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1、佳鑫诺英语老师提供最新作文佳鑫诺英语老师提供最新作文Salary or Interest？1. 有的人找工作的时候选择兴趣，有的选择工资2. 你的看法审题概述 这是一篇要求考生评判找工作时所持标准的文章。开篇需阐述两种不同的观点，有人认为兴趣重要，有人则把工资摆在第一位。对于大学生而言，结合自身的情况，可以表明自己的观点。第一段，分述两种不同的观点，稍加展开；第二段，就自身谈谈看法。【范文】Salary or InterestUpon graduation，virtually all college students will confront the problem of the caree

2、r choice. It is truly a tough choice. Students opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some hold that priority should be given to their interest in jobs，but others take the attitude that salary is the most critical factor influencing their career choices.As to myself，I prefer the latter view. A well

3、paid job exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people，with no exception to me. Although it might be impossible to measure the value of ones job in terms of money，salary counts most when I choose my future career. In my view，our career choices largely depend on how and where we have be

4、en brought up. I come from a poor urban family and my parents were both laid off workers. In order to finance my tuition，they have been working hard over the past four years. As the only son in my family，I have to shoulder the burden of supporting my family. In short，salary is the first and only con

5、sideration in my choice of career.第一段思路点评：就大学生找工作时所持标准问题，阐述了两种不同的观点。语言点提示：（1）此句式priority should be given to something（应优先考虑），牢记。（2）注意分述不同观点时，可使用不同的动词或动词短语，这样可以避免重复，如： hold， take the attitude。第二段思路点评：以己为例，表明观点。语言点提示：（1）exert on 对施加(2) finance my tuition 承担我的学费Certificate Craze on Campus 1近几年大学校园内出现“考

6、证热” 2产生这一现象的原因 3你的看法 审题概述 大学生热衷于考证这一话题一直是社会的热点，为什么会出现这样的现象。对于大学生而言，结合自身的情况，可以表明自己的观点。第一段，简要描述现象：大学校园内出现“考证热”；第二段，探究产生这种现象的原因；第三段，结合自身情况，阐述自己的观点。【范文】Certificate Craze on CampusIn recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus w

7、hat he or she is busy doing; quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates.

8、 With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons

9、 ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another. From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certification

10、s blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude , we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value. 第一段思路点评：简要描述现象：大学生们热衷于考证。语言点提示：此句Why does this craze appear?作为过渡，引出下文。第二段思路点评：解释出现这一现象的原因，注意所使用的连接词语：first, second。语言点提示：the admission expansion of colle

11、ges 高校扩招第三段思路点评：以自己为例，具体说明。语言点提示：(1) nothing but=only(2) focus on/upon=concentrate on/uponHow Will Our Life Go on without Internet?1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行3. 你对网络依赖症的看法审题概述 网络给人们带来了丰富便捷的生活，但有些人却因此离不开网络，本文要求考生对网络依赖症简述自己的看法。第一段，简单描述网络为人们提供了丰富而又便利的生活；第二段，很多人觉得离开网络就寸步难行；第三段，对网络依赖症，阐述自己的观点

12、。【范文】How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a b

13、rilliant life.Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for m

14、ore business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if theyd seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.The powe

15、r of the Internet is all pervasive, yet its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurr

16、ence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.第一段思路点评：简要描述网络带给人们精彩便捷的生活。语言点提示：一句话中连用三个动词draw, realize, provide，显得句子很有气势。第二段思路点评：很多人觉得网络已经渗透到我们生活的方方面面，离开了网络就寸步难行。语言点提示：从政府部门、研究机构到普通老百姓，网络已经和我们的生活息息相关。原文通过列举governments, p

17、olitical campaigns, universities and researchers and common folks，一气呵成，让我们真切地感受到网络无处不在。第三段思路点评：阐述自己对网络依赖症的看法。语言点提示：(1) online pornography and violence，网络色情和暴力。(2) Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence.网络欺诈每天都在发生。Knowledge and Diploma1. 目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香2. 而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识3. 你的观点审题概述 本文针对时下一种流

18、行的说法：文凭越高越好，要求考生结合实际阐述自己的观点。第一段，简要描述目前社会上流行的说法：文凭越高越吃香；第二段，有些人却持不同的意见，认为文凭不等于知识；第三段，结合自己的实际情况，阐述自己的观点。【范文】 Knowledge and DiplomaIt is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies

19、 also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social realitythe higher diploma one gets, the more popular he becomes.On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesnt automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their ey

20、es, is only the acknowledgment of ones educational experience rather than a guarantee of ones ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of ones knowledge by the grade of ones diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people dont have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out

21、of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the worlds most learned men. So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs ones lifelong devotion.第一段思路点评：简要描述最近社会上的一种流行说法：文凭越高越好。语言点提示：(

22、1)句型It is generally believed that=It is generally acknowledged that 众所周知。(2) a job candidate应聘者第二段思路点评：XX文库 - 让每个人平等地提升自我有些人则持不同的意见，认为文凭不能等同于知识。语言点提示：(1) the acknowledgment of ones educational experience 对一个人的教育经历的认可。(2) 特别注意本段中所使用的连接词语：on the contrary, besides。第三段思路点评：以己为例，阐述自己的观点。语言点提示：(1) equate

23、a diploma with knowledge 将文凭和知识等同(2) nothing but a proof of a short-term study 只是对某一短期学习的证明For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On VolunteeringActivities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作2. 志愿者工作的社会意义 3. 作为大学

24、生，应该怎么做范文： In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in

25、China. Volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say

26、that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games. As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering actions. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow. 最后预祝广大接本莘莘学子心想事成，万事如意，接本成功。