高中英语作文议论文写作.ppt

1、英语写作讲解英语写作讲解高考作文类型：高考作文类型：A.A.数据说明类文章数据说明类文章B.B.提示议论文类文章提示议论文类文章C.C.看图说话类文章看图说话类文章写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤：1.仔细审题，列举大纲。仔细审题，列举大纲。2.围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。3.添加过度，确保连贯。添加过度，确保连贯。4.先求正确，再求灵活。先求正确，再求灵活。5.认真眷写，卷面整洁。认真眷写，卷面整洁。现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不高三学生要不要参加春游活动要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一展开了讨论。请根据以

2、下讨论结果，写一篇短文。篇短文。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健吸新鲜空气，有利健康康高考临近，没有心高考临近，没有心情玩情玩活动是精神放松，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学大脑休息，有利于学习习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习Introduction(topic)Body(supporting ideas)ConclusionThe outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph:Introduction paragraph:Point 2BodyPoint 1supp

3、orting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 2Key words:1.introduction(topic):高三学生春游讨论2.body(supporting ideas):接触自然 呼吸新鲜空气精神放松大脑休息高考临近没心情玩耽误学习3.conclusion:in my opinionKey words:1.introduction(topic):高三学生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）讨论（discussion）2.body(supporting ideas):

4、接触自然（be close to nature）呼吸新鲜空气（breathe some fresh air）精神放松（relax themselves）大脑休息（rest their brains）高考临近（with college entrance examination drawing near）没心情玩（dont feel like going）耽误学习(waste the time)3.conclusion:in my opinionKey words:中学生身体差充足的睡眠加强锻炼，增加户外活动定时吃饭,多吃水果Key words:中学生middle school students身

5、体差in a poor state of healthIn bad condition充足的睡眠enough sleep加强锻炼，增加户外活动take more exercise and do more outdoor activities定时吃饭少吃零食have three meals regularly,eat more vegetables and fruits.主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性开门见山，句式力争多样性How will you start you passage?How will you start you pa

6、ssage?问句：问句：从句：从句：Introduction:（sample）Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系关系Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinions are divided on the question.The body partPoint1:65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观的人认为应该春游（亮明观

7、点）点）Sentence pattern:Most of us(about 65%)hold the opinion that,Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.Reason1Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康气，有利健康Sentence pattern:They think it good to do sth/sth do good to sth In their opinion,it is of great b

8、enefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习息，有利于学习（注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进递进whats more；besides;moreover;in addition；furthermoreEg:they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will

9、be more energetic.Conclusion:Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应明观点，前后呼应。Eg:They think it will do good to their students.Point 2:的学生认为不应该的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）春游（亮明观点）注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）（承上启下）Sentence pattern:However,others prefer toSome others have just the opposite opinion.On th

10、e other hand.Eg:On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.Reason 1:Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩高考临近，没有心情玩 Sentence pattern:They say/believe/hold the opinion that.Eg:They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Reason 2:春游耽误学习春游耽误学习（注意：两个观点之间的连

11、接）（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.M

12、ost students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it wil

13、l do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fi

14、x their attention on their studies 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起总起:Opinions are divided on this question.Different people hold different/opposite opinions.People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.People take different views on this question.B.

15、表达观点一表达观点一:of them hold the opinion that.of them are in favor of the idea that People who are for the idea think C.表达不同观点之间的衔接表达不同观点之间的衔接:However,of them hold a different view./of them hold the opposite opinion.People who are against it dont think so.However,every coin has two sides.Different from t

16、hose.,people think.On the other hand,people think.D.结尾常用套语结尾常用套语:In my opinion/Personally,As far as Im concerned,In short/in brief/in a word,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and res