高考英语作文写作技巧和训练.docx

1、高考英语作文写作技巧和训练 高考英语写作高分秘诀近几年来全国英语高考试卷中的写作题目主要是：记人、叙事、写信、通知或看图作文等。大多为记叙文、议论文和应用文。高考英语写作是高考试题中对考生来说相对比较难的一题，高考英语写作主要考查考生综合运用语言的能力。这主要要求考生根据所给的情景和要求写一篇书面材料，但是，它并不是要求考生按照试题里的“提示”进行逐句翻译，而是要求考生在充分领会“提示”的前提下，用自己的语言写成一篇内容充实、语言正确、句子连贯、用词贴切的作文。在写作时，考生应注意以下几点：(1)写记叙文时要有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果六要素，写作的时候要明白清楚地写出来。写人物时，要

2、注意介绍人物的身世、经历和事迹等。叙事时要描写事情发生的经过与发展的结果，写清楚事情发生的前因后果等。(2)写议论文时要求考生就某一方面的问题通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来阐述自己的看法。议论文应由论点、论据、论证三部分构成。(3)高考英语应用文主要以写信为主。写英文书信要注意它们的书写格式，格式一定要正确。英文书信主要由6个部分组成，即：信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结束语、签字。信的正文和写文章一样，要分段落写，每一段要有一个中心思想。在写作中，首先，要根据试题里的“提示”确定一个写作中心，再根据这个中心，列出写作提纲，提纲一定要包含所提供的情景要点，同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。然后，用

3、自己熟悉的词汇与句型扩展成篇。自己不熟悉的词汇与句型能换则换，一定不要用，以免用错扣分。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题。千万不要写那些与主题无关的内容。扩展时要注意短文的字数，要写够100个词语，以避免由于字数不够引起的扣分。也不要扩展得太多，字数达到要求既可，以免浪费时间或出现更多的错误而扣分。那么，在最后的冲刺时间里，不管是什么类型的文章，在具体的写作过程中，我们均可以按如下四大步骤进行强化训练，从而提高写作技巧，解决问题：步骤一：认真审题立意，确定写作中心。找出根据这个中心能够扩展的材料有哪些，要避免那些与中心内容无关的细节。以命题作文“The Classmate I Admire Most”

4、为例，文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位同学，因而就不能泛泛谈论这位同学的家庭关系、社会背景等，而要紧紧抓住这位同学身上能够吸引你的地方展开去。步骤二：围绕中心，列出写作提纲。提纲一定要包含所提供的情景、要点，同时尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。仍以“The Classmate I Admire Most”为例，提纲可以这样写： Who is the Classmate I admire most? My reasons. (Some Examples) What can I learn from the classmate。步骤三，根据字数要求，扩展成篇。有几个可以遵循的规律，供大家参考：1、

5、在整篇文章中，努力避免只是用一、两个句式。要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。2、使用不同长度的句子，通过分句和合句，增强句子地连贯性和表现力。3、改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序，可以把状语置于句首，或用分词等。4、学会使用关联词。如： 递进关系： furthermore; moreover; further; In this way ;still; not only.but also.; not.but.; in addition (to);etc。 转折关系：but; even so; however; though;

6、 even though; etc。 归纳总结类：in other words; on the whole; in sum; therefore; hence; in short; to sum up; in conclusion; in summary; etc。 强调关系：in fact; especially; particularly; moreover; naturally; what is more important; in reality; indeed; in particular; etc。 对照(不同点)：yet; still; for all of that; notw

7、ithstanding; rather; neither . nor; although; though; but; however; etc。 并列关系： and; also; as well as; either.，or.;both.and. etc。 先后次序关系：at this time; first; second; at last; previously; simultaneously; last but not least; to begin with; etc。 结果关系：accordingly; thus; consequently; thereupon; etc。 顺序关系

8、： at the outset，following this; at this time; etc。 重申关系：in other words; that is to say; as I have said; etc。5、尽量避免重复使用同一单词或词组。步骤四、利用最后的时间做“机械性”写作练习，强化记忆。例如：常用的应用文如通知、书信等都有其固定的格式及写作技巧，读懂具体内容，然后把内容套进特定的格式中去，就是一篇条理清楚的书面表达了。比方说：通知要掌握：通知的对象、地点、时间及要做的事情;要注意的事项;写上“Dont be late”或“Be on time”(口头通知前还要写上Boys a

9、nd girls或Ladies and gentlemen，may I have your attention， please?等一类句子)。例如：Class 1 and Class 2 are going to plant trees on Western Hills. Well take a bus to go there. Please bring lunch and water with you. Remember to wear old clothes as well do a lot of hard work. Well meet in front of the school ga

10、te at nine oclock. Dont be late。高考英语书面表达练习1.上海世博会2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动，志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。另外，志愿者或做家教，教小孩子阅读、算术，或打扫公园与街道，或到医院或疗养院帮忙。你愿意做志愿者吗？请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern

11、 society. We all need others help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. Whats more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more en

12、joyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.2.拯救地球处理城市垃圾是一个非常重要的问题。首先，垃圾会导致污染。它会污染空气、水和人们居住的场所。其次，它会危害人类健康。所以我们在城市中，垃圾得到了妥善处理。我们首

13、先将垃圾分类，然后可将旧报纸和玻璃制品进行再生利用。有害的废物要被掩埋，污水要在净化后才排入河流。政府已经制定了规章，禁止垃圾污染。仅仅这些还不够。我们大家必须竭尽全力防止拉圾污染环境以及拯救我们的城市，拯救我们的家园。Saving Our EarthIt is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. For one thing, rubbish may cause a lot of pollution. It may pollute the air, the water and the places we live in. For

14、 another, it may do harm to peoples health.So in our city, rubbish is well dealt with. First, it is sorted. Then old newspapers and glass are recycled. The harmful wastes are buried and the waste water is cleaned before it goes into the river. The government has already made laws against pollution c

15、aused by rubbish.But thats not enough. We must all try our best to prevent rubbish from polluting the environment so as to save our city and our living place.3.防治甲流 最近这几个月里，H1N1病毒在全世界引发起来。如果我们用正确的方法预防它，它就不会那么可怕。这里有一些为你的建议：首先，当你在咳嗽或者打喷嚏的时候，你应该用手捂着嘴。然后你最好尽可能的离公共场所远一点，如果你必须去，请戴上口罩。饭前仔细洗手，经常打开窗后这样使空气保持清

16、新。最后你应该做更多的运动去使你身体更强壮，这样你就可以保持健康了。我认为这才是最重要的。 Lets prevent H1N1 from happening to us.During the last few months,H1N1 has set off across the whole world.If we have the right way to prevent it ,it wont be scary.Here are some suggestions for you:First of all,you should cover your mouth with a napkin or

17、 hand when you cough or sneeze,Next youd better stay away from the public place if possible, if you have to,please wear a mask.Wash your hands carefully before meals and always keep your windows open so that the air will be fresh.At last,try to do more excisice to make your body strong so that you c

18、an stay in health.I think this is the most important.4.书信在紧张的高三备考阶段,英语老师为了提高复习效率,广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华,请根据以下提示,给英语老师写封信,表达你们的需求和建议。适当放慢进度,留出思考时间 反复训练重要、易错知识点指导方法 减少作业量以保证质量 给予更多鼓励注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。Dear Mr. Wang,Were so pleas

19、ed that you are willing to share our views.In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didnt learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ou

20、rselves. As for those important points that also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more eff

21、iciently.By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.5.近来，越来越多的学生在校外租房而不愿住大寝室。请根据下面提示，一分为二地用英语写一篇短文，说说两者各自的好处与坏处，并表明自己的观点。 1. 学习时间； 2. 安全； 3. 自由性； 4. 与同学交往； 5. 学习效果。注意：可从其他角度阐述，但两方面的理

22、由都至少要有两条；词数100左右。 Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm. Instead, they rent houses outside the school. There are advantages for both. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates. And of course it is safer. A dorm is more like a society, wich enables

23、 students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later. As for renting houses to live alone, its better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others. As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedl

24、y. But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside the school. Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.6.请根据下列中文提示，用英语向来访的贵宾介绍你校新建的网络学校。（1）使教和学更方便，更有趣，能在课堂上获取更多的信息，学到更多知识。（2）向师生开放，可向世界各地发送电子邮件，获取信息，等等。（3）只要家中有电脑，任何人都可以学习本校课程。（4）有助于改善学校的管理，满足现代化教育的需要。（5）作为重点学校（key school），对于其他的新

25、建中学起示范和帮助作用。注意：1短文须包含上面提示，可以适当增减内容使文章连贯。2词数：120左右。Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school. Now I would like to introduce our net-school. Our net-school is very helpful in many ways. First, it makes both teaching and learning easier and more interesting. Students can get more knowledge in class.

26、Whoever has a computer can have the lesson we give at home. Second, we can make good use of the Internet, sending e-mails, searching for any information we need, etc. Third, the net also helps improve our school management and meet the needs of modern education. Fourth, as a key school in our city,

27、it sets a good example to the newly-built schools and may be of some help to them.Thats all. Thank you.7.最近，你校试行在课间播放音乐，同学们对此私下议论，看法不一。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，给你的班主任Mr. Brown 写封信，客观地介绍大家的看法。大多数同学赞同，部分同学反对。注意：词数100-120左右赞同者: 反对者:原因播放音乐能活跃气氛。 课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果。能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳。 课间需要的是安静，而不是嘈杂的声音。能给大家带来欢乐和美的享受。

28、 有时上课后还沉浸在课间听的音乐中。 Most of us agree that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, music provides us with relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. Listening to music also makes us feel happy. On the other hand, some students have t

29、he opposite view. They dont think they can get the expected results by listening to music, as the break between classes is short. Whats needed during the break is peace instead of the noise produced by the music. Besides, in class some students are still lost in the music they have just heard.8.Resp

30、ecting Our Parents 现在，很多学生迫于升学就业的压力，把自己的烦恼都宣泄在父母身上，对父母不是很尊敬，甚至和父母争吵动手。针对这种现象，写信给某报编辑，请提出一些具体的建议，让同学们树立尊敬长辈的意识，发扬中华民族的传统美德。Dear editor, Nowadays, there exists an increasingly severe phenomenon that teenagers dont show respect to their parents. As we can read in newspaper or watch in TV, some teenager

31、s quarrel with parents, some talk back and some even resort to violence. As to this problem, Id like to offer several proposals as follows. Initially(First), we should realize that its our parents who give us lives. Without parents, we can not live in this world. Therefore, the importance of respect

32、ing our parents can not be too overemphasized. Whats more, it goes without saying that we have to remember the birth day of our parents, when we can express our gratitude to them. None the less(Meanwhile), respecting our parents should be done from every detail. Just as a proverb goes, “Piety is above all.” (百善孝为先) To sum up, respe