书面表达专项练习题及答案详解.docx

1、书面表达专项练习题及答案详解书面表达专项练习题及答案详解一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（浙江中考模拟） 书面表达假如你叫Tom。你们学校正在开设国际课程，下个月将有新的外教来学校上课。以下是外教Rhian的微信，请根据该内容回复一条90词左右的短信，可适当发挥。 Hey,Rhian.Thanks for your message._【答案】Hey,Rhian.Thanks for your message.I am writing to tell you about your things in last Wechat.There are fifty students in our class.M

2、ost of us like English.I think a good teacher is organized. A good teacher cares and is always ready for his or her students. A good teacher is always fair and respects their students. A good teacher always works hard.The weather is warm here.You may carry some sweaters with you.You neednt carry hea

3、vy clothes.We have somewhere interesting.So in your spare time you can go boating on the lake.After school you can play football with us.【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。假设你是Tom，学校正在开设国际课程，下个月将有新的外教来学校上课，要求你就外教Rhian的微信回复一条短信。动笔前一定要认真阅读外教Rhian的微信，所回的短信中对涉及的问题都要有所回应。根据内容可知本文时态主要是一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第二人称。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章

4、的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。2（四川中考模拟）书面表达现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已成为流行趋势，二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。1.方便，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。2.有很大的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。价格较便宜。3.买货容易退货难；实物和图片有差距。4.网络支付不安全。 _【答案】Now Internet Shopping is

5、more and more popular in the world.Its a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you cant buy in the shop. An

6、d they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You cant see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and dont like them, they sometimes a

7、re not easy to give back. Whats more, its not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】写作分析：本文需要写一篇小议论文，主题是网上购物，需要讨论到网上购物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章结构清晰，可以先总起陈述，然后用一段来描述优点，再用一段描述劣势和不足，最后一段收尾，这样的作文就会条理清晰，结构合理。具体来说，每个观点在陈述的时候要注意表达准确。写作亮点：首段总起介绍，挑明这篇作文的主题Internet Sho

8、pping。第二段开始描述优势，这里用到了“无论什么时候你喜欢/想要”（whenever you like）结构，在表达“.是开放的”也很准确，用了“be open”。比较级的应用也相对准确，例如cheaper。连词的使用也是亮点，besides意为“除此之外”。在谈到劣势的时候引用了俗语“Every coin has two sides.”，是个亮点。“Whats more”也被合理使用到了，意为“此外”，避免与besides重复，体现了文章语言的多样性。总体来说要点均被提及，语言准确富有活力。3（湖北中考模拟）书面表达Relationship and Emotional Attitude

9、（人际关系和情感态度）现在社会普遍对90后，00后有一些误解， 认为他们自私、无礼，所以不能很好地与 人沟通，那么，作为一名00后学生，你又是怎么看待这个问题的呢? 请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，分别列举至少三条优点和两条不足之处进行描述。要求：1.短文内容必须包括全部要点提示，可适当发挥。2.短文次数80-100。【答案】As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him

10、or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometime

11、s we cant express our opinions in proper ways; sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we cant communicate with others well. So its the most important for us to l

12、earn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；communicate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。4（山东中考模拟

13、）书面表达年济南市入选全国文明城市。为巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。倡导低碳骑自行车或步行上学，注意节约保护环境爱护花草，不乱扔垃圾 礼貌待人常说“谢谢”、“ 对不起”、“ 请”等礼貌语言帮助他人助人为乐，积极参加志愿者活动要求： 1.词数100个左右。2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。In order to build a civilized city, we stude

14、nts are supposed to behave well in our daily life. 【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. Wed better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags in

15、stead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldnt buy anything we dont need.Second，its our duty to protect the environment. We mustnt throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，its necessary for us to show good m

16、anners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. Im sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. Its important for us to take part in voluntary work.We s

17、hould try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】本文是一篇给材料作文。为使济南市入选全国文明城市，巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该规范自己的言行举止。要求根据所给出的提示，写一篇短文。根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称。本文给出的材料比较具体全面，考生需要用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，并可进行适当想象发挥。写作中注意理顺要点，防止漏写，注意表达的条理性、连贯性；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句

18、式、单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。5（北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，在你的帮助下，交换生Tom在中文演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，表达你的真诚祝贺，回忆他比赛时的表

19、现，以及你从他身上学到了什么。提示词语：wm，priZP,，speech competition，pronounce，practlce提示问题：Why do you congratulate Tom?What made him successfulin the competition?What can you leam from him?【答案】Dear Tom,I am very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech competition, so Im writing to congratulate

20、 you on your wonderful performance.You did a good job in the Chinese speech competition. You pronounced really well during your speech and your voice was beautiful. You spoke so fluently that we all felt proud of you. Whats more, we were surprised at your rich and meaningful contents.As your best fr

21、iend, I know you tried your best for the competition. You kept practicing your speech every day in order to make it better. I know it is important to keep on trying and never to give up. I hope I can be successful like you one day in the future.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各

22、个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：try ones best; Whats more, feel proud of； in order to； give up ；keep on trying. ； It is important to keep on trying and never to give up等；so ；sothat等连词的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。6（山东中考模拟）书面表达根据

23、所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述故事内容。提示词：plate 盘子， trash can 垃圾桶, color pen 彩笔， color 给上色， _【答案】After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the t

24、rash can. His brother stopped him and said, Why not turn them into paintings? Li Hua agreed happily. Li Zhong brought color pens. They discussed a minute. After a while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy.【解析】【详解】这是一篇看图作文，要求根据图画叙述一个故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，

25、人称为单数三人称，注意主谓一致问题和一些常见句式的应用，比如：He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong,；Why not turn them into paintings?等句式的应用，使短文内容表达丰富。此外，picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等词组的运用也让文章增色不少。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句

26、式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。切忌堆砌词语和句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子连贯流畅。7（天津中考模拟）假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校成功举办了“中华诗词朗诵比赛”，请用英语写一篇短文，介绍活动情况并呼吁更多的人参与这样的活动。内容要点如下：时间地点5月23号下午；学校礼堂。活动介绍每学期举办一次。今年又大获成功。同学们的精彩表现得到了大家的高度评价。八年级的王丽获一等奖。她极具朗诵天赋。每位获胜者赢得一张免费书展的票。呼吁参与的理由.（自拟1到2点）注意事项：（1）须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、行文连贯作、适当发挥；（2）词数在80个左右，文稿的开头已给出，不计

27、入总词数；参考词汇：中华诗词朗诵比赛 Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition;表现 performance; 高度评价think highly of ;朗诵recite;天赋gift;免费的freeIm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school. 【答案】Im Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school held a Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition on the afternoon of May 23rd. It was

28、held in the school hall. The competition is held every tram. This year it was a big success again. All the teachers and students thought highly of the students wonderful performances. Wang Li from Grade 8 won the first prize. She has a real gift for reciting .Each winner won a free ticket for the bo

29、ok show.I hope more people will take part in this activity and enjoy the beautiful Chinese culture【解析】【详解】本题是一篇给材料作文，介绍“中华诗词朗诵比赛”活动情况并呼吁更多的人参与这样的活动。短文用第一人称和第三人称，还会用到被动语态的句子。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文，其次考生可根据表格中的要点提示去写作。文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，并补充两条个人的观点。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要