高考作文课件.ppt

1、 英语书面表达高分写作指导英语书面表达高分写作指导Beautify your Composition书面表达在评阅书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则时遵循三原则语言第一位（语言高级）语言第一位（语言高级）内容第二位（要点齐全）内容第二位（要点齐全）结构第三位（文章分段）结构第三位（文章分段）一、高级词汇和句式一、高级词汇和句式二、修辞手法二、修辞手法三、有效的连词三、有效的连词四、名人名言或谚语四、名人名言或谚语语言第一位（语言高级）语言第一位（语言高级）漂亮、地道漂亮、地道高考作文的美高考作文的美1.高级词汇短语词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重

2、要标志。英语水平的一个重要标志。词汇使用的原则词汇使用的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装人靠衣装，文靠词装 1、词组优先原则、词组优先原则2、地道原则。、地道原则。3、避免重复原则、避免重复原则4、后、后、高高、长原则长原则 后学到、较高级、较长词汇。后学到、较高级、较长词汇。四四项项原原则则1、词组优先原则、词组优先原则原文A new railway is being built in my hometown.修正A new railway is under construction in my hometown.2、地道原则、地道原则原文Through traveling,I learned a l

3、ot of knowledge.修正Through traveling,I gainedobtained a lot of knowledge.4、后高长原则后学到、较高级、较长词汇。原 词 替换词hard diligentlyvery rather extremelypay attention to attach importance tohappy delighted enjoyablemore and more the increasing number of3、避免重复原则、避免重复原则原文I like reading while my brother likes watching t

4、elevision.修正I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.Adj.聪明的、脑筋好的聪明的、脑筋好的cleversmartwisebrightintelligent电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computers are very important in our life.2.Computers play a very important role in our puters are of great importance in our life.EXEX、运用高级词汇：、运用高级词汇：As a re

5、sult,the plan failed.(一般一般)She went to Austria in order to study music.(一般一般)Suddenly I thought out a good idea.(一般一般)The plan turned out to be a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.(高级高级)She went to Austria for the purpose of studying She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.mu

6、sic.(高级高级)A good idea occurred to me./A good idea suddenly struck me(高级高级)At the news of her deathAt the news of her death,he went.he went.(高级高级)She has trouble in pronouncing the wordShe has trouble in pronouncing the word.(高级高级)When he heard she had died,he went pale with sorrow.(一般一般)She cant cor

7、rectly pronounce the word.(一般一般)运用高级词汇：运用高级词汇：2，句式多样，文章增，句式多样，文章增“靓靓”使用较丰富的句式：使用较丰富的句式：运用得当的句子结构运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉此而生辉 他昨天下午来的。1.He came here yesterday afternoon.2.He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.3.Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.4.It was ye

8、sterday afternoon that he came here.思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文好作文 无遗漏信息点（审题）无遗漏信息点（审题）篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词句式多样句式多样地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组思考：你能想到的好句式有哪思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？些？强调句强调句倒装句倒装句 with复合结构复合结构advancedsentences定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句非谓语动词非谓语动词常用谚语常用谚语被动句被动句化腐朽为神奇十十 式一、将两个简单句合并为并列句。一、将两个简单句合并

9、为并列句。操作难度 写作效果1.You can do it.I can do it.One of us must do it.you I must do it.EitherorIf you go through the gate,youll find the entrance to Bear Country.(一般一般)Go through the gate,and youll find.Go through the gate,and youll find.(高级高级)I got up late this morning,otherwise I could have I got up late

10、 this morning,otherwise I could have caught the early bus.caught the early bus.(高级高级)I got up late this morning.I didnt catch the early bus.(一般一般)The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.(高级高级)When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(一般一般)二、主动句与被动句的互换

11、。二、主动句与被动句的互换。操作难度 写作效果The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis.People suggest that the conference be put off.(一般一般)It is suggested that the conference be put off.It is suggested that the conference be put off.(高级高级)Immediate measures should be taken to

12、 deal with the present financial crisis.三、将陈述句改为感叹句。操作难度 写作效果1.To prevent the pollution is very important How ！2.She is a clever girl What !How important it is to prevent the pollution!what a clever girl she is!四、将陈述句改为倒装句。四、将陈述句改为倒装句。操作难度 写作效果1.I could hardly understand the importance of English at

13、 that time.Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time.2.We did not realize our mistakes until at that time.Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes.3.Though Im weak,I will make the effort.(一般一般)Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.(高级高级)五、

14、将简单句改为强调句。五、将简单句改为强调句。操作难度 写作效果1.Smoking did great harm to his health.2.Our money is earned through hard work by our parents.It was smoking that did great harm to his health.It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents.六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。操作难度写作效果1.同位语和同位语从句（常用于描述人物、地点等介

15、绍性文段）1)Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete.He won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.(用同位语改写),won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.2)The word is true.The president will give our school a speech.is true the president will give our school a

16、 speech.2.定语从句（限制性/非限制性）1)The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,and its slogan is One World,One Dream,The 2008 Olympic Games,.2)In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting.In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace .3)Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,and we bought a lot of clothes.Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,.Whose slogan is One World,One Dream,will be held in BJare the two places which are well worth visiting.Where we bought a lot of clot