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1、雅思作文范文雅思作文范文2014【篇一：2014年7月10日雅思写作范文及语料库解析】 2014年7月10日雅思写作范文及语料库解析2014年7月10日雅思写作解析以及原创范文 task two： some countries achieve international success by building specialized instead of有人认为训练专业的体育运动员比提供人人可以使用的体育设施更能帮助国家取得成功，你认为这个观点是积极的还是消极的? 点评：本文主题考察的是国家培养专业运动的利弊： 解析：7月10日雅思写作小作文再次考察流程图，出乎意料。属于新题出现，在世界杯和国

2、家举办奥运会的大背景下提出，也算与时俱进。雅思考试出过的类似题目有国家举办体育比赛的利弊。 雅思写作困境： 1. 没有思路 2. 没有语言 3. 表达不精彩： 解决策略：精彩的语料库的输入转为精彩的语料库的输出： 雅思写作经典提问方式： 1. 利弊讨论(7月10日考察) 2. 两边讨论 3. 是否同意一种观点 4. 分析问题以及解决问题; 小鹏哥解析：该文需要论证的是国家培养专业运动员的利弊：主题观点即可写作利大于弊，也可以写作弊大于利。主题观点： 雅思考试题库类似题目：(旧题) the olympic games or the world up football game is a majo

3、r international hosting an international sporting event such as the olympic games? 国家举办体育比赛的利弊? 利弊讨论话题布局图： 首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场 二段：利好的展开(必须要有细节的展开和解释) 三段：弊端的展开(必须要有细节的展开和解释) 尾段：再次亮明观点+ 谈及如何克服弊端： 新东方薛鹏原创范文： 首段：背景介绍 (个性开篇) + 争议焦点(句型引导)+作家立场(清晰表明)to become mighty country in terms of sports events is w

4、hat many nations翻译：成为竞技体育强国是很多国家渴望的，这就是为什么很多国家热衷于培养精英运动员。然而，人们一直在争议是否培养专业运动员优越于普及民众可以利用的体育设施。我认为，培养运动员利大于弊，尽管普及体育设施不是没有其利好。 新东方薛鹏原创语料库点评：(推荐背诵使用) 1. in terms of 在方面：(考官词汇) 2. is what many nations aspire after. 是很多国家渴望的;(首段推荐句型) 3. are keen on doing sth v 热衷于做(喜欢的升级表达) 4. a is superior to b： a优越于b (i

5、s better than 的升级表达) 5. proffering sports facilities v 提供体育设施 解析：proffer = provide v 提供 6. zero in on the cultivation of athletes v 专注于培养运动员 解析：zero in on 专注于7. is never without its virtues. 不是没有其利好：(双重否定表达肯定) 二段：国家培养专业体育运动的利好展开(三点理由) first，seen from positive aspect, to nurture more exceptional prof

6、essional improving a nations status in the international achievement of sports events career, which could fire peoples enthusiasm of enhance the basic quality of a nations made spirit of those sportsmensstrongly inspired by athletes relentless pursuit of perfection and ceaseless self-improvement. (1

7、42) 翻译：第一，从积极角度看，培养专业运动员使国家成为体育强国， 这是一个很好的提高国际影响力以及盈利的契机。例如，体育强国可以承办国际体育比赛，增加门票收入，纪念品销售，旅游收入，吸引赞助商。第二，专业运动员的成功即为竞技体育事业的成功，这可以提高全民健身的热情，提高国民的基本素质以及健康的指数。第三，竞技对于民众有教育指导的意义，例如，我自己常常被专业运动员自我超越和追求完美的精神所感动。 新东方薛鹏原创语料库点评：(推荐背诵) 1. seen from positive aspect v 从积极的角度看 (引导利好) 2. nurture = foster = nurture = c

8、ultivate = develop = train v 培养 3. exceptional professional players 优秀的职业运动员 词汇：exceptional = extraordinary = eminent = highly qualified adj 优秀的 4. is an golden chance of doing sth 是的一个黄金的机会 5. a nations status in the international arena 在国际舞台的地位 6. achieve economic profitability v 盈利(来着雅思阅读) 7. sta

9、nd more opportunities of doing sth 有更多的机会做 8. bid for international sports undertaking v申办国际体育比赛 解析：undertaking 含有风险性的事业： 9. generate immense economic value. 带来巨大的经济价值(推荐背诵;赚钱的升级写法) 10. fire peoples enthusiasm of building up bodies v 点燃民众的健身热情11. enhance the basic quality of a nations population. v提

10、高国民的基本素质(国家给教育和医疗买单的利好) 12. the self-made spirit n自我奋斗精神 13. has a key role to play in 可以发挥重要作用 14. relentless pursuit of perfection 不懈追求完美 15. ceaseless self-improvement 不断的自我提高 三段：国家培养专业运动的弊端 + 普及民众体育设施的利好： granted, there is no garden without weeds. excessive investment in amelioratingsports facil

11、ities could create more possibilities of enhancing the heath could only serve small group of people. (84) 翻译：的确，没有不长杂草的花园，(凡事有利弊)，在培养运动员方面过度投资等于浪费金钱。毕竟，我们有更加紧迫的民生问题需要来自国库的财政支持例如教育和医疗。同时，很多人也会认为，普及推广民众体育设施可以为更多普通人的健身提供良好的契机，相反，运动员使用的专业体育设施只有少数人才能使用。 新东方薛鹏原创语料库总结：(推荐背诵) 1. might make the money fly v 等

12、于浪费金钱(反对政府投资政策) 2. financial support from the public purse 来自国家的财政支持(来自雅思阅读) 3. popularize free education v普及免费教育 4. ameliorate medical care v 改善医疗 5. create more possibilities of doing sth v 创造更多的 的可能性; 6. enhance the heath index amongst the general public. v 提高民众的健康指数 尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由： my stand is

13、 that to train a large proportion of athletes enjoys many visible virtues such as educating the pubic, kindling peoples zeal of doing physical exercises and enhancing a nations international influence.(33) 翻译：我的立场是培养专业运动员利好很多，例如对于公众的教育意义，点燃民众建设热情，提高国家的国际地位。 原创语料库点评： 1. a large proportion of 大量的2. ki

14、ndling peoples zeal of 点燃热情 全文点评：文无定法，小鹏哥范文只是范文写作之一种。该文自由写作;淡化模板;主题明确;论证饱满，词汇变化;句型多样;用到许多的雅思阅读以及考官常用的词汇;词汇句法来着我多年的词汇教学和阅读教学积累。【篇二：雅思作文范文大全】好的东西，可惜不是我整理的，是一个叫landfish姑娘收集的，厉害！ v105 好的东西，和大家分享，看这个帖子的人肯定比较多，大家别冒险背诵，了解一下范文的思路好了。 这样 some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than the ad

15、vantages,do you agree or disagree? 范文1 the birth of cars have made an enormous change to our life.in the past,we travel from one place to another only by foot,nowaday,cars can do it .its goes withour saying that the invention of cars bring great benefit to all of us.but as proverb goes:no garden wit

16、hout weeds.car is not exception. owing a car has a lot of advantages.for one thing,car provide us the most convient way of transportation.we can get around freely without spenting a lot of time.emotionally,i always found driving is so exciting.for another,its the comfortable to drive a car.in winter

17、.drivers always can stay warm and dry even in rainy whether,in addition,drivers are usually safe in their cars when they are out at night. cars bring the human merits,their side-effects graudually come to the surface.firstly,to run a car need a lot of oil,which is getting less and less.the increasin

18、g number of cars contribute the lacking of energy.secondlly,as more and more cars are used,the traffic ecpecially in big cities is getting heaver and heavier,which lead to the serious social problem-traffic jam.in addition,the inceasing numbers of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantities of carbon

19、 monoxide into atmosphere.it make the air of cities unbreathabe,it strip people contact with frensh air. therefore,the new energy should be explored to replace the oil so that our envionmental pollution can be avioded .and the strick law should be issued to keep the numbers of cars under control.thu

20、s,our heavier traffic can be solluted! 范文2 private cars vs public traffic as traffic problems become more and more serious in many cities of developed and developing countries, their governments have to try hard and loads of money and energy have been spent to deal with them.firstly, it is not effic

21、ient for the commuters to use their private cars to and back from their workplaces. occasionally we can see they have to sit on the wheels wasting time and fuel in a heavy traffic jam. at the same time, through burning the fossil fuels, green house gas co2, co1, acid rain gas so2, fumes and dusts ar

22、e being released into the atmosphere, all of which heavily overload the environment. thirdly, with the increase of private cars, the road traffic accidents are also rise dramatically. for example, in a city with 5000 cars, there will be at least 250 accidents happening everyday, which also burden th

23、e public healthy services. on the contrary, expected public traffic may be an ideal solution to these problems. for example city buses and railways are widely used or being constructed by many cities. people can take buses easily, which can be found every 10 minutes or less in the peak time. actuall

24、y, nottingham transport company is building its own light railway in the city, which is announced by the speak man of the company, “it will be completed in the next year, the tickets will be very competitive and at the same time the travel will be very safe and comfortable.” on the other hand, publi

25、c traffic had its own disadvantages. usually it cannot provide door-to-door service. it is inconvenient to go shopping by public vehicles. sometimes you must wait a long time for the train. and quite a lot of people prefer to enjoy driving. in conclusion, developing the public traffic is a useful ap

26、proach to deal with these difficulties. one possible way, if not the best, is to taxi private cars heavily and use these revenues to provide citizens cheaper public traffic services. 范文3 with the development of science and technology, the cars have already become the important component in our daily

27、 life gradually. cars make our life convenient and swift. however, too many cars have caused very serious social problems. some people claim that the disadvantages of car are more than the advantages. i doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis. since one century ago, the auto industry has b

28、een developed at full speed worldwide, and has brought the enormous progresses to our life. for example, the car is the most convenient tool of transportation. we can be on and off duty by car every day, we can go to travel by car on the vacation, we can utilize the cars to deal with some emergency

29、too. the car is playing an important role in our daily life. they make our rhythm of life faster and faster, make our business become more and more efficient. on the other hand, the development of the automobile has brought a lot of infant industry to people, give people countless employment opportu

30、nities too. such as, manufacturing industry, repairing industry and maintaining industry. we are enjoying the convenience that the cars bring to us; at the same time we can utilize the auto industry to support ourselves.however, we can not ignore that too many cars cause enormous social problems, fo

31、r example, traffic jam, air pollution, traffic accident, to which we have to find a solution. in a word, the cars have brought enormous change to our life; the advantages are far more than the disadvantages. we should recognize the merit of the cars, and do our best to solve the problems. if so, our

32、 life will be brighter.version 00106 范文1 nowhere in the world has the issue of tobacco been so much debated as inn drug to peoples health, therefore many people think that smoking is legal that is a direct and primary reason to induce this kind of problem. the above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons. the main reason is that tobacco is a silent killer to smokers. tobacco is known to be the probable cause of some 2