初中英语书面表达练习题及解析.docx

1、初中英语书面表达练习题及解析初中英语书面表达练习题及解析一、英语书面表达1 最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。现 状大约70%学生眼睛近视主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等预防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动2. 养成正确的用眼习惯你的观点 .（至少一条）参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The survey shows that many student

2、s have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much ti

3、me reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think a

4、ll of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【详解】这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成正确的用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我

5、们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。（I think ；try ones best to do sth.）。常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of等。2书面表达每年的4月23日是世界读书日，这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。假如你校将开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。读书的意义 1. 获取知识，开阔视野 2. 使人愉悦，益于学习 3. （自由发挥）现状 1. 作业多，无良好读书习惯 2

6、. 不知道读什么书，不会选择倡议 （至少两点）注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. _Lets start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge fr

7、om all kinds of booksIt can also help to open up a whole new world to usSecond，reading will/can make us clever and happyIt is good for our study and it can help us grow upThird，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful However，there is usually so much homework for u

8、s to do that we dont have enough time for readingMoreover，some of us dont have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet In my opinion，our school can have aReading Weekonce a termTeachers should encourage students to borrow books from the libraryWe

9、must spend more time reading some useful booksAs a result，we can have a better future Lets start reading now!【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a res

10、ult等。同时First of all，/ Second，/ Third等时间副词和However/ Moreover / As a result等结构副词的运用，既使文章的思路清晰、层次分明，还丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3书面表达随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当

11、开设传统文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestionDear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is fac

12、ing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, its necessary for school

13、s to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldnt give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense o

14、f national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Lets call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对

15、开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing，its necessary for schools to，we shouldnt，They can raise，it is of great importance to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必

16、要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of， in ones opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4书面表达“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众 志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所 给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。1.种植花草树木；2.遵守交通规则；3.公共场合不大声喧哗；4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少

17、两点）参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to

18、 protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have form

19、ed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了

20、非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，whats more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ Whats more, when on a bus, we actively

21、 give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5

22、今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机，一些学生和老师有不同的观点。你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。 观点理由一些学生赞成拥有方便与家长联系；一些老师反对拥有有学生用手机玩游戏；有学生用手机作弊；你的观点1. 2.要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；3. 词数：80-100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today._【答案】Mobile

23、phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They

24、think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against itThey think that some students cant control themselves and often play games. Whats worse, some students cheat in ex

25、ams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do s

26、omething to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【详解】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏。需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句型。【点睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way我认为正确的方式使用手机对学生是有帮助的。I think+宾语从句。It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是的。6书面表达难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对