英语英语书面表达专项习题及答案解析.docx

1、英语英语书面表达专项习题及答案解析【英语】英语书面表达专项习题及答案解析一、英语书面表达1近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。请分析空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染。要点提示：（1）我国空气污染的现象。（至少写2点）（2） 空气污染产生的原因。（至少写2点）（3）减少空气污染的措施。（至少写2点）要求：（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。（2） 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Dear students , As we all know , hazy days have been

2、 influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution_ 【答案】Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. F

3、or example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the peoples activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. Whats more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and

4、more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, whats more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。所提

5、供的材料中列举了近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better表示最好，后面跟动词原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽车。【高分句型二】Prot

6、ecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的职责。这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用的是动词的ing形式。2书面表达 初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。在校老师工作认真负责，充满爱心学生 （至少发挥两点）周末作业作业多舍弃爱好其它活动锻炼，电视愿望 （发挥一到两点）要求：1所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：2文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入

7、总词数；3语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our scho

8、ol life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. A

9、fter class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we cant afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketbal

10、l or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a res

11、ult，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

12、点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3书面表达同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。内容提示：暑假计划学习博览群书；学习技能 （或自拟一点）生活健康饮食；坚持锻炼 （或自拟一点）其它热爱公益；亲近自然 （或自拟一点）注意：1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻

13、译。2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. Thats all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.First, Id like to choo

14、se several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think its necessary for me to learn at least one skill. Im interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important.

15、 So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth

16、 a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That

17、s all. Thank you.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如Id like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。而First, Id like to choose several good books and rea

18、d them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用，既使短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词

19、、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4 假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。To: lihua china. comFrom: bill006 america. comSubject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me

20、about your dream job in the future?What is your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；3. 文中不得出现你的任何真

21、实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and

22、help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the schools environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good

23、university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bill提出问题，结束全文。【点睛】本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，B

24、esides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。5书面表达假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。1位置:中国东部,安做省南部: 2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽3.景点:山和古村落: 4.文化:茶、黄梅戏5.建议提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera注意:1.词数80-1002.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数Dear DaveI know that yo

25、u are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Provi

26、nce lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because its really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient vi

27、llages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, dont forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. Whats more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. Its easy to understand and wont let you down!Welcome to Anhui! Im looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你的家乡安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。短文应使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并注意上下文的连贯。另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，