刘洪波雅思写作真经班(4).ppt

1、贵学教育 旗下以学以学为贵Treasure Study Glorify Future刘洪波雅思写作真经班IELTS Writing Lecture 4刘洪波刘洪波雅思写作真经班刘洪波雅思写作真经班刘洪波雅思写作真经班刘洪波雅思写作真经班刘洪波雅思写作真经班Lecture4:作业评讲、Task1,说明文、高分范文、预测、论句刘洪波雅思写作真经班Thesetwodiagramsillustratethemainreasonsoflanddegradationintheworldanditsdifferentimpactsonthreeareasduringthe1990s.Accordingtot

2、hefirstpiechart,livestocksover-gazingwasthebiggestfactorleadingtothebarrenland,accountingforthe35%.Thiswasfollowedbydeforestationandover-cultivation,representing30%and28%respectively.Otherunidentifiedreasonsmadeuptheleftproportion,7%collectively.刘洪波雅思写作真经班Ascanbeseenfromthetablewhichhighlightsthedif

3、ferentsituationsinthethreeregions:NorthAmerica,Europe,andOceania,Europewasmostseriouslyaffectedand23%oflandthereturnedintolessproductive,largelycausedbydeforestation(9.8%).Moreover,13%ofagriculturallandinOceaniabecameworse,mainlyduetoover-grazingwhichalonecontributed11.3%.Bycomparison,theconditionin

4、NorthAmericawasmuchbetterandonly5%oftotallanddegraded.Over-cultivationwasthemajortriggerthere,providing3.3%.刘洪波雅思写作真经班Inconclusion,itisclearthatatleast93%offarmlanddegradationworldwidewasrelatedtohumanactivitiesin1990sandalthoughthedominantcausevariesindifferentcontinents,Europesufferedmostduringtha

5、tperiod.刘洪波雅思写作真经班预测预测1.政府类政府类Some people think rich countries should help the poor countries by giving money directly.Others believe that there are other more effective forms of international aids.Whats your opinion?刘洪波雅思写作真经班Povertyisoneofthemostimportantproblemsmanydevelopingcountriesface.However

6、,whattypesofinternationalaidsaremoreeffectiveforthemisacontroversialissue.Inmyview,whatthepoorcountriesneedmostisnotfinancialaidorloans,butadvancedtechnologiesandtalentsinsomekeyareas.刘洪波雅思写作真经班Itisobviousthatadvancedtechnologiesandsciencearethedrivingforcebehindtherichnations.Hi-techproducts,innova

7、tions,andgoodmanagementcangreatlyimprovetheproductivityofwholesocietyandhencethewealthisaccumulatedathighspeed.Therefore,tohelpthepoor,wedbettertogivethemtoolsofmakingfortune.刘洪波雅思写作真经班Moreover,thedevelopedcountriescannotonlysendexpertteamstopoornationstobuildroads,dams,factoriesandotherinfrastructu

8、res,buttraintalentsandexpertsforthem.Therichcountriescanprovidescholarshiporfinancialhelptothestudentsfromthepoorregions,whichsomefamouswesternuniversitiesareactuallydoing.Itisawiserwaytodeliverhelp.刘洪波雅思写作真经班Thisisnottosaythat,undernocircumstances,shouldtherichcountriesnotprovideaidinformofmoney.Of

9、course,moneydefinitelycanhelpthecountryoutofmanyurgentproblems.Buthowcanweassurethatthemoneywillbespentinproperways?刘洪波雅思写作真经班Inconclusion,therearesomeothertypesofaidsrichcountriesmaychoosetoprovidemoreefficienthelp.Meanwhile,iffinancialaidisoffered,wehavetomakesurethatthemoneyisbeingspentonwherepeo

10、plereallyneeditandnotonfillingthepocketsofcorruptpoliticians.(261words)刘洪波雅思写作真经班四段式前提：1.中立2.句子间逻辑清晰3.正反双方各2个论据刘洪波雅思写作真经班四段式前提：1.中立2.语法好，句子间逻辑清晰3.正反双方各2个论据参考讲义刘洪波雅思写作真经班Report最简化刘洪波雅思写作真经班3月考题预测自己试一试预测刘洪波雅思写作真经班3月考题预测我的预测：1.旅游旅游2.政府政府类3.妇女女4.老老龄化化5.媒体广告媒体广告6.全球多元文化全球多元文化7.科技科技8.教育教育刘洪波雅思写作真经班搭配、论句、素材、范文尽在最简化雅思写作刘洪波雅思写作真经班5分同学真诚建议上语法真经班。祝各位高分！留学前建议：