英语段落写作标准.ppt

1、写好段落的三个标准写好段落的三个标准一、段落的统一性一个段落应该只说明一个问题，一个段落应该只说明一个问题，或一个问题的某一方面；应该只或一个问题的某一方面；应该只叙述一件事情，叙述一件事情，或一件事情的某或一件事情的某一个阶段。也就是说，一个段落一个阶段。也就是说，一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想以外的心，任何游离于中心思想以外的句子都是不可取的。句子都是不可取的。一一个个好好的的段段落落应该具具有有统一一性性。统一一性性就就是是一一个个中中心心思思想想统领整整个个段段落落。每每个个细节都都应支支持持主主题句句，不不应有有无无关关的的细节

2、。为了了支支持持主主题，要要尽尽可可能能多多地地提提供供细节，但又要避免，但又要避免滥用用细节。下下图是一个有是一个有统一性的段落的一性的段落的结构构图。主主题句句(topic sentence）_Supporting Sentence 1 _ Supporting Sentence 2 _ Supporting Sentence 3 _ Supporting Sentence 4例文：例文：Millions of years ago,Australia was linked to Asia by a land bridge.Then an earthquake caused the land

3、 bridge to sink.The sea rushed in,and Australia became an island.Later,this island became a British colony.Many animals that once wandered back and forth across the land bridge were left in Australia.And kangaroos were among them.Though they were killed off by large animals in other places,they were

4、 about to survive in Australia.这一段讲的是远古时期的澳大利亚，当时连这一段讲的是远古时期的澳大利亚，当时连人类都没有，但然不必提它后来沦为英国的人类都没有，但然不必提它后来沦为英国的殖民地的事了。此句应删掉。殖民地的事了。此句应删掉。二、段落的完整性一个段落的主题思想靠发展句来一个段落的主题思想靠发展句来实现，如果只有主题句而没有发实现，如果只有主题句而没有发展句来进一步交待和充实，就不展句来进一步交待和充实，就不能构成一个完整的段落。能构成一个完整的段落。In my English study,I have many difficulties.My first

5、 difficulty is that my vocabulary is not large.The second difficulty I have is that I can not write well.The third difficulty is that my listening comprehension is not good enough.Now I have a plan to study English well.主题句：主题句：I have many difficulties.发展句：具体说明困难发展句：具体说明困难 My first difficulty;The se

6、cond difficulty;The third difficulty.结尾句：结尾句：Now I have a plan 篇章结构：分析：本段落看似完整，有头有尾。但由于缺少实质内容即对学英语的困难的原因的分析，文章显得空洞无物；此外，结尾句讲到了plan,具体内容有没有交待，给人留下话好像没说完的感觉。修改如下：In my English study,I have many difficulties.The following are some of them.My first difficulty is that my vocabulary is not large.As a resu

7、lt,I can not read fast and understand well.As I am coming to middle age,it is not so easy to keep many new words in mind quickly.过渡句分析词汇量小的害处分析词汇量小的害处进一步分析问题的原因进一步分析问题的原因The second difficulty I have is that I can not write well.As I have been very busy with my work which really doesnt need any forei

8、gn language,I seldom have a chance to write something in English.The third difficulty is that my listening comprehension is not good enough.This is because I had little training in listening while I was at college.造成这一问题的原因造成这一问题的原因造成这一问题的原因造成这一问题的原因 To get over these difficulties,I have worked out

9、a plan.I plan to read one or two pages of English,such as China Daily,21st Century English or some easy novels,in order to memorize the words on the one hand and keep in touch with the current news on the other.主题句具体措施-1表明目的I will try to keep a diary in English and practice writing at least twice a

10、week.And finally I will try to listen to English cassettes two or three days.I believe that so long as I practice,I will be able to read,write,and understand better.具体措施-2具体措施-3结尾句，表明态度结尾句，表明态度三、段落的连贯性连贯性包括连贯性包括意连意连内在的逻辑型；内在的逻辑型；和和形连形连使用过渡词语、过渡句使用过渡词语、过渡句等方式。两者常常不可分割。只等方式。两者常常不可分割。只有形连而没有意连，句子之间没有形连

11、而没有意连，句子之间没有内在的有机联系；反之，只有有内在的有机联系；反之，只有意连而没有形连，有时行文就不意连而没有形连，有时行文就不够流畅。够流畅。如何取得连贯性的建议如何取得连贯性的建议1）使用同一时态）使用同一时态如果随意而毫无理由地改变时态，如果随意而毫无理由地改变时态，那么不管作者连句的技巧多么高超，那么不管作者连句的技巧多么高超，段落也不可能取得连贯性。在写作段落也不可能取得连贯性。在写作时，可以使用现在时或过去时。选时，可以使用现在时或过去时。选用哪一种取决于作者处理材料的方用哪一种取决于作者处理材料的方式。式。2)使用某种逻辑顺序使用某种逻辑顺序常用的逻辑顺序有：常用的逻辑顺序

12、有：1）时间顺序）时间顺序2）空间顺序）空间顺序3）重要性顺序）重要性顺序4）熟悉度顺序）熟悉度顺序3)使用连接成分使用连接成分使用某些连接词和短语，重复某些使用某些连接词和短语，重复某些关键词，可以大大增加段落的连贯关键词，可以大大增加段落的连贯性。某些性。某些连接词连接词、短语短语和和关键词关键词可可以起粘着物的作用，把各部分连接以起粘着物的作用，把各部分连接起来，使句子间的关系更加清楚。起来，使句子间的关系更加清楚。连接成分主要有以下三种：连接成分主要有以下三种：a连接词语b代词:代词用于提醒读者注意其先行词，以此把有关的部分连接起来。c重复关键词语示范段落示范段落 Until rece

13、ntly daydreaming was viewed as a waste of time Or it was considered an unhealthy escape from real life and its duties But now some people are taking a fresh look at daydreaming And it may be that more people are suffering from a lack of daydreaming than are suffering from too much of it连接词连接词连接词连接词示

14、范段落示范段落 Until recently daydreaming was viewed as a waste of time Or it was considered as unhealthy escape from real life and its duties But now some people are taking a fresh look at daydreaming And it may be that more people are suffering from a lack of daydreaming than are suffering from too much

15、of it代词代词代词代词代词代词示范段落示范段落 Until recently daydreaming was viewed as a waste of time Or it was considered as unhealthy escape from real life and its duties But now some people are taking a fresh look at daydreaming And it may be that more people are suffering from a lack of daydreaming than are suffer

16、ing from too much of it重复关键词重复关键词重复关键词重复关键词重复关键词重复关键词开始陈述开始陈述to begin with，to start with，lets begin with,first of all,in the first place，above all,at first1.I thought today was going to be really bad.To start with,it was raining,and rainy days make me sad.2.I dont agree that animals should live in the zoo.To begin with,/First of all they have no freedom 3.At first,I thought it might be a dog,but I cant see a dog.4.I thought today was going to be really bad.To start with,it was raining,and rainy