 来自内心的持、他人的帮助、社会的关和科技的展等，能人常希望。取一个方面你的理解可合自身或他人的。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly以下表达供参考getoutofdifficulty give ahandneverlosehopeThe

12、resAlwaysHopeDifficultiesandfailuresareunavoidableinourlives,However,Ibelievetherealwayshopeaslongasyoudon tgiveup.IusedtobepoorinEnglish.Thegrammar,thevocabulary,thepronunciationandwritingwerecontinuouslytorturingme.Ialmostlostmyheartandthoughtaboutgivingup.Luckily,Imetagoodteacherwhowassokindthath

13、espenthourshelpingmetocorrectmymistakesandteachingmeexcellentmethods.Healwaysgavemegenerouspraiseforanyminorprogressofmine.Withhisencouragement,Igainedconfidenceandtriedmybesttoovercomeallthedifficulties.Daybyday,Ihavemadesubstantialprogress.NotonlycanIreadEnglishnovelsnow,butalsoIcanspeakEnglishflu

14、ently.Asanoldsayinggoes, “Wherethereisawill,thereisaway. Nomatterhowdifficultthingsseemtobe,let scherishhopeandnevergiveup.3/10上海中考英语备考训练2021Writing作文Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Imready以“我准好了，写一篇不少于60个的短文，点符号不占格你明天一定有着美好的憧憬此，你已做好了哪方面的准？合你的或特等，取一个角度具体你是如何做准的independentbegoodatresponsibletakepartin

15、hardworking ithelpsmeto ImReadyWhenIwasyoung,mymotherusuallyreadbooksformeassoonasshehadtime.IwasattractedbythefascinatingworldofstoriessoImadeadeterminationtobecomeawriter.Toachievethedream,Ihavebeendoingmybestallthetime.Firstofall,IpaygreatattentiontomyCompositionclasses.Furthermore,Ijoinschoolwri

16、tinggroupandtakepartinwritingcontest,whichmakesmepracticealotinwriting.Lastbutnottheleast,Ikeepconnectionwithafamouswriterwhohelpsmetoimprovemywritingabilitysubstantially.Allinall,throughhardworkingIamgoodatwritingnow.HowhappyIwillbewhenmybooksthatwillenrichchildren slifearepublishedsomeday! Ihopemy

17、dreamwillcometrue.I mready.ImreadyIalwayssaytomyself:Imready!beforeacompetitionoraspeech,thoughitseemsthatIwillneverbereadyforthemabsolutely.Iamready!,whichmakesmesoconfidentthatIcanpayallofmyattentiontowhatIdoefficiently.Ofcourse,asasayingsays:Practicemakesperfect.Essentialpreparationisnecessary.We

18、shouldmakeeveryefforttoprepareforwhatwedo.Saytoourselves: Im，readynditwillhelpusplayourbestcard！2021 Writing(作文)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic “Iwanttoinvent_(以“我想要明_，写一篇不少于60个的短文，点符号不占格)注意：1、在答上将目充完整。2、短文中不得出任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否不予分。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.以(下表达供参考)Itcanbeusedto Itwillbeexciting/n

19、ecessary/helpfulto IWanttoInventaFamilyRobotDoctorIwanttoinventafamilyrobotdoctorbecauseitisveryhelpfultous.Firstofall,afamilyrobotcancureillnessesforpeopleathomeimmediatelyafteryoufeelsickorgethurt,whichisveryconvenientandefficient,especiallyinemergencysituations.What smore,allasknow,wenowadayshosp

20、italsarealwaysoccupiedbypatientswhoareanxioustobetakencareassoonaspossible,sofamilyrobotdoctorscanreducethepressureofhospitalandalleviatethepatients anLastbutnottheleast,withthehelpofarobotdoctor,peoplecangetdulyadviceforhealthydietandliveabetterlife.Inaword,afamilyrobotdoctorissubstantiallyusefulfo

21、roursociety.Inordertoachievemydreamofinventingafamilyrobotdoctor,Iwilldomybestandlearnhard.IWantToInventAFamilyDoctorRobot4/10上海中考英语备考训练Iwanttoinventafamilydoctorrobot,whichcanbeusedtocuretheillnesswithoutgoingoutoftheirhome.AsfarasI mconcerned,itwillbeextremelyhelpfulandusefulbecauseofthefollowingr

22、easons:First,youcanseethedoctorimmediatelyathomewhenyoufeelsickorgethurt.Itcansaveusalotoftime,especiallyinemergencysituations.Furthermore,hospitalstodayarealwaysfilledwithpatients,noteveryonecanbetakengoodcareof.However,withthehelpofourrobotdoctors,youcantalktoyourpersonaldoctoronetoonewheneveryouw

23、ant.Inshort,familydoctorrobotscanmakegreatcontributiontooursociety.IwanttoinventatimemachineAsastudentwhoisexperiencingunprecedentedmodernlifenowadays,Iwouldratherlearnaboutthehistoryandthefuturelifeofhumanbeingfromarealexperiencethanlearnfromatextbook.ThatswhyifIcanworkasagreatinventor,inventingati

24、memachinewillbemyfirstchoice.ThemostimportantusageofmytimemachinewillbevisitingoneofbestschoolsinTangDynasty.Asweallknow,TangDynastyisfamousforitsopen-mindededucation.Therefore,whenIvisittheschooloftheancientcity,Icannotonlytrydifferentwaysofstudyingbutcommunicatewithpeoplefromdifferentcountriesaswe

25、ll.Usingatimemachineisthemostvividwaytolearnhistoryasitisbotharecordofmankindandamirrorofpast,Iamlookingforwardtothedaywhenmytimemachinecomesout.2021.Writing(作文)Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic “Thistimenextyear“以(“明年此时为题，写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格 )你是否想象过，明年此时，你的生活会发生怎样的变化？你对自己或他人有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？Thefol

26、lowingsentencepatternsareforreferenceonly.(以下句型仅供参考)Ihopeto/Ihopethat.PerhapsIwill.Itwillbeexciting/necessary/terribleto.ThisTimeNextYearItisexcitingtoimaginewhatIwillbethistimenextyear.LifeischangeableandIwillbedifferent.First,Illbeaseniorstudentnextyear.IreallyhopeIcanachieveydramandattendmyfavori

27、tehighschool.Furthermore,IwillgetmanynewfriendswithwhomIwillspendmypreciousmoments.PerhapsIcantakepartinasummercampabroadasmyEnglishwillbegoodenoughtocommunicatewithforeigners.Ofcourse,torealizethewishes,hardworkingisstillnecessaryforme.Finally,itishightimethatIshouldhelpmymotherwithmorehousework.An

28、yway,Iwillbebetter,kinderandmorediligentthistimenextyear.Letmelookforwardtoit.ThistimenextyearItsexcitingtoimaginewhatthehappylifewillbelike.Atthistimenextyear,Iwillbeaseniorhighstudent,andIwillmakealotofnewfriends.IhopetobemoreindependentsothatperhapsIwillbetakingpartina5/10上海中考英语备考训练summercampabro

29、adtoimprovemyspokenEnglish.AlsoIwillhelpmyparentsdohouseworkinordertoknowhowtotakecareofmyselfwhenIamalone.Lifewillbetotallydifferent,butImreallylookingforwardtoit.ThistimenextyearLifeischangeable,andthatswhyeveryonelongsforthefuture,whichisfullofchallengeaswellashope.PerhapsIwillhaveachievedmygoalt

30、histimenextyear,studyinginaseniorhighschool.Despitethat,diligencewillbestillneededtomakemyselfgofurtherinEnglish.Basically,itisimportanttoconcentrateinclassandtakenotescarefully.Then,IwillbenefitfromreadingEnglishbooks.Whatismore,goingabroadisofgreatuseinimprovingmyoralEnglish.OnlyinthiswaycanIprogr

31、essinEnglishendlessly.MakeplansandgoforwhatIwant.AndIbelievewhenthechallengeiscoming,thehopeisalsoaroundthecorner.2021 Writing(作文)Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic “Howtoprotectmyself(“如何保自己，写一篇不少于60个的短文，点符号不占格。)提示：自我保是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。你在生活中怎行自我保(可合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面灾如何自救，如何防受或侵害，如何防止生活中的意外，等等 )。Phrasesforreference(以下短供参考)：Askforhelp calmdownindangerprevent.FromHowtoProtectMyselfLifeisprecious.ProtectingmyselfisthemostimportantthingtodowhenIamindanger.Thenifanearthquakehitsmycity,whatcanIdotoprotectmyself?Firstofall,Imustcalmdownaspanicisofnohelp.