1、How can we write a good composition(作文作文)?第一步:第一步:都要都要认真审题认真审题,明确写作,明确写作体体裁裁、要求要求和提示和提示要点要点具体做法:具体做法:用笔勾画用笔勾画2008春节前,在我国的部分地区出现了百年罕见的春节前,在我国的部分地区出现了百年罕见的特大暴风雪,给人民带来了重大损失,造成若干人伤亡,特大暴风雪,给人民带来了重大损失,造成若干人伤亡,很多人深受失去家园之苦。获悉这一消息后,人们纷纷很多人深受失去家园之苦。获悉这一消息后,人们纷纷伸出了援助之手,你们班级也不甘落后。请以班委会的伸出了援助之手,你们班级也不甘落后。请以班委会的名
2、义根据提示写一封名义根据提示写一封100词左右的英文倡议书。要求语词左右的英文倡议书。要求语义连贯,中心突出,详略得当,可适当发挥。义连贯,中心突出,详略得当,可适当发挥。(开头和开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数结尾已给出,不计入总词数)提示:提示:1、暴风雪造成的重大损失;、暴风雪造成的重大损失;2、大家纷纷献出爱心;、大家纷纷献出爱心;3、作为学生我们应该做些什么?、作为学生我们应该做些什么?第二步:第二步:列出写作提纲(列出写作提纲(Outline)。)。具体做法:具体做法:根据段落整理写作要点根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要不要遗漏要点!点!Write an Outline可以用英文或中文
3、可以用英文或中文IntroductionMain bodyConclusionGreat trouble Show love all over the countryWhat should we students do?(看写作要求)看写作要求)(自拟)自拟)(自拟)自拟)(已给出)(已给出)写作前:写作前:确定确定人称、时态人称、时态写作后:写作后:检查检查词数足够、要点完整,没有语法错误词数足够、要点完整,没有语法错误Dear classmates,A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 S
4、pring Festival.It brought us lots of trouble.Thousands of people were trapped in the stations,in the airports and on the highways.In such a heavy snowstorm,a lot of people suffered from the loss of their homes.What was worse,many people were hurt,even lost their lives.After the news was reported,peo
5、ple all over the country showed their great love in different ways.Some gave food,clothes,drinking water,medicine and everything necessary,and some even gave money to them.As students,of course we should try our best to help those people in trouble.So offer your only pocket money,lets help to fill t
6、he world with love.class committeeDear classmates,A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festival.It brought lots of trouble to the people.Some people lost their lives.People all over the country donated food,drinking water,colthes to them.As we students,what sh
7、ould we do?We should donate our pocket money to them.We can also send them our old books.扣分原因一扣分原因一词数不够!每少词数不够!每少5 5词,词,扣扣1 1分,约少分,约少4040词,只词,只得得1212分。分。Dear classmates,A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festival.It was the most serious snowstorm during the
8、centry.It brought people lots of trouble.Many people were hurt.Some people even lost their lives.A lot of people suffered from the loss of their homes.After the news was reported,we are all sorry for them.We should try our best to help them out of trouble!We should save our pocket money to donate it
9、 to them.We can also send the books and clothes that we neednt use to them.Let the world be full of love!扣分原因二扣分原因二遗漏要点!少一要点,遗漏要点!少一要点,约扣约扣5分,只得分,只得15分。分。加入献爱心加入献爱心 时态、语态、结构、短语搭配为大错,时态、语态、结构、短语搭配为大错,1处处1分。分。拼写、大小写、标点符号为小错,拼写、大小写、标点符号为小错,3处处1分。分。A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country b
10、efore the 2008 Spring Festival.it coursed us many problems.Many people hurt.Some even lost their life.They suffered from the lost of their homes.After hear this,people all over the country give food,drinking water,medicine and everything necessary to them,some even donated money for them.As we stude
11、nts,what should we do?We are have pocket money,We can donate it to them.We can also give the books or clothes that are useless to them.Lets take action actively!Itcausedwere hurtlivesloss ofhearing gavetohaveuseful.只得只得1313分分另外另外作文中书写不规范,卷面不整作文中书写不规范,卷面不整洁也是要失分的(中考中有洁也是要失分的(中考中有12分分的卷面整洁分的卷面整洁分,这两分,
12、这两分不能丢!不能丢!)。)。解决方法:解决方法:平时认真规范书写,少平时认真规范书写,少用或不用胶带或修正液,尽量减少用或不用胶带或修正液,尽量减少涂改。涂改。写作:写作:第一步就是要第一步就是要认真审题认真审题,明确写作,明确写作体裁体裁、要求要求和提示和提示要点要点第二步就是要第二步就是要列出写作提纲列出写作提纲,根据,根据段落段落整理整理写作写作要点要点。写作前:写作前:确定确定人称、时态人称、时态写作后:写作后:检查检查提示:提示:1、描述你认为最有意义的上月北京之行。、描述你认为最有意义的上月北京之行。2、谈谈北京今昔之比。、谈谈北京今昔之比。3、第、第29届奥运会将于届奥运会将于
13、2008年在北京举行。北京是一个美丽的现年在北京举行。北京是一个美丽的现代化城市。目前好多体育场馆代化城市。目前好多体育场馆(gymnasium)正在新建。很多人在正在新建。很多人在忙着学英语。中国有志把它办成一届忙着学英语。中国有志把它办成一届“绿色奥运,人文奥运,绿色奥运,人文奥运,科技奥运科技奥运”。参考词汇:参考词汇:“Green,Humanity and science”(绿绿色,奥运,科技奥运)色,奥运,科技奥运)全国人民都很高兴。全国人民都很高兴。4、中国是一个具有悠久历史的国家,而且正在变得越来越强大。、中国是一个具有悠久历史的国家,而且正在变得越来越强大。Example 1根
14、据提示完成下面你(根据提示完成下面你(Li Ming)给给Jim一封一封100词左右的信。建议他有空一定去看看。词左右的信。建议他有空一定去看看。Write an Outline.Introduction Main bodyconclusion姓名姓名to JimHow are you?北京之行(自拟)北京之行(自拟)今昔之比(自拟)今昔之比(自拟)奥运会(看要求)奥运会(看要求)悠久历史(看要悠久历史(看要 求)求)一般过去时一般过去时现在完成时现在完成时一般将来时现在进行时一般将来时现在进行时一般现在时一般现在时I hope you will come to Beijing soon.Le
15、ts Lets practice!practice!Example 2近来,国家启动了近来,国家启动了“阳光体育工程阳光体育工程”,旨在提高青少年身体素质。你校为响应号召,开展旨在提高青少年身体素质。你校为响应号召,开展了一系列体育活动,请根据图表提供的信息和汉语了一系列体育活动,请根据图表提供的信息和汉语提示,写一篇不少于提示,写一篇不少于100个词的短文。内容必须包个词的短文。内容必须包括提示中的三个要点:括提示中的三个要点:1、学校开展了哪些体育活动?最受欢迎的是什么、学校开展了哪些体育活动?最受欢迎的是什么?(见图)?(见图)2、简述你参加的一次体育活动,如一场体育比赛,、简述你参加的一次体育活动,如一场体育比赛,一次体育锻炼的经历、一堂体育课一次体育锻炼的经历、一堂体育课3、体育活动对你学习、生活、体育活动对你学习、生活Lets enjoy our own compositions!I hope all of you can get full marks(20)in the composition item!Thank you!
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