教育资料牛津上海版中考英语专题复习13 作文专题学案学习精品.docx

1、教育资料牛津上海版中考英语专题复习13 作文专题学案学习精品 学科教师辅导讲义学员编号： 年 级：初三 课 时 数：3学员姓名： 辅导科目：英语 学科教师：龚莜楠授课类型C专题 写作高级句型默写C专题 作文解析T能力能力提高 授课日期及时段 教学内容作文评分标准：按内容、语言、组织结构的标准评分。内容：内容切题、充实、不写废话；意思连贯，表达清楚、准确、完整。语言：语言基本正确；用语规范、无或少见语法错误；拼写、大小写和标点正确。结构：词汇和句型句式运用恰当自如；文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达形式。中考作文打分的三个档次和评分标准：A档次的作文一般运用了较多的连接词、短语、并列、倒装、时间状语

2、从句、被动语态，审题合理、时态使用正确；字数符合要求；没有大小写、拼写错误。得分在18以上分B档次的作文一般审题可以，有一定的过程描述，语言较流畅，叙述基本完全；复合句；时态基本正确。得分在16-18 分C档次的作文一般能够使用不同的句子，大小写、标点使用正确，会使用些连接词。但语言上可能还需要更加丰富饱满。得分在13-151. 重点句型1). Its adj for sb to do 做对某人来说2). so that 如此 以至于 too to do 太 而不能such that 如此 以至于3). notuntil 直到才例： I didnt go to bed until my mot

3、her came back。4).The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 的原因是The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。)5). That is why + 句子 那是的原因6). That is because + 句子 那是因为7). It is said that + 句子 据说It is reported that + 句子 据报道8). There is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问9). It goes without saying

4、 that + 句子 不言而喻，毫无疑问10). There is no need to do 没必要做11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义12. as is known to all, +句子 众所周知as we all know, +句子 据我们所知it is generally/ publicly known / considered that, 众所周知 2.提建议had better (not) do 最好(不)做how about / what about doing 怎么样?I think you should do 我认为你应该I su

5、ggest / advice that you should do 我建议你做If I were you, I would do 我要是你的话，我会做Its best to do 最好做Why not do / why dont you do? 为什么不 3.表示喜欢和感兴趣like / love doingenjoy doingbe fond of doing 喜欢做be keen on n/doing 喜欢做prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做Bbe interested in doing = show/ take great interest

6、in n / doing 4.努力做try to do努力做strive to do 努力做try ones best to do = do ones best to do 竭尽全力做make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做do what / everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做 5. 打算做 / 计划做intend / plan to do 打算做be going to do 打算做decide

7、to do 决定做determine to do决定做be determined to do决定做make up ones mind to do 下定决心做 6. 表示想/希望want to do= would like to do 想做hope to do 希望做expect to do 期待着做wish to do 希望做consider doing 考虑做 7. 只加doing 作宾语的动词finish 完成/ practice 练习 / suggest建议 / consider 考虑 / mind 介意 / enjoy 喜欢doing固定句型look forward to doing

8、盼望做keep on doing 坚持做dream of doing 梦想做cant help doing 情不自禁地做keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心have trouble / have problem / have diffic

9、ulty (in) doing 或 with + 名词 做有困难高级句型默写一、 the + est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) 例句：_ 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 _张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than t

10、o + V 例句：_没有比接受教育更重要的事。 三、 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.（再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。） 例句：_我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。四、There is no denying that + S + V .（不可否认的.） 例句：_不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 六、There is no doubt that + 句子 （毫无疑问的.） 例句：_ 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 七、An advantage of is that + 句子 （.的优点是.） 例句：_ 使用太阳能的优点是

11、它不会制造任何污染。 八、The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 （.的原因是.） 例句：_我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 九、The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more + Adj + S + V（愈.愈.） 例句：_你愈努力，你愈进步。 _我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。 十、By +Ving, can （借着.，.能够.） 例句：_借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。 十一、 enable + Object（受词）+ to + V （.使.能够.） 例句

12、：_ 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 十二、Those who （.的人.） 例句：_ 违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。 十三、There is no one but （没有人不.） 例句：_没有人不渴望上大学。 十四、That is the reason why （那就是.的原因） 例句：_ 夏天很闷热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。 十五、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。 例句：_ 自从他上高中，他一直很用功。 十六、It pays to + V （.是值得的。） 例句：_ 帮助别人是值得的。 十七、be based on （以.为基础） 例句：_ 社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 十八

13、、Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的） 例句：_ 我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 十九、 不用说 It goes without saying that子句 = (It is) needless to say (that)子句 = It is obvious that子句 = Obviously, S. + V. 例不用说早睡早起是值得的。 _二十、就我的看法；我认为 In my opinion, = To my mind, . = As far as I am concerned, = I am of the opinion that子句 例就我的看法;打电动玩具

14、既花费时间也有害健康。 _二十一、据说 It is said (that)子句 一般认为 It is thought (that)子句 大家都知道 It is known (that)子句 据报导 It is reported (that)子句 一般预料 It is expected (that)子句 一般估计 It is estimated (that)子句 一般相信 It is believed (that)子句 例一般相信阅读增加我们的知识、扩大我们的心胸。 _二十二、 然而，很可惜的是 However, it is a pity that子句 例然而;很可惜的是他总是临时抱佛脚。 _

15、二十三、 enable + Object（受词）+ to + V （.使.能够.） 例句：_听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 二十四、On no account can we + V （我们绝对不能.） 例句：_ 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 二十五、It is time + S + 过去式 （该是.的时候了） 例句：_ 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。二十六 随着人口的增加 With the increase/growth of the population, 随着科技的进步, With the advance of science and technology, 在这信息的年代

16、扮演重要的角色。 In the age of information and communication, plays an important role.实例分析： Healthy Life (4.5+2.5+2=9) （A） Now, many students are like only one kinds of food. It not right. It will lead to many kind of problems, such as putting on weight, heart attack. So balanced diet its very important for

17、 our health. I have some suggest about balanced diet. First, we should eat four foods: grains、vegetables、meat、milk products and fruit. Its good for our health. Second, dont stop eating just to lose weight. It is harmful for us. Keep a good balanced diet is good for your future. （B） Now, many student

18、s prefer to eat only one certain kind of food. It is not reasonable. It will lead to many kinds of problems, such as putting on weight, heart attack. So a balanced diet its very important to our health. Without a balanced diet , we cannot live a healthy life. I have some suggestions about balanced d

19、iet. First, we should eat five food: grains、vegetables、meat、milk products and fruit. Its good for our health. Second, dont stop eating just to lose weight. It is harmful for us. Keeping a good balanced diet is good for your future. （C） Many students prefer to eat a certain kind of food and they will

20、 eat nothing else except it. This is a bad habit. An unbalanced diet can cause many problems, such as being overweight and causing heart attack. So its important for you to have a balanced diet, or it will be harmful to your health. On one hand, you should eat various foods from the five food group:

21、 grains, vegetables, fruit, milk products and meat. On the other hand, you had better eat less fast food. Though fast food is easy to get and tasty, it contains too many calories. In short, if you follow the advice above, you can enjoy food that is not only delicious but also healthier too.分析总结： 如何审

22、题立意：认真审题，结构合理:1.写什么(题目，参考问题） 2.重点写什么 (提示问题）3.时态(参考问题）Write at least 60 words about the topic Everybody needs helpUse the following points as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考)Do you agree that everybody needs help?（时态：一般现在时）Have you ever got help from others? (Tell your experiences.)（重点内容）What do you do when o

23、ther people are in trouble? (Give examples.)（重点内容）立意训练：请根据如下的作文题目，阐述你的写作结构大概结构和内容：VII. Writing（写作）：（20分） Nowadays many students are busy with their study. They seldom help their parents with housework .What do you think of it? Try to show your opinions and tell your own experience. （现在，许多学生忙于学习而很少帮助

24、家长做家务，你是怎么看待这种现象的，请给出自己的观点及自己的经历。）（13年奉贤二模）94. Write a passage on “A letter to my headmaster/headmistress ” in at least 60 words according to the given situation (以“给校长的一封信”为题，写一篇不少于60词的文章。) 提示：初中学习阶段肯定给你留下许多的回忆。有甜美，有苦涩，这些都是宝贵的人生经历。在即将告别你的初中生活，请你以Susan的名义给你的校长写一封信，分享一件让你最难忘的校园活动以及提出一个你最希望学校改进的方面。 （注意