优质英语作文的批改范文与评语word范文 15页.docx

1、优质英语作文的批改范文与评语word范文 15页本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！= 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ = 英语作文的批改范文与评语 篇一：英语批改网 作文 The person I love/ admire most要求1. No less than 90 points by Pigai.2. No less than 26o words.3. Deadline Nov. 3.作文号:357928 教师:邵春 字数:260500 满分:100Attitude要求For this part，you are al

2、lowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Attitude by commenting on the famous saying, “A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm .” You should write at least 260 words but no more than 500 words. 作文号:357929 教师:邵春 字数:100500 满分:100 第一篇 The person I love/ admire

3、 mostEveryone has someone in his heart that he admires most, who may be a scientist, a writer, a musician or a movie super star. But,as for me,the most admirable person of mine is Christian Ronaldo, who is one of the greatest football player in todays world. Ronaldo was born in 1985, He was played f

4、or the Manchester united and now plays for real Madrid, when he was 18 years old he became a main force of Portugal national team. As for the worlds most brilliant super football stars, he not only has a handsome appearance, also has a special skill and efficient scoring ability. However, this is no

5、t reason why I admire him, the really point let me be his fans is his gratitude feelings and persistence of perseverance. Ronaldo is a tender feelings man under his tough appearance,the most important things he teach me is that we should gratitude everyone who ever helped us, When he was 18,of which

6、 playing for Manchester united，even though he has unparalleled football talent，he was always neither well with team cooperation, nor handle for his applause and criticism. At this time, the Manchester united coach Sir Alex ferguson give most patient guidance to him. Latter, When Ronaldo every time h

7、onored, he always expresses his gratitude to Alex ferguson.“He is just like my father and friend!” Moreover, another point he inspired me is his persistence for his persuit. From a youth to the leader of the national football team, Ronaldo is always to spare no effort to devote his time and energy,

8、and as for the life of football. He is always the first came to the training ground, the last to leave. Now, he is nearly thirty years old, but he still keep the highest level on the field. In sum, it is my general description about Christian Ronaldo above, I learn to be an gratitude person with str

9、ong mind from he. no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, you can come true your dream. These lessons exercise a great influence on my life. Ronaldo, thank you so much for not only giving interest of football to me but also teaching me how to be a good person. Recently, the New Years golden bal

10、l players will reveal, Ronaldo remains at the top, all is own to his gratitude mentality and uemitting persistence, and I will continue to give my greatest respect, Hala Madrid! The person I admire mostEveryone has someone in his heart that he admires most, who may be a scientist, a writer, a musici

11、an or a movie super star. But, as for me, the most admirable person of mine is my dearest mother. My mother is an ordinary woman. She is not very beautiful and a little heavy as well as me. But sometimes, you will think she is very kind and enthusiastic. Although she doesnt have high education, she

12、is very capable. She is excellent in social contact and bargaining. She loves me and my brother, tries to give us the comfortable surroundings to study and live in. She is a sensible person, but she cant stand someone screwing the number of my family over. No one in the world loves you more than you

13、r mother. While she gave me life, she takes me as her concern. She devotes her whole life to the family. I learn to be an optimistic person with strong mind from my mother. She also teaches me that no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, you can come true your dream. These lessons exercise a gr

14、eat influence on my life.Although my mother is an ordinary person, she is still the person that I admire most. Mom, thank you so much for not only giving birth to me but also teaching me how to be a good person. No matter what will be in the future, I will always love you. 第二篇 AltitudeIt is said “A

15、man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm!”,we can known how altitude play a important role to our success. A person who even though take a extraordinary talent, he will hard to get outstanding achievement without a good altitude to his work or study. These are two cau

16、ses why a positive altitude is so significant to our career,on the one hand, we can build a strong confidence from a good mental state facing unpredictable challenges,in turn, which will unleash yourunlimited enthusiasm to push you to devote time and energy to your work. Beethoven, who is the greatest composer and pianist in the history of music,who also is a blind man at the same time