上海兰生复旦书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析.docx

1、上海兰生复旦书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析上海兰生复旦书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（福建中考模拟）回首三年，相信你有满满的回忆。在你将踏上新的旅程之际，请给新入学的学弟学妹们两则初中生活的建议，并说说原因，让他们的初中生活更加精彩。请参考下面的思维导图用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。School life Teachers and friends Schoolwork and activitiesMy Advice for Junior High【答案】例文Junior high is an important stage in you

2、r life. As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation. To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice. First, establish your routines. By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comforta

3、ble. Second, be sure to try new things. You can join new clubs or take up a new hobby. This will not only get you out of the stressful schoolwork, but also help you make more friends. I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式

4、和短语，为文章增色不少，如as a student，must be，filled with，get used to，relax ourselves，two pieces of advice，fall into，join new clubs，take up，not onlybut also，make more friends，be helpful to等。而非谓语动词结构To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice.和As a student who is about to

5、enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation./ By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable./ I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，

6、写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2（山东中考模拟）紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊-成长记录袋中还应增添一份你自己满意的答案。根据上述提示，请以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”为题写一篇文章，记录你难忘的校园生活。首句已给出。注意：. 1.语言通顺

7、，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名或能够透露你个人身份的相关信息。3.词数80左右，信件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。My Unforgettable Junior High School LifeHow time flies! 【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked har

8、d at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, Ive got more knowledge and i

9、mproved my life.In the future, Ill try my best to do better. Ill learn to enjoy my school life. Ill make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.【解析】【详解】这篇短文要求我们以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life为题，回想一下自己即将过去的初中，讲述难忘的初中生活。题目中用思维导图，列出了一些文章中会用到的关键词，供学生们参考使用。审题可知，这篇短文应

10、以一般过去时、第一人称为主来叙述。题目中并没有给出具体的写作内容，学生们应发挥自己的想象力，可以从自己的学习、爱好、与同学的交往、与老师的相处以及自己的感受等方面进行详细阐述。写作时应注意：首先要展开合理想象，补充文章细节内容，注意各部分内容之间的层次，内容要完整、充实，结构要清晰。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译。句子的结构要完整，可以简单句结构为主，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句、复合句及其他复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的感受。短文有以

11、下几个优点：首先文章内容充实、完整，符合题目要求。短文中作者从自己的学习情况、与同学的交往、爱好、特长等方面进行了总结，在最后提出了对未来的希望。层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章第一段引出主题，使用了一般现在时；第二段回忆过去的生活，主要使用了一般过去时；最后对未来提出希望，用到了一般将来时。语法规范，用词准确，注意了名词、动词、形容词等的正确形式。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句句型，调整了文章节奏，提升了作文档次。短文中较好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects an

12、d worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, Ive got more knowledge and improved my life.、Ill make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。3（四川成都外国语学校中考模拟） Writing. Thirty-year- old Sophie has been bullied（欺凌）at sc

13、hool for over two years. She had her bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80-120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points:1. Some common forms of bullying youve seen or experienced. （At least two exa

14、mples）2. Some effects（影响） on the students who have been bullied at school. （At least two effects）3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. （At least three solutions）【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, isprevalentin secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less.

15、 I saw John had his money stolen .Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others. John often feels afraid and cant concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide. First, because students spend most of their time in school and its th

16、e schools responsibility to protect them andstopany forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for it.Second, as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍学校的欺凌事件。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意

17、主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I saw，Sometimes he was made to，John often feels，because students spend，Schools should等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我经历过的欺凌事件的形式，接下来介绍学校欺凌事件对学生的影响，最后介绍解决欺凌事件的方法。此处as far as I know, more or less, concentrate on, draw public att

18、ention, be responsible for 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4（江苏中考模拟）书面表达随着中国国际地位的日益提高，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国。假定你是李明，你最近认识的澳大利亚笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想更多地了解中国。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容及你的了解用英语回复。To: Li Ming 163. comFrom: David bigpond. comDear Li Ming,How are you? Is everything going smoothly? Its February. Its very hot in Australia

19、 nowand Im having a long summer vacation. Im making a trip plan to China these days. Would youplease tell me more about China?Whats the season in China now?Whats the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during thefestival?Which city in China is worth a visit and what can

20、 I do there?What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives?I look forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishesDavid注意事项:1.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数;3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear David,Im really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a

21、country with a long history. Im sure youll have a wonderful time here.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Thomas,Im really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with along history.It is winter now and Spring Festival is the most popular at this time of year. Family memb

22、ers get together and then have a big dinner, After that, they watch lion dances and fireworks.“East or west, Gulin landscape is best.” Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. You can take a boat trip along the Lijiang Rive or ride around the countryside. It is great fun.Guilin is a specia

23、l city with strong local colour. You can choose many excellent gifts there, such as Chinese paintings, paper fans and colorful clothes. Im sure youll have a wonderful time here.Yours sincerely.Li Hua【解析】【详解】这是一篇书信作文，根据电子邮件中的相关信息向澳大利亚笔友David介绍一下中国。所提供的材料中问到了关于中国的几个问题：Whats the season in China now? Wh

24、ats the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the festival? Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there? What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives? 主要从这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含电子邮件上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉

25、的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜欢自然风光，桂林值得一游。句子if you like natural views.是由if引导的条件状语从句。【高分句型二】Im sure youll have a wonderful time here. 我相信你会在这里过得很愉快。youll have a wonderful time here. 是宾语从句。5（

26、四川成都外国语学校中考模拟） Have you got anything that is branded on your memory, making you feel happy, satisfied, proud or just feel sad, terrible, and regretful? Maybe you did it, experienced it, read it, saw it or only heard of it. Please write a composition with the title “The _ thing that I have ever _” to

27、 share your story. The following information should be included: 1. How did you get the story?2. When and where did it happen? 3. What happened exactly?4. Why is it branded on your memory? Please list at least two reasons.【答案】请参考范文：The happy thing that I have ever experiencedThis is a story of my ow

28、n experience, from this thing, I really felt my fathers love for me, warm and deep love.I was born in a poor family,My parents live a simple life.When I was 8 years old, I was in Grade 3 of primary school. I liked watching others play the piano. In fact, I liked the beautiful picture of playing the

29、piano.Suddenly one day, my father took me to a nice place.Later, I learned that it was a piano training center, learning piano was very expensive, but my father helped me find a piano teacher.So I learned the piano from my teacher there.Three months later, I played the piano to my father, but I did

30、not play well. The teacher told my father that maybe I had no gift for it.He advised my father to give up.But my father said that if I would like to play the piano, he didnt give up. I was moved by my fathers encourgement. 【解析】【详解】本文是关于自己经历或看到的故事为话题的材料作文，要求根据内容要点来写作。学生首先要认真阅读材料中给出的短语及相关信息,认真审题,确定文章的

31、中心。在写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。写作时还要注意:1.书写规范；2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。高分句型：This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my fathers love for me, warm and deep love.这是一个关于我自己经历的故事，从这件事上，我真的感受到了爸爸对我的爱，温暖而深沉的爱。Suddenly one day, my father said

32、 to take me to a nice place.突然有一天，爸爸说带我去一个好地方。But my father said as long as I am happy on the line, it doesnt matter.但是我爸爸说只要我高兴就行，没关系。【点睛】注意写作过程中，将要点展开并表达清楚，注意使用英语的经典句型,避免出现汉语表达。6（长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达健康的生活习惯是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是怎样的呢？请根据以下的信息提示，写一篇短文。内容：1、健康饮食；2、早睡早起，不熬夜；3、参加运动，强身健体。要求：1、必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2、80词左右；3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。_