雅思写作语料库.docx

1、雅思写作语料库雅思考试中常见的逻辑关系词1.表示并列关系likewise once again/once more in (much) the same way (manner) similarly/similar to vice versa also/as well as not only but also both and neither nor like/just like as/just as equally namely or and2.表示转折关系but/yet/whereas however otherwise in contrast (to) conversely though

2、/although nevertheless unlike in spite of despite on the contrary even if/even thoughon the one hand , on the other hand instead (of) not as as rather than even so vary different from differ fromwhile3.表示举例for example/for instance/e.g. such as that is/namely/i.e.in other words in general/in particul

3、ar a case in point is especially specifically4.表示因果关系as a result as a consequence consequently so/therefore/thus then for this reason hence accordingly because/because of owing to thanks to on account ofsince due to , for as this is why5.表示递进关系and then as well as again another also/too in addition (

4、to) additionally additional besides (that) moreover furthermore not only but also whats more6.表示让步关系though/although while even though/even if nevertheless in spite of/despite admittedly7. 表示总结in a word in brief in short above all all in all on the whole in general to conclude/in conclusion to sum up

5、/to summarize/in summary远程办公的利弊工作类：More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 越来越多的企业准许职员在家办公，是积极还是消极的?作家立场：尽管远程办公有其独有的利好，但是远程办公弊大于利，办公室办公更加适合大多数人。新东方网薛鹏思路拓展：远程办公的弊端：1. 比之远程办公，来自于办公室的限制和来自同事的压力能刺激员工更加努力地工作，提高工作效率。相反，远程办公者很

6、可能出现工作的懒散和懈怠，因此，效率较低。2. 在家办公，因为没有交流的对象，人会变得孤独和自闭，在社交方面力不从心，更没有办法建立良好的人脉资源，而这些对于人的职员生涯的发展恰恰是有利好的。相反，办公室办公才能培养健康的人际关系以及带来更多的工作乐趣，和谐的人际关系。远程办公的利好：1. 远程办公对于老板有利好，因为他可以节省经济成本，因为不用租用办公场地以及支付坐班工资，但是，这样的经营模式很难培养集体凝聚力，增强员工的归属感。2. 远程办公对于职员有利好，具体而言，他们不必往返，工作时间灵活，也许幸福感更强，因为远程办公有效地克服了地理的障碍以及节省了时间成本。但是，远程办公对于职员的自

7、律性要求极高，不是人人适合远程办公。新东方网薛鹏原创雅思写作语料库：1. telecommuting = tele-work n远程办公2. work at home = work form home v远程工作3. play the role of tele-commuters v 扮演远程工作者的角色拓展：telecommuting workers = telecommuters n远程办公者4. superior = business leader n 老板5. business owners = enterprisers n企业家6. could enhance the efficie

8、ncy of working v 可以提高工作效率7. provide sb with more flexible mode of working v给某人提供了更加灵活的工作方式8. A flexible work life is beneficial to ones health because home workers can relax for a while without the supervision of business owners if they are fed up with work. 弹性工作模式有益于身体健康， 因为没有企业主的监督，工作者可以在疲惫的时候休息下。

9、9. Long-termed telecommuting might contribute to poor working performance，laziness and even detrimental health condition. 长期的远程办公会导致工作懈怠，懒惰和不良的健康状况.10. Working at home minimize the opportunity of face-to-face communication. 远程办公减少了面对面交流拓展：minimize = diminish = reduce v 减少11. Tele-working exerts a ba

10、neful influence on maintenance of the close relationship among the colleagues or the cultivation of good teamwork spirit 远程办公不利于维持同事间的友谊以及培养良好的团队合作精神。解析：the cultivation of good teamwork spirit团队精神的培养12. On the side of employers, with many of the employees telecommuting, they no longer need to invest

11、 large sums of money renting spacious offices or paying office salary. 对于老板来说，如果很多的员工远程办公，他们就不用花钱来租宽敞的办公室以及支付坐班工资。13. As for plenteous employees, they no longer take the trouble to commute between their homes and offices every day. 对于员工来说，他们不再用费力地每天在家和办公室之间往返了.拓展：as for = on the side of = on the par

12、t of 对于来说14. Tele-commuters could have more free time at their own disposal 远程办公者有更多的时间可以自己支配。点评：推荐细节展开，远程办公者可以做自己喜欢的事情，陪伴家人，锻炼身体，发展个人爱好。15. The constraints in offices and pressure from colleagues can motivate the employees to work harder办公室的限制和来自同事的压力能刺激员工更加努力地工作.解析： constraint n.抑制，拘束16. Home work

13、ers may fail to associate and communicate with people around them effectively 家庭办公者也许不能和周围人的有效地交往和交流。17. Telecommuters, to large extent, tend to become socially inadequate 远程办工者在很大程度上会在社交方面变得力不从心解析：become socially inadequate v 在社交方面变得力不从心18. Working from home requires good self-discipline and time-m

14、anaging capacity 远程办公需要自律性和时间管理能力19. In comparison with working at home，office working enjoys more glaring merits. 对比在家办公，办公室办公优势明显。20. Tele-commutating is not universally suitable for the vast majority of employees 远程办公不是普遍适合大多数职员。解析：is not universally suitable for v不是普遍适合政府是否应该给教育和医疗买单政府类：Some peo

15、ple say that the government should pay for the health care and education of its citizens， to what extent to you agree or disagree? 有人认为政府应该给公民的教育和医疗买单, 你是否同意这个观点?相关题目：Some people say that the government should pay for the health care and education of its citizens, but other people say that it is not

16、 the governments responsibility. Discuss the two opinions and give your views. 有人认为政府应该给公民的教育和医疗买单，有人认为这不是政府的责任，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见?作家立场：政府应该给教育和医疗买单，同时，政府应该合理地分配教育和医疗预算。写作布局：让步反驳思路拓展：政府给教育医疗买单的理由：1. 公民是纳税人，有享受教育和医疗的权利。政府是人民利益的代表，普及免费的教育和医疗可以换利于民。2. 教育的发展可以培养更多的高端人才，提高国民的基本素质，增强一个国家在国际舞台的竞争力。3. 政府的医疗上的援助可

17、以使得很多患病的，同时来自贫困家庭的人得到及时的治疗，这有助于提高政府的威信，以及增强民众的民族自豪感。反对政府给教育和医疗买单的理由：1. 政府的财政有限，但是，要解决的民生问题是无穷的， 完全的教育医疗买单会增加政府的经济压力。2. 对比给教育和医疗买单，政府还要解决更重要的民生问题，例如改善环境和加强基础设施建设，这些更加需要政府经济援助。薛鹏原创语料库：1. free higher education = free college education n免费的高等教育2. medical care = medical treatment n 医疗3. popularize v 普及4.

18、 subsidize = sponsor = finance v 提供经济援助5. provide sb with financial aid v给某人提供经济援助6. to do sth is highly recommended 做 是被高度推荐的7. it t is the unshakable obligation of the government to do sth 做 是政府不可推卸的责任8. enjoy the basic right of 享受的基本权利9. properly allocate the educational and medical budget 合理地分配教

19、育和医疗预算10. Advanced education is the key factor in promoting the basic quality of a nations population 先进的教育是提高国民的基本素质的关键因素。11. Free medical care provided by the government should be deemed as a returned favor. 政府提供的免费医疗是还利于民的一种方式。12. enable those top students coming from humble background or remote

20、rural areas to receive fine education v 使得来自贫寒家庭背景或者偏远山区的优秀学生有机会接受精英教育13. help those ambitious but underprivileged young people to change their fates v帮助那些有梦想但是贫困的年轻人改变人生命运14. Every individual could become the beneficiary of a good education 任何人都可以成为良好教育的受益者。15. inject new life into the further deve

21、lopment and mightiness of a nation v给国家的进一步发展和强大注入新鲜活力16. Education is the price force of the productivity 教育是生产力发展的驱动力。17. Free education could cultivate more responsible and law-abiding citizens 免费教育可以培养更多有社会责任感，有守法意识的公民。18. will impose much pressure upon a nation economically v增加了国家的经济负担19. The g

22、overnment has more pressing social problems that need to render more concerns over 政府还有更多紧迫的民生问题需要优先考虑。20. to optimize the environment or to strengthen the construction of infrastructure v去改善环境或者加强基础设施建设。网络交易的个人和社会影响科技类：Nowadays, people perform their everyday tasks, such as banking, shopping as well

23、 as business transactions, without the need of meeting other people face to face. What are the possible effects of the phenomenon on the individual and the society as a whole? 现在很多人可以通过网络做很多事情，例如购物和交易，这对于个人和社会的影响是什么?薛鹏点评：本文按照题目指令写作，只需谈及网络交易对于个人和社会的利弊影响，无需重点提出解决策略，可选择在尾段简单提及。作家立场：本文将会分析网络交易对于个人和社会的影响

24、。新东方网薛鹏思路拓展：网络购物对于个人影响：1. 利好的方面：给人们的购物带来了便利，具体而言，网络购物可克服地理的障碍，节省了大量的时间，同时，网络购物价格低廉，选择丰富。2. 不利的方面：对于女性消费者而言，因为网络商品价格低廉，所以，很多人在打折期间囤积商品，这样，惯性消费反而会增加经济负担。网络购物对于社会影响：1. 利好的方面：网络交易平台的出现在一定程度解决了就业，很多年轻人可以开网店赚钱，这种工作方式时间灵活，2. 不利的方面：网络商品质量没有保障，消费者容易买到假货，经济受损。新形态的网络犯罪成为社会问题，例如，网络购物过程中，很多不法分子传播病毒，窃取密码，侵犯隐私，非法牟

25、利。新东方网薛鹏原创雅思写作语料库：1. The invention and popularity of the computer has profoundly revolutionized modern peoples option of consumption 互计算机的发明和普及深刻地改变了人们的购物选择。解析：revolutionize v极大改变2. On-line shopping has been boosting like the mushrooms after spring rains. 网络购物就像是雨后春笋般不断地增长。3. People have been debati

26、ng the pros of cons of cyber business transaction without reaching any definite agreement. 人们在思考网络交易的利弊，没有达成共识。4. In this essay，I will endeavor to examine the impacts brought about by this on-line business traction both on individual consumers and the society. 本文中，我将努力探究下网络交易带来的个人和社会影响。解析：endeavor t

27、o do sth v 努力做5. The merits of on-line shopping and on-line business prevail over its possible demerits. 网络购物和网络交易的利大于弊。解析：prevail over v 远远超过6. In comparison with the traditional shopping, the cyber shopping enjoys its unique advantages , which quite fit the young consumers taste. It is no necessar

28、y for consumers to take trouble to go outside, just click their mouse, the goods will be delivered to them. 和传统的购物相比，网络购物有其独特的优势，这更符合年轻消费者的口味。消费者不需要外出，只需点击一下鼠标，商品就会送到他们手中。7. Many youngsters like to spend their hardly earned money on their favorite goods 许多年轻人喜欢把辛苦赚到的钱花在他们喜欢的商品上。8. Problems, however,

29、 inevitably ensue 然而，问题随之而来。解析：ensue v跟着发生9. Excessive on-line consumption will impose much pressure upon some unwise consumers economically. 过度的网络消费对于非理性消费者施加了经济压力。10. Some young ladies are addicted to cyber consumption out of the reason of seizing the opportunities of discount 出于抓住打折的机会的目的，很多年前女孩网

30、络购物上瘾。11. Even worse，on-line consumption fraud has been agonizing many on-line shoppers 更加糟糕的是，在线的消费欺诈行为正在困扰很多在线买家。解析：agonize v使痛苦12. It is highly possible that consumers might be fooled into buying fake or illegal products. 消费者很有可能被欺骗购买虚假的非法的商品。13. Many on-line advertisements are full of flowery ph

31、rases and empty promises 很多的在线广告充满了花哨的宣传语以及空洞的承诺。14. Some law-breakers draw on the Internet to deliver the bait or disseminate virus in order to steal the password and reap fabulous profits illegally.一些不法分子利用互联网发送诱饵，传播病毒，窃取密码，非法牟利。解析：draw on the Internet v利用互联网解析：reap fabulous profits illegally v非法牟利15. On-line business transaction is a two-edged weapon which can be used equal