四级写作高分技巧.ppt

1、四级写作高分技巧四级写作高分技巧Strategies for CET-4 Writing 王飞飞 Outline一.评分原则与标准 （2学时）二.历年真题回顾,趋势预测 （2学时）三.得分技巧 （20学时）四.常见错误分析 （4学时）五.复习规划 （2学时）三三 得分技巧得分技巧 （20学时）学时）A.写作基础知识写作基础知识：词语的运用，句子写作，段落写作，短文写作B.语言技巧语言技巧 1.过渡词与过渡句2.高分模板3.词语变化与句子变化4.图表类作文5.书信类作文四四.常见错误分析常见错误分析A.遣词造句中的常见错误（句子结构，时态，单复数，词语搭配)B.常见语篇错误C.文章的修改课程考核

2、课程考核考 勤 10%课堂表现及作业 20%期末测试 70%一.评分原则与标准大学英语四级考试作文的目的旨在考核学生英语书面表达的能力，而并不是把学生对题目的理解放在考察的第一位。作文考试时间为30分钟,要求写出不少于120个词的短文。四级考试作文的出出题题方方式式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文和书信作文三大类。其中绝大多数是命题作文，书信作文和图表作文在最近几年才出现。考试的作作文文内内容容为社会、科技、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。对作作文文的的要要求求是：切题，文理通顺，表达正确，意思连贯，无重大语言错误。语言比内容更重要写作步骤：审题（3分钟）避免跑题

3、写作 （25分钟）尽量避免打草稿 检查 （2分钟）语法（时态，现在或过去时）语法太差很难取得高分（语感很重要，大量阅读，背诵）主谓一致冠词拼写标点下面介绍四级考试作文的评分原则和标准，并通过五份样卷作一个详细说明。(一一)作文评分原则作文评分原则1.CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。2.CET作文题采用总体评分（Global Scoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（Reward Scores）,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3.从内容内容和语言语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，

4、而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。4.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括0分，一名阅卷人员在所阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。(二二)作文评分标准作文评分标准1.本题满分为15分。2.阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分），若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分），但不得加或减半分。4.评分标

5、准：2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。.字数不足应酌情扣分注:1.如题目中给出主题句,起始句,结束句,均不得计入所写字数2.规定内容未写全者，按比例扣分。3.如果扣为0分，要谨慎处理。累计字数110

6、-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50-59 49 扣 分 12345678 实例：实例：2008年6月CET-4作文题Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:娱乐活动多种多样娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害作为大学生，我认为14分作文

7、With the society developing rapidly,a variety of recreational activities thrive.People can stay home enjoying TV,playing computer games,watching movies,and listening to music,or go out to parties,bars,and KTVs,or participate in a multitude of outdoor activities.The choices are numerous.Through recre

8、ational activities,people can get relaxed and healthy physically and mentally,have better interpersonal relationships,and go further with their interests.However,if they cannot manage the time effectively,they will find lots of time wasted,and themselves addicted to some hobbies like video games,thu

9、s totally neglecting their work or study.As a college student,I strongly believe recreational activities can benefit us greatly if a balance between recreation and other aspects of our life can be worked out.After all,college life without entertainment is a failure,and vice versa.11分作文 There have be

10、en more and more ways to entertain ourselves in the modern society,such as watching TV at home,playing games or listening to music on Internet,going to parties and pubs,as well as taking various sports outdoors.The alternatives are numerous.Fortunately,these activities bring us good health,good rela

11、tionships,good mood,and even good skills;however,since it takes time to get involved in these activities,it wastes our precious time,and affects our work or study to a high degree.In my opinion,for college students,recreational activity plays an important role,and it not only makes the college life

12、more colorful,but cultivates a healthy life attitude for the students.Try to remember,however,the most important thing is to fight a balance between the study and recreational activities.8分作文 The society gets more and more modernized,and therefore,there are more and more recreational activities come

13、 out,like watching TV,surfing on the Internet,watching movies,and taking sports.We have more and more choices.Recreational activities do us good like make us happy,healthy,and get us connected with others.But they also do us harm,like forget out study and works,our families and friends,and get too d

14、eeply in some hobbies,and even bad hobbies.So recreational activities is conflicting.I am a college students,and think recreational activities are good for me,because my college life is boring,and I want to make it colorful.Only recreational activities make me colorful.It is the same with others.5分作

15、文 There are more recreational activity,like tv,internet,music.And people have different reasons for why they likes.They think recreational make pople strong,for they dont be sick;make pople happy,for they dont be angry and they have something to do;others dont agrees,they think it waste time,money,e

16、nergy,and everything,they dont like them,and dont spend time,money,energy to do this.I am in the second year in college,I dont dislike recreational,I am too busy,a lot of homwerk to do,I have no time,and energy to it.I think we not do the recreational activities.2分作文 Many people like do recreational activities,for examlay,see cinemas,computers,listen music,games,talks,kalaok.They do,they thinks happy,interest,they imporove good habitts,fell good,no boring,others,dont do,they thinks no happy,no i