高中英语必修二unit2writing-精品课件.ppt

1、Learning goals 1.To talk about favorite sport.2.To master some useful expressions and linking words of writing.3.To write a passage to describe favorite sport.Enjoy some pictures.Do you know these athletes?What sport are they good at?basketballJordanfootball/soccerMessitennisLi Natable tennis/ping-p

2、ongZhang YiningbadmintonLin DangymnasticsLi XiaopengswimmingSun YangrunningLiu Xiang1.Whats your favorite sport?2.When&why do you like this sport?3.What do you do to improve your skill?4.Who is your favorite athlete?5.Whats your hope or dream?A.Whats your favorite sport?B:I like_best.A:When&why do y

3、ou like this sport?B:I became interested in_ when I was_ I like_ because_A:What do you do to improve your skill?B:I often practice it_A:Who is your favorite athlete?B:My favorite athlete is_ I like _because_ A:Whats your hope or dream?B:I hope in the future I can_单元写作单元写作-My Favorite Sport 如何描写最喜欢的一

4、项运动如何描写最喜欢的一项运动(说明文说明文,可穿插记叙和讨论可穿插记叙和讨论)My Favorite Sport Of all sports,I like badminton best.I became interested in it when I was a kid.I am fond of playing badminton because it can not only build our bodies,but also train our brains.Therefore,I join the Badminton Club in our school.To improve my s

5、kill,I often practice it whenever Im free.Besides,I play games with my friends after school.My favorite athlete is Lin Dan,who is a world champion.I admire him because he is so skillful with the ball.Although I am not good enough now,I really hope I will be a good player like him in the future.第一步：第

6、一步：My Favorite Sport Of all sports,I like badminton best.I became interested in it when I was a kid.I am fond of playing badminton because it can not only build our bodies,but also train our brains.Para1 what,when and why Therefore,I join the Badminton Club in our school.To improve my skill,I often

7、practice it whenever Im free.Besides,I play games with my friends after school.Para2 how to improve My favorite athlete is Lin Dan,who is a world champion.I admire him because he is so skillful with the ball.Although I am not good enough now,I really hope I will be a good player like him in the futu

8、re.Para3 favorite athlete&dream第二步：第二步：1.Of all the sports,I like.best.2.I became interested in.when I was.At the age of.,I showed great interest in.3.I like/am fond of/fall in love with.because.The reason why I like.is that.4.I often practice it.Whenever I have time/I am free,.5.My favorite athlete

9、 is.I like because.6.I hope I can.in the future.I really want to be a(n).when I grow up.Useful expressions for writing万能句式万能句式最喜欢的运动最喜欢的运动喜欢该运动的时间喜欢该运动的时间喜欢该运动的原因喜欢该运动的原因现怎么从事现怎么从事/提高该运动提高该运动最喜欢的运动员最喜欢的运动员梦想梦想第三步：第三步：递进递进besides,whats more,in addition not onlybut also对等对等on one hand,on the other han

10、d,让步让步although,even though/if,whenever因果因果so,thus,therefore 转折转折however,but 列举列举such as,for example并列并列also,as well总结总结altogether,all in all,in a word.Useful linking words 连接词连接词e.g.“喜欢喜欢”like,love,be fond of,fall in love with,have a fancy for,be crazy about when引导时间状语从句引导时间状语从句I became interested i

11、n when I was同位语、表语从句同位语、表语从句The reason why I like.(同位语)is that.Advanced vocabulary&sentences structure高级词汇和句式高级词汇和句式Pay attention to：spelling mistakes(拼写错误)logical and grammatical mistakes(逻辑、语法错误)第四步：第四步：查漏补缺查漏补缺(check the mistakes)题目：My Favorite Sport要求：字数100左右 限时15分钟 自评自评+互评互评 15 Main points(要点齐全

12、语句通顺要点齐全语句通顺)5 Structures(结构紧凑过渡自然结构紧凑过渡自然)3 Words&Sentences(高级词汇句式多高级词汇句式多样样)3 Handwriting(书写工整美观书写工整美观)1 Paragraphs(分段分段)链接链接:高考英语作文评分标准高考英语作文评分标准25档次档次语法结构、词语法结构、词汇汇复杂结构、高复杂结构、高级词汇级词汇连接成分与结构连接成分与结构写作目的完成情况写作目的完成情况第五档第五档（2125分）分）应用较多应用较多语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇有些许错误有些许错误有效使用连接全文有效使用连接全文结构紧凑结构紧凑完全达到完全达到第四档第四

13、档（1620分）分）满足要求满足要求语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇方面基本准确方面基本准确简单使用连接全文简单使用连接全文结构紧凑结构紧凑达到达到第三档第三档（1115分）分）满足要求满足要求语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇方面的错误有一方面的错误有一些，但不影响理些，但不影响理解解简单使用连接全文简单使用连接全文内容连贯内容连贯基本达到基本达到第二档第二档（610分）分）语法单调，词汇语法单调，词汇有限有限语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇方面的错误有一方面的错误有一些，影响对写作些，影响对写作内容的理解内容的理解较少使用连接成分，较少使用连接成分，内容缺少连贯内容缺少连贯信息未能清楚地传达信息未能清楚地传达给读者给读者第一档第一档（15分）分）语法单调，词汇语法单调，词汇有限有限语法结构或词汇语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，方面的错误较多，影响对写作内容影响对写作内容的理解的理解缺乏连接成分，内缺乏连接成分，内容不连贯容不连贯信息未能传达给读者信息未能传达给读者What have you learnt today?Correct and finish your writing-My Favorite Sport.