四级考试三层突破写作完形翻译.docx

1、四级考试三层突破写作完形翻译第一部分 写作核心体裁分析 1. 现象解释型现象解释类作文是与实际生活关系十分密切的命题类型。现象解释型作文明确描述社会生活中存在的一种现象，据此作者对现象的原因或者危害等做出说明，同时论述这种现象反映出的社会问题；最后针对现象做出评论，表明自己的态度以及如何在日常生活中有效地实践以消除这种现象或其不利方面。此类作文所有的段落都围绕某种现象展开，所以我们称之为现象解释型作文。写作思路：第一段Nowadays, there exists a public controversy about the issue of引出现象.What amazes us most is

2、典型的一个方面.It is true that进一步阐述现象. 第二段There are many reasons explaining 这一现象 The main reason is 原因一. What is more, 原因二 . Thirdly, 原因三 . 第三段As a result, 总结上述观点. Considering all these, 讲述导致结果及作者态度 . For one thing, 原因一 . For another, 原因二 .In conclusion,总结全文.现象引入段描述现象，引起话题；表现较为典型的一个方面；进一步阐述现象。说明原因段承上启下,解释这

3、一现象的原因一；原因二；原因三；重申观点，总结上述观点。总结观点段讲述导致的结果；作者的态度；例举原因一；例举原因二；总结全文。2. 问题解决型问题解决型作文通常要求考生通过提示性的文字或图表来描述其反映的社会生活中的某个现实问题，提出解决方案和应对措施。这类作文的所有段落都是以某个问题为主线展开，即提出问题分析问题和解决问题这一主线。这类作文中给出的问题通常是当今社会的热门话题。写作思路一第一段Recently the issue /problem of_ _ has been in the limelight / brought into focus/ brought to public

4、attentive concern总述该问题. It is obvious that _ _危害或原因一. Additionally, _ _危害或原因二. So it is high time _ _解决该问题的紧迫性. 第二段The following ways can be adopted to 解决该问题. First of all, _办法因素一. The reason is _. Secondly, _办法因素二 . That is to say, _. Thirdly, _ _办法因素三. In fact, more than three ways can be adopted.

5、 第三段It is undeniable that 解决该问题的意义 . As for me, _我的观点和建议 . When everyone is fully aware of the severity and take feasible measures, I firmly believe 做出展望 .阐述问题段总述该问题；问题的危害或原因（可举两点）；指出解决该问题的重要性和紧迫性。说明方法段承上启下，引出对该问题的解决办法或重要影响因素；解决办法影响因素一；解决办法影响因素二；解决办法影响因素三（可省略）；对以上办法或因素进行总结，强调重要性（可省略）。总结观点段承接上文，强调解决问

6、题的意义；阐明“我的观点和建议”；总结全文，发出呼吁或做出展望。写作思路二第一段 has become a hot topic, and heated debates are right on their way 总述该问题 . 表现/作用一 . Additionally, 表现/作用二 . Therefore, it is of great importance for us to 解决该问题的重要性.第二段However, we have figured out many ways to 解决该问题 ./ However, there are many factors that 影响该问题

7、的解决 . First of all, 解决办法一./The first role that should be blamed is 影响因素一.Secondly, 解决办法二./Another equally important factor lies in 影响因素二. Last but not least, 解决办法/影响因素三. 第三段As far as Im concerned, 我的观点和建议. 理由一. Whats more, 理由二. I firmly believe that 做出展望.阐述问题段 开门见山，指出问题及现状；表现或作用（可举两点）；指出解决该问题的重要性和紧迫

8、性。说明方法段承上启下，引出对该问题的解决办法或重要影响因素；解决办法影响因素一；解决办法影响因素二；解决办法影响因素三（可省略）；对以上办法或因素进行总结，强调重要性（可省略）。总结观点段承接上文，阐明“我的观点和建议”；说明理由（可举两点）；总结全文，发出呼吁或做出展望。写作思路三第一段Recently, 指出问题 has become a matter of a public concern, especially for those who are confronted with this problem. On the one hand, _表现一. On the other han

9、d, _表现二. 第二段There are many reasons accounting for 该问题. Firstly, _危害原因一. Secondly, _危害原因二. For example, _举例说明. Thirdly, _危害原因三. In other words, _进一步解释. Therefore, how to is worth paying attention强调解决该问题的重要性.第三段However, we have figured out several effective measures to引出解决办法/影响因素. Firstly, 解决办法影响因素一.

10、Secondly, 解决办法影响因素二. Thirdly, 解决办法影响因素三. Its time that强调其重要性.阐述问题段开门见山，指出问题及现状；问题具体表现（可举两点）；说明原因段承上启下，引出对该问题的危害或重要原因；危害原因一；危害原因二；危害原因三（可省略）；承上启下，强调解决该问题的重要性。提出办法段承上启下，引出对该问题的解决办法或重要影响因素；解决办法影响因素一；解决办法影响因素二；解决办法影响因素三（可省略）；对以上办法或因素进行总结，强调其重要性（可省略）。第一部分 写作热门话题分析1.校园生活相关话题：学生兼职/就业出国留学校外住宿大学生选课以及课外活动等 热门

11、词汇：part-time job 兼职工作 economic burden经济负担 working experience 工作经历 competition and cooperation竞争与合作 tuition学费 course arrangement 课程安排 extracurricular activities课外活动 distance education远程教育 required coursecompulsory course必修课 take an examinationsit an examination 参加考试live outside campus 住在校外 food servi

12、ces饮食 application form 申请表 withdrawdraw cash 取钱 instructor 辅导老师 student union 学生会 undergraduate 本科生 postgraduate研究生 credit学分 degrees学位 经典句式：1 In recent years, studying abroad has become a new craze among college students. 如今，留学在大学生中成为一种新的热潮。2 With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more grad

13、uates have to face the fierce competition in the job market.随着大学的扩招，越来越多的毕业生在就业市场面临激烈的竞争。3 Diploma and certificates are still significant standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exa

14、m to another.学位和证书仍然是很多雇主衡量一个人能力的重要标准。为了增加找工作资格条件，学生们被迫不断参加考试。4 During the holidays, a growing number of students choose to be volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. 在假期，大量的学生选择做志愿者，做兼职工作或者参加其他类似的实践活动。 Some students spend too much time in taking part-time

15、jobs so as to ignore their study. Therefore, we are supposed to try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.有些学生花大量的时间做兼职工作，从而忽视了他们的学业。因此我们应该平衡社会实践和学习之间的关系。2.网络科技: 相关话题：电脑/互联网的普及信息安全媒体广告、通讯设备的进步网络教学及网上阅读网上娱乐（游戏博客开心牧场等）热门词汇：cyber culture计算机文化 online love affairs网恋 net bar网吧 shopping online网上购物 cyber chat网上聊天