全国卷高考英语写作之求职信写作指导(作文评讲).ppt

1、Writing:A Letter of Job Application2016届全市调研作文届全市调研作文 假如你是李华，从报假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训纸上看到中老年英语培训机构机构Mid Senior ESCH 面面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学院课间职辅导员，负责学院课间服务事项，请根据以下内服务事项，请根据以下内容用英语写一份求职信，容用英语写一份求职信，要点包括：要点包括：1.你的英语水平；你的英语水平；2.你的工作经验；你的工作经验；3.你做好这份工作的信心你做好这份工作的信心Type of writing:A letter of job

2、applicationPurpose of writing:to apply for a job to c_ the employer to hire youLanguage:polite convincing/persuasive,logical Tense:The simple present tense(introduction),The present perfect tense/The simple past tense (experience)convinceII Structure of the letter 求职信结构求职信结构Para.1：the opening paragr

3、aph:purpose of the letter How do you know about the recruitment?Which position are you applying for?Para.2:the body:detailed introduction about yourself (Your name)a high school graduate your English proficiency(水平)your working experience Para.3:the closing paragraph conclusion,hope,thanks your conf

4、idence(conclusion)your hope to be interviewed Thank you for your time and consideration.III The content Purpose of the letter:to convince the employer to hire you So you should write something that highlights your advantagesavoids your shortcomingsis relevant/related to the position!My English is no

5、t so good,but I will try my best.Secondly,I have worked in other companies before,where I have gotten enough working experience.Supporting ideas in Para.2 Your English proficiency:英语很好have a good command of English口头、笔头英语流利be fluent in both spoken and written English令人满意的阅读技能satisfactory reading ski

6、lls在高考中取得好成绩 got good grades in the college entrance examination在演讲比赛中屡获佳绩received a good many awards in speech contests中老年英语培训机构中老年英语培训机构;暑期兼职辅导员暑期兼职辅导员;负责学院课间服务事项负责学院课间服务事项Your experience 社区志愿者，定期为老人提供服务 和老人相处得好，沟通容易a community volunteer;offer services to the old regularly;get along well&communica

7、te easily社区志愿者，教老人英语培养了耐心，责任心teach the elderly English;develop my patience and sense of responsibility Supporting ideas in Para.2 Example 1(Score:20)Example 2(Score:22.5)How to get a satisfactory score?a right structure(3-4 paragraphs,purposeintroductionhopethanks)relevant content(highlight the adva

8、ntages)correct&advanced vocabularygood linkingsproper length(80-120)beautiful handwriting Rewriting 我从报纸得贵机构正在招聘暑期兼职辅导员，我对此非常感兴趣。（or：我写信来是想申请您在报纸上广告的暑期兼职辅导员的职位。）作为一名高中毕业生，我熟练掌握英语。我不仅口头和笔头英语都很流利，而且我的阅读技能也是令人满意的。此外，我在服务老人方面有丰富的经验。在我的社区做志愿者已经三年了，我经常因我的周到服务、耐心和强烈的责任感受到赞赏。因此，我很有信心我能胜任这份工作。如果您能给我面试的机会，我将非

9、常感激。感谢您的时间和考虑。我从报纸得贵机构正在招聘暑期兼职辅导员，我对此非常感兴趣。（or：我写信来是想申请您在报纸上广告的暑期兼职辅导员的职位。）I have learned from the newspaper that you are recruiting part-time instructors/assistants during the summer vacation,which appeals to me greatly.Im writing to apply for the position of part-time instructor/assistant,which yo

10、u advertised in the newspaper.作为一名高中毕业生，我熟练掌握英语。我不仅口头和笔头英语都很流利，而且我的阅读技能也是令人满意的。此外，我在服务老人方面有丰富的经验。在我的社区做志愿者已经三年了，我经常因我的周到服务、耐心、强责任感受到赞赏。As a high school graduate,I have a good command of English.Not only am I fluent in both written and spoken English,but also my reading skills are satisfactory.In add

11、ition,I have rich experience in serving the elderly.Having been a volunteer in our community for three years,Im frequently praised for my good service,great patience and a strong sense of responsibility.因此，我很有信心我能胜任这份工作。如果您能给我面试的机会，我将非常感激。感谢您的时间和考虑。Therefore,Im confident that Im qualified for the jo

12、b/Im competent at the job/Im equal to the job.I would appreciate it if I could get a chance to be interviewed./It would be appreciated if you could give me a chance of an interview.Thank you for your time and consideration.Dear Sir/Madam,I have learned from the newspaper that you are recruiting part

13、-time assistants during the summer vacation,which appeals to me greatly.As a high school graduate,I have a good command of English.Not only am I fluent in both written and spoken English,but also my reading skills are satisfactory.In addition,I have rich experience in serving the elderly.Having been

14、 a volunteer in our community for three years,Im frequently praised for my good service,great patience and a strong sense of responsibility.Therefore,Im confident that Im qualified for the job.I would appreciate it if I could get a chance to be interviewed.Thank you for your time and consideration.Yours sincerely,Li HuaHomeworkCorrect the mistakes in your original version Add the original version&the model version to your composition books!