写作技巧点拨系列(七).ppt

1、写作技巧点拨系列(七)精研材料,轻松驾驭提纲作文提提纲类作作文文在在高高考考书面面表表达达中中占占最最大大的的比比重重,考考查根根据据提提示示语写写短短文文、书信信、演演讲、报道道、介介绍和和说明明人人物物或或情情况况等等,命命题常常以以短短文文提提示示、要要点点提提示示和和表表格格提提示示三三种种形形式式呈呈现。要要求求考考生生首首先先确确定定中中心心思思想想,然后然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开中心思想展开论述。写作述。写作时要注意以下几点要注意以下几点:1.要按照提要按照提纲的思路写的思路写,既不能偏离既不能偏离,也不能随意增减也不能随意增减;2.有时提纲类作文所提供的要点顺序并非就是写作时的顺

2、序有时提纲类作文所提供的要点顺序并非就是写作时的顺序,因此因此,写写作前先将要点标出作前先将要点标出,并按照一定的逻辑关系把这些要点排列并整理好。并按照一定的逻辑关系把这些要点排列并整理好。要考虑各要点之间该用什么样的连接词或连接句进行有效的衔接过渡要考虑各要点之间该用什么样的连接词或连接句进行有效的衔接过渡;3.提纲只是对文章的提示或概括提纲只是对文章的提示或概括,不是主题句。考生需要根据提纲的不是主题句。考生需要根据提纲的性质性质,写出体现提纲主旨的句子作为主题句写出体现提纲主旨的句子作为主题句,然后围绕主题句进行扩展。然后围绕主题句进行扩展。【写作指写作指导】.常用句型常用句型1.开篇句

3、开篇句(1)With the development of.随着随着的的发展展(2)I am of the opinion that both arguments hold some truth.我我认为两种两种观点都有点道理。点都有点道理。(3)At present,there is a widespread concern that teenagersusing mobile phones in school will affect their study.目前目前,人人们普遍担心青少年在学校使用手机会影响他普遍担心青少年在学校使用手机会影响他们的学的学习。(4)Modern techno

4、logy has many advantages.现代科技有很多代科技有很多优势。(5)I am very glad to have the chance to speak here.我很高我很高兴有机会在有机会在这里演里演讲。(6)We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things.我我们都都想想快快乐健健康康地地成成长,那那么么为了了这一一目目标我我们应当做几件事情。当做几件事情。(7)Its a pleasure to tell you my plan of th

5、is coming summer vacation after the college entrance exam.非常非常乐意告意告诉你我高考后即将到来的暑假安排。你我高考后即将到来的暑假安排。2.连接句接句(1)Among all the given reasons,one should be focused.在在给出的所有原因中出的所有原因中,有一点必有一点必须被被强强调。(2)The main reason why.is that.的主要原因是的主要原因是(3)Another consideration in this case is that.对这种情况的另一种考种情况的另一种考虑是

6、是(4)Besides,we shouldnt neglect that.此外此外,我我们不不应该忽忽视(5)Therefore,these findings show the following information.因此因此,这些些发现显示了如下信息。示了如下信息。(6)Wonderful as robot application is,it has many disadvantages as well.尽管机器人的尽管机器人的应用很美妙用很美妙,它也有很多的弊端。它也有很多的弊端。3.结尾句尾句(1)Taking all these factors into account,we ma

7、y safely reach the conclusion that the advantages of making friends online outweigh its disadvantages.考考虑到到这些些所所有有的的因因素素,我我们可可以以得得出出这样的的结论:网网上交友的利大于弊。上交友的利大于弊。(2)There is still a long way to go to solve the problem,but we sincerely hope that everyone can make a little effort.要要解解决决这个个问题仍仍然然有有很很长的的一一

8、段段路路要要走走,但但我我们真真诚地地希希望望每每个个人人都能做一点努力。都能做一点努力。(3)If we do those things well,we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.如果我如果我们把那些事情做好把那些事情做好,我我们就能就能够快快乐健康地成健康地成长。(4)Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature.只有以只有以这种方式我种方式我们才能与大自然和才能与大自然和谐相相处。(5)In short,we live in an age full of chall

9、enges.总之之,我我们生活在一个充生活在一个充满挑挑战的的时代。代。(6)I hope these measures would help deal with these problems and have a good effect on our education.我我希希望望这些些措措施施能能帮帮助助解解决决这些些问题并且并且对我我们的教育有良好的影响。的教育有良好的影响。.黄金模板黄金模板Nowadays,there are more and more _ in some big cities.It is estimated that_.Why have there been so

10、 many_?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that_.Besides,_.The third reason is_.To sum up,the main cause of _ is due to _.It is high time that something were done upon it.On the one hand,_.On the other hand,_.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _.XX用具体数据用具体

11、数据说明明XX现象象XX原因一原因一原因二原因二原因三原因三XX指出主要原因指出主要原因解决建解决建议一一解决建解决建议二二XX【典典题示例示例】(2014北京高考北京高考)你你给英国朋友英国朋友Chris写一封信写一封信,内容包括内容包括:1.你你们原原计划划7月份一同去云南旅游月份一同去云南旅游;2.由于脚部受由于脚部受伤,你无法按原你无法按原计划前往划前往;3.表达你的歉意并建表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推将旅行推迟到到8月份。月份。【审题谋篇篇】文章体裁文章体裁应用文用文中心人称中心人称第一人称第一人称I;第二人称第二人称you主要主要时态一般一般过去去时;一般一般现在在时信息要点信息要点

12、1.我我们原原计划划7月份一同去云南旅游月份一同去云南旅游;2.由于脚部受由于脚部受伤,我无法按原我无法按原计划前往划前往;3.我感到非常抱歉我感到非常抱歉,我我们能否将旅行推能否将旅行推迟到到8月份月份?【词句构建句构建】1.词汇汉语一般一般词汇高高级词汇计划划,打算打算want to_按按计划划according to the plan_收到来信收到来信receive a letter_plan to/schedule/intend toas planned/scheduledhear from2.句式句式我我记得我得我们原原计划划7月份一同去云南旅游。月份一同去云南旅游。一般表达一般表达

13、:I remember we wanted to visit Yunnan in July.高高级表达表达:I remember we _Yunnan in July.(用高用高级词汇替替换want to)由于左脚受由于左脚受伤,我无法按我无法按时前往。前往。一般表达一般表达:Because my left foot was injured,I cannot go with you according to the plan.高高级表达表达:Because my left foot was injured,I cannot go with you_.(as引引导的方式状的方式状语从句从句)pl

14、anned to visitas planned/as scheduled我我们能否将旅行推能否将旅行推迟到到8月份月份?一般表达一般表达:Can we put off our travel until August?高高级表达表达:Would you mind if _?(用用would you mind.句式增句式增强强委婉委婉语气气)I suggest we put off our travel untilAugust【连句成篇句成篇】Dear Chris,How is it going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July.But

15、now,because my left foot was injured,I cannot go with you as planned.Im sorry about it.Would you mind if I suggest we put it off until August?I wish you could understand.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Joe【即即时应用用】假假设某某英英语报正正在在进行行主主题为“保保护方方言言,传承承文文化化”的的征征文文活活动,请你根据所你根据所给提示用英文写一篇短文并投

16、稿。内容主要包括提示用英文写一篇短文并投稿。内容主要包括:1.方言面方言面临危机的原因危机的原因;2.保保护方言的必要性方言的必要性;3.如何来保如何来保护方言。方言。注意注意:1.词数数100个左右个左右;2.可以适当增加可以适当增加细节,以使行文以使行文连贯;3.开开头语已已为你写好你写好,但不但不计入入总词数。数。Some dialects are dying out._【参考范文参考范文】Some dialects are dying out.With more and more people from different places choosing to live in cities,they rarely get a chance to speak their dialects.Dialects are the best representatives of diverse cultures.As for culture,it is widely accepted that variety is more important than similarity becaus