池国祥-英文地质论文写作中常见的问题.ppt

1、英文地质论文写作中常见的问题英文地质论文写作中常见的问题池国祥池国祥里贾纳大学地质系里贾纳大学地质系University of ReginaImportance of Publication-Scientific records-Communication with international community-Contribution to scientific advancement-Social-economic impacts-Career development-写作过程也是科研的一部分：激发思维，写作过程也是科研的一部分：激发思维，推敲研究结果的意义。推敲研究结果的意义。-审稿和

2、修改过程对科研有促进作用。审稿和修改过程对科研有促进作用。英文地质论文写作的常见问题英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题语法和用词问题其它问题其它问题投稿注意问题投稿注意问题科技论文写作的主要问题是论文结构及格式问科技论文写作的主要问题是论文结构及格式问题，而不是英文问题。题，而不是英文问题。结构好而英文不好的论文很容易修改，而结构结构好而英文不好的论文很容易修改，而结构不好的论文则很难改。不好的论文则很难改。Highlight 只说做了什么，没说发现什么只说做了什么，没说发现什么-Detailed petrographic work carried out-I

3、mportant constraint on U mineralization recognized-Xenotime coeval with uraninite in Athabasca Basin-Onset of U mineralization related to volcanism and brine formation引言的核心是引言的核心是 What Why How不要把研究结果在前言里讲出来没有分清目的没有分清目的(purposes)和目标和目标(objectives)This paper aims to carry out detailed field,petrograph

4、ic,stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit.This paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processes of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit,through detailed field,petrographic,stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies.空洞的文献总结空洞的文献总结Empty Review:Th

5、e sedimentary and stratigraphy of the Viking Formation have been studied by Smith(1978)and Walker et al.(1990).Little work has been done on diagenesis,except a stable isotope study by Lee(1998).The petroleum system has been evaluated by Cook(1989),.Informative Review:The Viking Formation has been in

6、terpreted to have formed in a wave-dominated shoreface and transitional zones(Smith,1978;Walker et al.,1990).A diagenetic study of calcite cements by Lee(1998)yielded d18O of-18 to-15%o(PDB),which were interpreted to indicate参考文献的引用不恰当参考文献的引用不恰当有些地区前人已做了大量工作。但这不意味这有些地区前人已做了大量工作。但这不意味这你要引用所有工作。引用什么和不

7、引用什么要你要引用所有工作。引用什么和不引用什么要得当。得当。引用要放在恰当的地方。引用某文（或图）等引用要放在恰当的地方。引用某文（或图）等于告诉读者于告诉读者“请看请看”。要把要把 Credit 给该给的人。给该给的人。Cite references in chronological orderThere are a number of previous studies in this field(Smith,1999;Andes et al.,2001;Sun et al.,1988).There are a number of previous studies in this fiel

8、d(Andes et al.,2001;Smith,1999;Sun et al.,1988).There are a number of previous studies in this field(Sun et al.,1988;Smith,1999;Andes et al.,2001).For first author of the the same name,the order of listing references is single-author first,two-author second,and multi-author last(in chronological ord

9、er)Li,S.,2011,Li,S.,Anderson,K.and Wang,L.,2000,.Li,S.and Baker,A.,2003,.Li,S.,Wang,N.and Zhu,C.,1989,.Li,S.,2011,Li,S.and Baker,A.,2003,.Li,S.,Wang,N.and Zhu,C.,1989,.Li,S.,Anderson,K.and Wang,L.,2000,.区域地质背景没有根据本文的内容进行取舍区域地质背景没有根据本文的内容进行取舍区域地质背景的介绍是很有讲究的。不能千篇区域地质背景的介绍是很有讲究的。不能千篇一律地描述所有的地质背景，要根据本文的

10、重一律地描述所有的地质背景，要根据本文的重点有所侧重。点有所侧重。现象或数据的描述与解释混杂在一起现象或数据的描述与解释混杂在一起We have detected high concentrations of CO2 in the fluid,which is most likely derived from the mantle.However,some crustal CO2 has also been detected,as reflected by its carbon isotope composition.The ores are characterized by laminate

11、d structures,which are likely of syngenetic origin The syngenetic structures are commonly found in all the deposits in the study area,suggesting that these deposits are probably of SEDEX type.缺乏详细的地质描述缺乏详细的地质描述缺乏详细的岩相学描述缺乏详细的岩相学描述把前人或自己已发表的数据列在结果部分把前人或自己已发表的数据列在结果部分Data sourcesLiang et al.2008Liang

12、et al.2008Zhu et al.2011This studyThis studyThis studyThis study展示数据的图表出现在讨论部分展示数据的图表出现在讨论部分展示数据的图表出现在讨论部分展示数据的图表出现在讨论部分5.Discussion5.1.Ages of mineralization5.2.Sources of ore-forming components5.3.Ore precipitation mechanisms5.4.Ore genesis矿床类型不等于矿床成因矿床类型不等于矿床成因:Ore genesis:Based on the geological

13、 and geochemical characteristics,this mineral deposit is considered to be a MVT deposit.把矿床成因和矿床类型混肴把矿床成因和矿床类型混肴讨论部分没有与引言呼应，没有以事实为依据讨论部分没有与引言呼应，没有以事实为依据Introduction:This paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processes of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit,through detailed field,pe

14、trographic,stable isotope and fluid inclusions studies.Discussion:In this section we will focus on the origins of gold deposits in southwestern New Brunswick,especially on the role that crustal evolution may have played in mineralization.讨论部分把在引言部分说过的话又说一遍讨论部分把在引言部分说过的话又说一遍Introduction:The origin of

15、 the Poplar Mountain gold deposit has not been well understood.Some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids,whereas others thought.Discussion:The origin of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit has not been well understood.Some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids,whereas others

16、thought.讨论部分与结果部分小标题重复讨论部分与结果部分小标题重复2.Results2.1 Oxygen isotopes2.2 Carbon isotopes2.3 Fluid inclusions3.Discussion3.1 Oxygen isotopes3.2 Carbon isotopes3.3 Fluid inclusions3.Discussion3.1 Sources of mineralizing fluids3.2 Ore precipitation mechanisms图例说明没有直接标在图例旁边图例说明没有直接标在图例旁边参考文献格式没按要求参考文献格式没按要求-作者没列全-错字太多-名字缩写不统一-期刊名称缩写或不缩写不统一-卷号及页码格式不统一-多余的空格英文地质论文写作的常见问题英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题语法和用词问题其它问题其它问题投稿注意问题投稿注意问题“The”的用与不用的用与不用Jinding deposit is a large Zn-Pb deposit.There are many Sn dep