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1、中考英语作文练习英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。内容要点及要求：1. 表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；2. 你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；3. 词数：80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。提示词（可选用）：learn from, respect, care for, do some housework, study hardMonday, June 30 SunnyThis morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the m

2、ost beautiful filial piety youth in 2013 ”. 【答案】Monday, June 30 SunnyThis morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.I used to make my parents

3、unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety youth like them. (

4、88 words)【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:set an example for为树立榜样；used to do sth过去常常做某事；take care of照顾；try ones best to do sth尽力做某事；强调句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。考点：考查提纲类作文。请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habit

5、sIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questions Quarrel(争吵) with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play computergames for more than an hour要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。3、词数不少于60

6、个英语单词。4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。【答案】One possible versionDear Mary, Im very glad to introduce(介绍) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises

7、(for a long time). After supper she helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. )But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesnt go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer gam

8、es for more than an hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. )I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be

9、 glad to do sth高兴做某事；a lot of许多；get up起床等。本文中时间词如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明。在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.考点：考查提纲类作文3.假设你是李华，请在答题卡相应位置用英语给你的美国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，告诉他以下事情： 1感谢他给你寄来的那些书。你非常喜欢它们，每晚睡前都会读几页。请他下次来信时给你介绍一些美国的节日。 2非常盼望与他面对面交谈，所以希望他明年夏天能来你的家

10、乡。你愿意作他的导游。你们可以一起参观一些有趣的地方。 3顺便问一下，这些天他是否在电视中看世界杯。注意事项： 1文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名等内容。 2可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 3词数70110，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：邮寄：mail/post v导游：guide n世界杯：the World CupDear Jim, How is it going?【答案】Dear Jim, How is it going? Thank you for mailing the books to me. I like them so much that I read so

11、me pages every day before going to bed. When you write to me next time, could you tell me something about American festivals such as Thanksgiving Day? I do hope that you can come and visit my hometown next summer. On the one hand we can talk face to face and discuss some problems that we are both in

12、terested in. On the other hand, I will be very happy to act as your guide and show you around some nice places. By the way, are you watching the World Cup on TV these days? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:thank sb for sth因为某事感谢某人；sothat如此以至于；such a

13、s比如；On the one hand On the other hand, 一方面另一方面； It is adj to do sth，做某事怎么样等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。考点：考查提纲类作文4. 现在养宠物狗已成为很多人生活中的一部分，请你写一篇短文谈一谈对养宠物狗的看法，内容须含利弊两方面。提示：1. 养宠物狗可给人带来快乐，消减孤独与烦恼，陪伴并帮助家人解决一些困难等。2. 养宠物狗会占用很多时间。宠物狗有一定危险性，有时会伤害孩子。另外，它会给家人和邻居带来噪音，污染周围环境等。注意：不要将上述所给的提示直接译成英文，要适当发挥

14、或调整。 词数约80左右。（句首已给出的部分不计入总词数）How Do You Like Pet Dogs?Every morning, we can see many kinds of pet dogs led by the persons who walk around. Pet dogs have become a part of their lives. I think 【答案】How Do You Like Pet Dogs?Every morning, we can see many kinds of pet dogs led by the persons who walk aro

15、und. Pet dogs have become a part of their lives. I think keeping pets brings joy to our life.Actually, it is good to keep pets because pets can play with the young and accompany the old. Research also shows that living with a pet helps to relieve peoples pressure and distress and even decreases the

16、possibility of getting heart diseases.However, many are against living together with animals. They argue that pets are easily infected by diseases, which may pass on to humans.Whats more, the unpleasant smell and waste caused by pets are a resource of environmental pollution.So we avoid potential ri

17、sks and troubles, we have to make sure that our pets are properly vaccinated and their behaviors are under control.【解析】试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于养宠物的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意将提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等。注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性

18、；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。【亮点说明】这篇范文中出现一些不错的句式和短语，如become a part of成为的一部分；Whats more而且，再说；强调句式， It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样；make sure确保；以及由if引导的条件状语从句等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。考点：提纲作文5.请以“My favorite teacher”为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格。提示 (短文须包含下列要点)：1. What subje

19、ct does your favorite teacher teach?2. What does he/she look like? And how about his/her personal traits(性格)?3. Tell a story about how he/she helped you.4. What do you want to say to him/her when you meet in the future?注意：短文中, 老师的姓名请一律使用Mr Wang或Ms Wang，不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。My favorite teache

20、r_【答案】My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of tea

21、ching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we arein trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:be strict with对严格；be ready to do sth准备做某事；in trou

22、ble处于困难中；try ones best do to sth尽力做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。考点：考查提纲类作文6.莹莹的父母外出打工了，她到学校寄宿学习。开始她感到不习惯，在老师和朋友们的帮助下，现在学习、生活非常好。假设你是莹莹，请根据下表提示给父母写一封信，介绍你的在校情况和今后的打算。1Subjectsfavorite, do well in 2Activitiescompetition, sports 3Friendsget on well 4Spare timewash clothes, reading 5Planwo

23、rk hard 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 2. 条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范。 3. 可以适当发挥。4. 词数：80词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mom and Dad, How time flies! I miss you very much! I was not used to everything here a few weeks ago. But now I enjoy my school life. Yours, Yingying 【答案】Dear Mom and Dad,How time flies! I miss you very

24、much! I was not used to everything here a few weeks ago. But now I enjoy my school life. We have nine subjects at school. My favorite subject is history. Its interesting and I can learn a lot from it. With the help of my teacher, I do better in English. There are many activities at school. Last week

25、, I took part in a singing competition and won the first prize. I have made lots of friends here and we get on well with each other. In my spare time, I usually wash my clothes or do some reading. Sometimes I play sports with my friends. Im stronger than before. Dont worry about me. I can look after

26、 myself very well and will work harder in the future. Yours, Yingying【解析】试题分析：这篇短文要求我们就表格内容写一封给妈妈的信。表格中给了我们这篇短文的主要内容。主要内容包括：一是关于学科方面，包括你最喜欢的学科和擅长的学科等。二是关于活动方面，比赛和体育活动有什么等。三是交友方面，你与同学们相处情况。四是业余时间的活动，如洗衣服、读书五是你的计划，如今后要努力学习这5方面的内容是我们写作的根据，但还需要我们自己去充实一些内容，让短文更加完整、充实。我们需要发挥想象力，把我们平时积累的知识加以运用。另外，写作时，还需注意语

27、句间的衔接要紧密，使文意连贯，表达流畅。时态方面要注意，如Last week, I took part in a singing competition and won the first prize.等，叙述过去发生的事情要用过去时态。如I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.对将来的打算计划要用一般将来时。【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者紧紧围绕要点，向妈妈讲述自己的一些情况，并告诉妈妈自己的计划等。叙述要点完整、正确，清晰，语言连贯流畅，有效地传达了规定的信息。短文中需要作者自己补充

28、的内容完成得很好，如Its interesting and I can learn a lot from it.等。这些内容都比较符合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如How time flies! I was not used to everything here a few weeks ago. I can look after myself very well and will work harder in the future.等。考点：提纲类作文。7.假设你是一名来自雅安的中学生李红,今年14 岁, 暑假你将参加学校组织的赴北京的夏令营活动。请你用英语写一篇在开营仪式上的自我介绍发言稿。请将该发言稿写在答题卡相应的位置上。词数 60 - 90。发言稿还包括以下要点:1. 你爱好画画;2. 课余时间你喜欢野营,喜欢在大自然中画植物,聆听鸟儿的歌唱;3. 你最喜欢的科 目是科学,希望长大以后成为一名科学家;4. 你很高兴参加夏令营,希望你们能成为好朋友。_