高二作文增加句子结构答案.docx

1、高二作文增加句子结构答案增加语法结构一、 句子开头的技巧 （1） 以作状语的介词短语开头。如： 原We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. 改Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. （2） 以作状语的不定式短语开头。如： 原If you want to pass the exam， you should work very hard. 改In order to pass the exam，

2、you should work very hard. （3） 以作状语的副词开头。如： 原Students often stray into the habit of cheating on tests. 改Too often，students stray into the habit of cheating on tests. （4） 以宾语开头。如： 原Now that you would not listen to my advice and you laughed at my helps， you will have what you asked for. 改My advice you

3、 would not listen to；my helps you laughed at.Now you will have what you asked for. 二、巧用非谓语动词 （1） 使用现在分词。如： 原We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. 改After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playi

4、ng chess. （2） 使用过去分词。如： 原He was satisfied with the result. He decided to go on with a new experiment 改 Satisfied with the result， he decided to go on with a new experiment. 三、灵活使用不同句式 灵活运用省略句、倒装句、强调句、感叹句、with的复合结构等多种句式。 （1） 省略句。如： If so， victory will be ours. （2） 倒装句。如： 原He didnt finish his homework

5、 until the teacher came. 改Not until the teacher came did he finish his work. （3） 强调句。如： 原Ah Fu had saved my little sister bravely. 改It was brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister. （4） 分词短语。如： 原Many teenagers sit at their computers all day long and watch their favorite TV shows. 改Many teenagers si

6、t at their computers all day long， watching their favorite TV shows. （5） 由with或without引导的短语。如： He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. （6） 对比。如： When I play， I feel excited， and after it I feel relaxed. （7） there be结构。如： 原People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutri

7、tious food. 改There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food. 四、巧用各类从句 使用定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句等各类从句 （1）名词性从句。如： 原We had to stand there to catch the offender. 改What we had to do was （to） stand there， trying to catch the offender. （2）定语从句。如： 原My aunt bought me a book. The title o

8、f the book is All about The USA. 改My aunt bought me a book， whose title is All about The USA.此外，还需要注意长短句交替使用，体现表达节奏美。巧用连接成分1. 表起始的连接成分有：first of all， to begin with， in my opinion， according to， so /as far as ， as you know等。例如：In my opinion， Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. （江苏卷）

9、As far as I know， everyone is happy about this new arrangement of thing. （全国卷）2. 表递进的连接成分有：besides， whats more， moreover， furthermore， whats worse = to make things worse = worse still， further more， in addition to， still， even，等。例如： A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in. B

10、esides， we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest. Whats more， some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder. （福建卷）3. 表并列的连接成分有：also， as well （as）， or， eitheror， neithernor， not onlybut also， and， and then， bothand等。例如： This will do

11、a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning.（2004湖北卷）3. 表转折或对比的连接成分有：but， yet， however， while（而、却）， otherwise， on the other hand， on the contrary， in spite of， after all， in fact， as a mater of fact等。例如： I covered my ears with hands， but it was no use.

12、（广东卷） Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact， its only one stop. （全国卷） Some of us taught some drivers and conductors English， while others cleaned buses. （北京卷） On the other hand， 40% think that fees should be charged because you need more money to pay gardeners and other workers. （全国

13、卷）4. 表因果的连接成分有：so， thus， therefore， for， since， now that， because （of）， thanks to， as a result （of）， due to， owing to， sothat， suchthat等。例如： Internet Bars are popular today， especially among young people， for the net opens large windows to the outside world. （上海） The noise was so loud that I couldnt

14、 go on studying. （广东卷） 5. 表因果的连接成分有：so， thus， therefore， for， since， now that， because （of）， thanks to， as a result （of）， due to， owing to， sothat， suchthat等。例如： Internet Bars are popular today， especially among young people， for the net opens large windows to the outside world. （上海） The noise was s

15、o loud that I couldnt go on studying. （广东卷）6. 表条件的连接成分有：if， as/so long as， on condition that， provided that， suppose， unless， in case， in this case等。If you would like to try， youll have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. （全国卷） 7. 表强调的连接成分有：above all， indeed， surely， certainly， of course， at least， obviously等。 Above all， I can learn more about nature.（湖南卷） 8. 表解释的连接成分有：that is to say， in other words， b