教师课件高考英语专题二写作指导与模拟训练第三节读后续写.docx

1、教师课件高考英语专题二写作指导与模拟训练第三节读后续写第三节读后续写读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查考生的综合语言运用能力。其所提供的语言材料的体裁以记叙文和夹叙夹议文为主，偶有少量议论文。读后续写除了要求考生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重考查学生在内容构思和情节衔接方面的能力。(一)续写策略1读后续写不是随心所欲地写，而是要在所给段落开头和所标示关键词的帮助下完成续写部分(150词左右)。其中，段落开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度上引导你的思路向哪方面发展，所续写部分不能脱离各自的段落开头语另起炉灶，要在其基础上进行拓展发挥。2续写所给语言材料多是记叙文之故事

2、类文章，情节曲折跌宕，线索性和逻辑性较强。考生要抓住故事的叙事线索，依据原文的写作思路续写文章，并适当发散。3读后续写要求读写并重，需要考生对给定材料精确理解，这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主题，就这方面而言，读后续写有点类似阅读理解题中对文章后续发展的推断，如：What would happen next?4续写部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的，考生可根据自己对上文材料的理解，对文章的结尾做出不同的诠释。(二)续写步骤1精读文章，确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路。通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜(结尾)”。2仔细审题，

3、明确续写要求。3回扣原文，揣摩续写思路。根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路，结合续写段段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思路，同时结合文章中标有下划线的关键词语，确定续写段落的内容。4拟定草稿，修改错词病句。5标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语(5个以上)。(三)续写方法1精读所给语言材料，理清文章脉络并明确作者的论点，确定文章主旨。2寻求前文与续写段段首句之间的内在联系，站在作者的角度，设计并发展情节，想象要合理，情节要连贯。3后续情节一般为故事的高潮或延续，是原作者声音的延续、态度的延伸，因此，要尽量符合原文思路，并求得与读者的心理共鸣，让读者回味无穷。4续

4、写时心态要端正，所续写内容要积极、健康向上，把事物美好的一面展示出来。5利用自己已有的知识和经验，在继承原作者风格和语言基础之上，准确、地道地表达，充分展示语言的表现力。提高关联词与过渡语的使用率，增强整句表现力。6如果所给短文为议论文，那么议论文中的段落首句多为主题句，观点鲜明。续写时，要围绕段落分论点确定论证方法，如正反对比、例证等。(四)注意事项1词数要求：词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。2与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。3内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。4应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。5上下文的连贯性。1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Ja

5、ck，a clerk at the local bank，was wandering alone on the street.It was a cold，silent winter night.His mind was on his wife Linda，who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed，waiting for more money for her operation.Jack had sold everything he had，and he had tried

6、his best to borrow money from all the pople and banks he could.But the real world is cruel.A large amount of money was still needed.To Jack，it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left，”Jack said to himself.Then he went to the bank，his wor

7、kplace，again.For several days，he observed the bank and planned a theft.Then next day，he went to work as usual.Everything seemed normal：he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did.But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work，instead of the small one he alwa

8、ys carried.At 5：00 pm，the bank closed，and the clerks and the guards had all gone home.However，at that moment，Jack was in the bathroom，and the guards didnt notice him，of course.When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark，Jack came out from the bathroom.H

9、e first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase.He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days.Using a special key and some other tools，he then easily opened the d

10、oors of the safes.The banks security system wasnt very good，which allowed Jack to take a lot of money.Several minutes later，Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：After Jack had been g

11、one from the bank for a while，the alarms began to ring. Paragraph 2：But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank，an old man. 2阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Last summer when my family was road tripping to Montana we arrived in Great Falls late one night.The kids had fallen asleep in the car，s

12、o my husband went and checked in while I stayed with the kids.When he returned with the room keys，we woke up our children and took them out of the car，through the hotel，up the elevators and into our guest room.We kept the room dark，leaving only the entry light on，and quickly put kids into bed hoping

13、 theyd drift back to sleep.My husband went to put our waters in the minifridge only to notice some beers.“Thats strange，”he said and I agreed，but having discovered leftbehind drinks in hotel fridges in the past I didnt think much about it.I figured the housekeepers had forgotten to check it.In the m

14、eantime，my husband ran to the store and I went into the bathroom to get ready for bed.As I washed my face I looked down to see cardboard beer containers in the trash.I felt my heart begin to pound.We were in someone elses room!Now panicked，I checked the closet.Nothing.I then went to the dresser eyes

15、 scanned the door rooms floor and there it was：A black bag that looked like one of ours.But it wasnt!I immediately called the front desk and the waitress in charge responded with an“Oh，my God！This is not good！”By now the kids were wideawake，jumping on the beds as I was trying to put all of our thing

16、s back into our oversized suitcase.Just while we were packing our things，I heard someone was unlocking the door，which made my heart beat wildly.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：The door opened and in came a young man. Paragraph 2：I

17、didnt know how to deal with the matter but luckily the waitress 3阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。James shook his money box again.Nothing！He carefully counted the coins that lay on the was all that he had.The bicycle he wanted was 90！How on earth was he going to get the rest of the money？He knew that h

18、is friends all had bicycles.It was hard to hang around with people when you were the only one without wheels.He thought about what he could do.There was no need to ask his parents for he knew they had no money to spare.There was only one way to get money，and that was to earn it.He would have to find

19、 a job.But who would hire him and what could he do？He decided to ask Mr Clay for advice，who usually had opinions in most things.“Well，you can start right here，” said Mr Clay.“My windows need cleaning and my car needs washing.” That was the beginning of Jamess oddjob(零工) business.For three months he

20、worked every day after finishing his homework.He was surprised by the various jobs that people found for him to do.He took dogs and babies for walks，cleaned out cupboards，and mended books.He forgot the number of cars he washed and windows he cleaned，but the money increased and he knew that he would

21、soon have enough for the bicycle he was dying for.The day finally came when James counted his money and found wasted no time and went down to the shop to pick up the bicycle he wanted.It had been hard work for the money，but James knew that he valued his bicycle far more since he had bought it with h

22、is own money.He had achieved what he thought was impossible，and that was worth even more than the bicycle.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：He rode proudly home，looking forward to showing his new bicycle to his friends. Paragraph 2：M

23、any years later，James succeeded in 4阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。The event that stands out in Toms memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old.He was at home with his elder sister Jane.Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices.At first he thought nothing of it since cus

24、tomers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud，but he soon realized this time it was different.“Quick！Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone yelled.Then a thick burning smell filled the air.When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate，a thick

25、cloud of smoke greeted him.The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.Jane，who had been playing the violin in her room，hurried to the living room.They rushed out of the door and along the corridor(走廊)through the smoke.They were heading towards the stairway at the far end

26、of the corridor when Jane stopped in her track.She turned around and headed back the way they came.Tom had no idea what she was doing，but he followed suit.Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them，who they called Makcik，Malay for auntie.Jane began banging on Makcik

27、s door，but got no answer.As the smoke thickened around them，Tom could see many of their neighborssome still in their pyjamasrunning for safety.The thought of fear crossed his mind.“She would have run for safety like everyone else！” Tom cried.However，Jane refused to give up.“I know Makciks still insi

28、de.” She said she was familiar with Makciks daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping.She pounded the door.“Go downstairs.Go now! Go！” 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Paragraph

29、 2：Luckily，some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. 5阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“Ouch！” I howled in pain as I dropped the hammer onto my foot.I felt foolish.It was pouring with rain，and，lame for a moment，I hopped around to the drivers side.“No luck？” said George.We had a flat tyre(轮胎)

30、and I was trying to change the wheel.But it was stuck firm.We had driven ten hours along the road through the jungle without seeing another soul.In the distance was an ox working in the field.“So what do we do now? How can we find a garage？” asked George，as I got back into the car.About fifteen minu

31、tes later，the rain stopped.Out of the jungle came an old woman.She walked towards us carrying something long and thin.“Uh，oh，here comes danger！” said George，“Shes got a spear.”She was wearing traditional garments，with short sleeves，a colorful necklace and other jewelry.As she got closer，we saw the spear was just a wooden pole.I got out.“Hello！” I said，in English.“Can you help us？” I pointed to the wheel.She stared at it，and then made a gesture to follow her back to the jungle.George and I looked at each other，and then set off after her.Soon we came to a te