英语中考英语书面表达及答案word.docx

1、英语中考英语书面表达及答案word英语中考英语书面表达及答案（word）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1书面表达地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点：1. 节约用水、用电；2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右提示词：the greenhouse gases lifestyl

2、e 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. _If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gase

3、s lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books shoul

4、d be recycled. Thus, less trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【详解】这篇短

5、文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定结构But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle

6、school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用

7、，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?2. 变化是如何发生的?3. 变化后有什么感受?_【答案】The biggest personal change Ive ever made is fal

8、ling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didnt enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time

9、.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was，my mother always read，Gradually I began to，Books are等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，

10、语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3（题文） 书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定时做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个

11、产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；2. 词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数） 3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时emergency 紧急情况 ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. N

12、ow Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. Whats more, it can deal

13、 with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.Im sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流

14、畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，Id like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I th

15、ink in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4 书面表达暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想

16、法。根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。Parents opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some houseworkKids opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeingYour opinion注意（1）表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;（2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;（4）词数:不少于80。How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids

17、have their own opinions. _【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so its important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills.

18、 But the kids disagree. They think its time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. Its good for us to do

19、 some sports.【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系【点睛】这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think its t

20、ime to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。5临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组 的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一 份素质报告NameTommyCharacteristics聪明、大方（各举一例）Hobbies喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举2个好处）Honour他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举一例）。今年，

21、学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Student）Problems面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠Your suggestions（根据实际情况提2点建议）要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his

22、 lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on childrens growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on

23、well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesnt have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he

24、has learned before exams. Its better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项

25、和第六项内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、

26、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。 6书面表达根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息开头已给出，不计入总词数内容要点：过去现在1旧房1高楼2河水肮脏2河水清澈（clean and clear）3步行、骑自行车上班3乘公交车、小汽车上班4道路狭窄（narrow）4街道宽阔（wide），干净整洁5居住条件（livingconditions）差5生活越来越好，环境（env

27、ironment）越来越舒适6你的感想（写两到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were n

28、arrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is bett

29、er and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think its still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to b