外研版九年级上作文指导.ppt

1、I spent my National Holiday in ShandongI went to Shandong for a holiday durinng my last National Festivel.Shandong is the most beautiful place that I have ever been to,and I wont forget those days that I spent there.Transportation:by train/take a train by bus/take a busWeather:sunny,coolI went there

2、 first by train then by bus.Its sunny but a little cool.When I arrived there,it was sunny but a little cool.When I arrived there,I was so happy that the weather there was quite similar to that in Dalian which was sunny but a little cool.Pancakes and Chinese OnionsWhat did I do?1.2.3.4.Climb the Moun

3、t TaiVisit ConfuciusTempleHave some typical fooddrop in at a kite museumI visited ConfuciusTempleI climbed the Mount TaiI had some typical foodI dropped in at a kite museum I climbed the Mount Tai I visited ConfuciusTempleI had some typical foodI dropped in at a Kite MuseumOn the first dayWhichOn th

4、e second dayWhichAfter that WhichOn our way back home,what impressed me most was the sunrise.I was amazed toFeelingsTired/relaxed/enjoyable/unforgettablePleasant/interesting/fun/dull/boring/excitingAlthough I felt tired,It was a fantastic trip.What an exciting and unforgettable trip!It is such an en

5、joyable trip that I will never forget it.I had a good time there,and its really an unforgettable tripShandong has left me a wonderful impression andIm looking forward to going back there again.How to introduce your trip?1.starting2.body3.endingWhenWhereHowWeatherWhat(activities)feelings1234Your trip

6、（Shandong is the most beautiful place that I have ever been to,and I wont forget those days that I spent there.）时态：时态：人称：人称：（It is such an enjoyable trip that I will never forget it.）同学们同学们,你一定欣赏过异乡的风景你一定欣赏过异乡的风景,品尝过异品尝过异乡的美食乡的美食,感受过异乡的风土人情感受过异乡的风土人情学校的语言天学校的语言天地要举办一次英语征文活动地要举办一次英语征文活动,内容为介绍你的一次内容为介

7、绍你的一次难忘的旅行经历难忘的旅行经历,现在请你根据下面的提示现在请你根据下面的提示,写一写一篇短文。内容提示篇短文。内容提示:1.Where and when did you go?2.How did you go there?3.What was the weather like?4.What did you do there?5.How did you feel?要求要求:(1)中心突出中心突出,语意连贯语意连贯,层次清晰层次清晰,书写规书写规范范,可适当发挥可适当发挥 (2)词数词数80词左右词左右An unforgettable trip to_书面表达评分标准（一）评分原则（一）评

8、分原则1.共共20分，按分，按5个档次给分；个档次给分；2.采用整体评分的方式，评分时，首先考虑短文内容是否采用整体评分的方式，评分时，首先考虑短文内容是否符合题目要求，根据任务完成的情况初步确定所属档次；符合题目要求，根据任务完成的情况初步确定所属档次；然后按该档次的具体要求进行衡量，确定和调整档次，最然后按该档次的具体要求进行衡量，确定和调整档次，最后给分；后给分；3.评分的主要参考指标为：内容要点全面、语言得体、结评分的主要参考指标为：内容要点全面、语言得体、结构清晰、上下文语意连贯、符合逻辑，字数构清晰、上下文语意连贯、符合逻辑，字数80词左右，其词左右，其中内容要点可用不同方式表达，

9、鼓励对紧扣主题的适当发中内容要点可用不同方式表达，鼓励对紧扣主题的适当发挥。挥。4.若书写较差，影响理解从所得分中减去若书写较差，影响理解从所得分中减去2分；分；5.评分时对于拼写与标点符号错误，应视其对交际的影响评分时对于拼写与标点符号错误，应视其对交际的影响程度酌情扣分。程度酌情扣分。6.英语、美语拼写及词汇用法均可接受。英语、美语拼写及词汇用法均可接受。（三）各档次评分参考标准（三）各档次评分参考标准一档（一档（17-20分）出色完成了试题规定的任务，分）出色完成了试题规定的任务，有很好的有很好的能力用自己的话表述观点，围绕主题的合理发挥，内容符能力用自己的话表述观点，围绕主题的合理发挥

10、，内容符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构清晰，表达意义得体，合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构清晰，表达意义得体，选词贴切，语言准确无误或有少量拼写错误，标点、大小选词贴切，语言准确无误或有少量拼写错误，标点、大小写正确。写正确。二档（二档（13-16分）较好完成了试题规定的任务。有能力用分）较好完成了试题规定的任务。有能力用自己的话表述观点，有围绕主题的适当发挥，内容比较符自己的话表述观点，有围绕主题的适当发挥，内容比较符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构比较清晰，表达意义合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构比较清晰，表达意义的选词贴切，标点、拼写大体上正确，语言较准确，不影的选词贴切，标点、拼写大体上正确，语言较准确，不影响读者的理解。响读者的理解。三档三档（9-12）基本完成了试题规定的任务。有一定的能力）基本完成了试题规定的任务。有一定的能力用自己的话表述观点，覆盖了所有主要内容，意思基本连用自己的话表述观点，覆盖了所有主要内容，意思基本连贯，但语言有一些错误（句子结构、动词时态、搭配、拼贯，但语言有一些错误（句子结构、动词时态、搭配、拼写、标点写、标点 等），表达基本清楚。等），表达基本清楚。