英语九年级下册英语书面表达易错剖析及解析.docx

1、英语九年级下册英语书面表达易错剖析及解析【英语】九年级下册英语书面表达易错剖析及解析一、英语书面表达1书面表达同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。内容提示：暑假计划学习博览群书；学习技能 （或自拟一点）生活健康饮食；坚持锻炼 （或自拟一点）其它热爱公益；亲近自然 （或自拟一点）注意：1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday

2、 is coming, and here is my plan for it._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. Thats all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.First, Id like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind

3、and learn more about the world. I also think its necessary for me to learn at least one skill. Im interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vege

4、tables and keep running every day.Third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we

5、can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. Thats all. Thank you.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如Id like to do，hel

6、p me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。而First, Id like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, its a good id

7、ea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用，既使短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2书面表达初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以

8、“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求写一份发言稿，内容包括：1. 普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试2. 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习3. 我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are un

9、der too much pressure. _ _【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My pare

10、nts wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends. I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure

11、 makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达的需要使用正确

12、的时态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了

13、并列句和复合句的结构，如宾语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。3书面表达为了配合“足球进校园”活动，

14、你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。常 识历史悠久，深受喜爱世界杯4年举行一次好 处男生女生皆可参加利于培养团队精神考生自拟（至少1点）偶 像梅西，有足球天赋梦 想考生自拟（至少1点）注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：梅西 MessiDear classmates,Im very excited to hear that China will build 20,00

15、0 football-themed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，Im very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 2020Football has a very long historyIt is liked by people all over the worldThe World Cup takes place every four yearsPlaying football h

16、as lots of advantagesFirst，both boys and girls can take part in itSecond，it helps develop team spiritWhats more，playing football is good for our healthIm a football fanMessi is my heroHe has a gift for playing footballMy dream is to become a famous football player like MessiI hope China will hold th

17、e World Cup some dayThank you for your attention【解析】【详解】试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. T

18、he World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. Whats more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second等使得短文层次清楚。4 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。提示词语： Chinese

19、 classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示问题： When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp? What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holid

20、ay . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you

21、 will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.Whats more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Grea

22、t Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。

23、文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。3.高分亮点：短语：as follows，take part in，Whats more，look forward to。句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。5李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华, 请你给Jessica写一封信, 介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：1. 中秋节的时间；2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；3, 我最期待的活动。要求：1.80-100词开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数

24、）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。Dear Jessica, Im glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you._Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,Im glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. Its a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we