领军高考英语必考点全梳理专题20书面表达高效演练附范文.docx

1、领军高考英语必考点全梳理专题20书面表达高效演练附范文专题20 书面表达(应用文)高效演练1.假设你叫李华，现在英国曼彻斯特大学留学，受到邀请，你准备参加“东方文化俱乐部”举办的用英语讲故事活动，让世界了解中国文化。你故事的内容是“凿壁偷光”。内容包括:1. 概述故事的含义;2. 谈谈个人感想.注意:1. 可适当发挥，使文章内容充实，行文连贯；2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:凿壁:make a hole in the wall_【参考范文】There is always a picture in my mind. A boy, who is in worn clothes, sat

2、 at a wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldnt afford even a candle, so he made a hole in the wall to “steal” light f

3、rom his neighbors house to read at night. The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that co

4、unts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.【解析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写“凿壁偷光”的故事。第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一个故事：假设你叫李华，现在英国曼彻斯特大学留学，受到邀请，你准备参加“东方文化俱乐部”举办的用英语讲故事活动，让世界了解中国文化。你故事的内容是“凿壁偷光”。内容包括:1. 概述故事的含义;2. 谈谈个人感想。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如

5、；make a hole in the wall（凿壁），well-known（众所周知的），idiom（成语），afford（买得起），candle（蜡烛），steal（偷），discouraged（气馁的），moral（寓意）及reflect（反映）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级

6、词汇和句式，高级词汇有a ray of （一束），come in（进来），be absorbed in (全神贯注于)，spare no effort to（不遗余力）， get discouraged（气馁），pay off (有回报)，take pains to（尽力），get prepared for（为做好准备），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“A boy, who is in worn clothes, sat at a wooden table with a pile of books on it.”，状语从句“spare no effort to acquire knowledge

7、 and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.”，强调句型“It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.”，非谓语动词“The boy, being poor, couldnt afford even a candle, so he made a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbors house to read a

8、t night.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。2.假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。下个月学校将到所在社区开展“美化家园”和“社区讲堂”两次志愿者活动。你班交换生Jim打算参加其中的一项活动，发来邮件咨询。请你给Jim回复一封邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐一项活动；2. 简述可做的事情；3. 表达愿望。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Possible version 1:Dear Jim,Im glad youre interested in the voluntary activity ne

9、xt month. I suggest you take part in the activity of beautifying our community. You can help to pick up garbage and clean up small advertisements together with our schoolmates, which will make the community cleaner and tidier. You can also help to grow plants and flowers to beautify the community en

10、vironment. With our efforts the appearance of the community will be greatly improved and itll take on a new look. Through the activity youll contribute to our community and Im sure youll have a sense of belonging as a community member. I hope youll have a pleasant experience. Yours,Li HuaPossible ve

11、rsion 2:Dear Jim,Im glad youre interested in the voluntary activity next month. I advise you to be a volunteer of the community lecture room. You can teach the community residents some daily spoken English and talk about the differences between western and Chinese cultures, which will develop their

12、knowledge and broaden their horizons. You can also introduce some popular APPs, such as Booking, to make their life more convenient.Im sure youll be able to fully integrate into the community life through the activity and have a sense of belonging as a community member. I hope youll have a pleasant

13、experience. Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。第一步：根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：学校将到所在社区开展“美化家园”和“社区讲堂”两次志愿者活动；推荐一项活动：“美化家园”或者“社区讲堂”；简述可做的事情；表达愿望。第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：voluntary activity（志愿者活动），beautifying our community（美化社区），community lecture room（社区讲堂），clean up small advertisements（清理小广告），spoken English（英语口语）等。第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。【点睛】两篇范文从不同的活动展开来写，结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。非限制性定语从句的使用You can help to pick up garbage and clean u