浙江高考英语新题型“概要写作”.ppt

1、高考新题型高考新题型之之概要写作概要写作Summarywhat the summary writing is the criteria of a good summaryhow to write a good summary1235After this class,you will be able to know:普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数词数少于少于4040的和的和多余多余8080的，的，从从总分中减去总分中减去2 2分分评分原则1 1、本题总分为、本题总分为2525分，按

2、分，按5 5个档次给分。个档次给分。2 2、评评分分时时，先先根根据据所所写写概概要要的的内内容容和和语语言言初初步步确确定定其其所所属属档档次次，然然后后以以该该档档次次的的要要求求来来衡衡量量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。确定或调整档次，最后给分。3 3、词数少于、词数少于4040的和多于的和多于8080的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2 2分。分。评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：(1)(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；(2)(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；(3)(3)上下文的连贯性；上下文的连贯性

3、；(4)(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况；对各要点表达的独立性情况；Narration（记叙文）（记叙文）Exposition Exposition（说明文）（说明文）（说明文）（说明文）Forms of LiteratureArgumentation(议论文）议论文）Argumentation(议论文）议论文）TopicSupporting ideasConclusion概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para 1)Getting rid of dirt,in the opinion of most people,is a good thing.Ho

4、wever,there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.(Para2)Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedtheb

5、athhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthe

6、meritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsr

7、epeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,Mar

8、yRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirtStep 1:Readtopic sentence:structureFind out the topic sentence of each paragraphthink,believe,consider,regard,argu

9、e,support,be convinced that,in ones opinion,from ones point of viewYou may need to pay attention to some words like:Para2:Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardanger

10、wasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattacko

11、fdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.ExamplesofsomeEuropeancountries(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdis

12、ease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowa

13、rntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.Step 2:Make an outline Topic:Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodir

14、tsuppor-tingIdeas(Para2)(Para3)nowadays(Para4)Inthe16thcenturysince18thcenturyPeoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdiseasehasnolongerbeenregardedascleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealthencourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem Step 3:Rewrite the sentences in other ways There

15、is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.different,mixed,various反义转换opinions,views,ideas同义词替换同义词替换 Peoples attitudes to dirt vary in different times.towards句型转换句型转换 People hold different opinions towards dirt over time.The attitudes to dirt is not always the same.In the early 16th century,people tho

16、ught that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease.Have a try!In the early 16th century,people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease.think:believe,hold,consider,insist,argue,are convinced that.同义词替换同义词替换block out disease:prevent/protect/keep away from illness;One possible version:In the 16th century,people believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century.Scientifically speaking,c