高中英语新高考英语作文读后续写题型的写作兵法三招转折语言词库.docx

1、高中英语新高考英语作文读后续写题型的写作兵法三招转折语言词库高中英语新高考-英语作文：读后续写题型的写作兵法三招：转折,语言,词库目前英语卷的题型的改革力度是够大的，说来就来。这不，各种证据证明，未来作文会变成文章续写，即：给一篇350词左右的记叙文给你，结尾没有，让考生自由发挥。限制是:需要用上文章里给定的五个左右的词语。目前浙江已经明确在考试说明中说了，后面的高考就要采用这种形式。（孙三五）这种改革给考生一种恐慌，为什么呢？因为从未写过这样的文章，而且续写听起来好高大上。但是，我看来，这种作文最好发挥。我给出的技巧是：内容上要注意两个转折；语言上要注意倒装和非谓语动词；另外，我给考生们准备

2、了万能的九个小词库。一、何为内容上的两个转折写记叙文，英汉是同理的。故事要有曲折即：twist。而高考作文150作文只能让你写顶多两个曲折。曲折分：情节曲折和心理变化的曲折。英语作文毕竟和语文作文有差别，我们的曲折不要一味追求离奇，而是讲究逻辑的连贯。二、语言的运用记叙文是动作和语言的干活，不需要你写复杂句，这是文体的需要。常用的是：非谓语动词和倒装句。为什么呢？因为只有这两种语法结构句子才能表达动作的多样性。三、关于九个小词库我认为记叙文的心情描写是伴随着动作一起的，你有什么样的心情就有什么样的动作。笔者平时有摘抄各种文学作品的佳句和词块的习惯。仅挑选一小部分，省略了伴随心情的手、脚、脸等词

3、库，进行粗线条的概括。虽然不多，但我认为也足够应付高考了。我将它们分为九大类：一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中：二、如何表达同情和关心三、如何表达轻松四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情五、如何表达胆小、害怕六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬七、如何表达悲伤八、如何表达疲劳九、如何表达疼痛四、实战演练（这道题是浙江考试说明上的例子，但没有给答案）步骤一：第一个转折：The young man; suitcases in the back seat;loud noise of an alarm; the bank; robbery; the shouts; people; the bank thief

4、报警：群众拦阻；警察赶到心情：害怕；困惑；疼痛第二个转折：真相：一箱书；赶往学校报到心情：生气；轻松；关心步骤二：He dared not stop and dashed to the crowd.He was struck dead with terror. His heart was beating painfully fast and banging against his ribs. However, hearing the shouts, several strong young men in front of the bank blocked and arrested him. N

5、ow, every nerve in Authurs body warned him not to go any further. “I doubt that guy is the bank thief.” said Authur, pointing the man behind.用非谓语动词 The anger had returned like a hard lump at the back of his throat.Luckily, just then up came the policemen倒装句. Authur began to calm down, his breathing

6、growing slower.用非谓语动词 He could feel the blood surging round his body and releasing the tension. When the suitcases were opened, many books came in sight. The young man gave Authur a look of concern, saying“I really hope you are not hurt. Maybe we can be friends.” Both of them smiled.(划线部分都是来自九小词库）五、

7、九小词库【以下均摘自文学作品，部分词汇需要你查词典理解】一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中：词语：Nouns Thoughts, concentration, determination Verbs Felt, tried, resolved, determined Heard, remembered 词块：* Deep in thought* Lost in her own thoughts* Tried desperately to remember* Heard little of what was being said around her* Nothing was going to st

8、op him now* Felt a hard ball of determination tightening in his stomach佳句：She tried desperately to remember where she had seen him before.She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.He shuddered and tensed, as a hard ball of determination tightened in his stomach.二、如何表

9、达同情和关心词语：Nouns Face, mouth, smile, eyebrows Concern, sympathy, comfort, warmth Adjectives Soft, warm, calm, sympathetic, comforting Verbs Gave, flashed Drew, turned 词块：* Face turned soft and sympathetic* Gave her a look of concern* Drew her eyebrows together* Mouth turned down at the corners* Flashe

10、d a comforting smile佳句：His face turned soft and sympathetic and his voice sank to a murmur.She drew her eyebrows together and turned her mouth down in a look of concern.三、如何表达轻松词语：Nouns Heart, pulse, blood Chest, head, brow, scalp, sweat Adjectives Calm, grateful Verbs Eased, slowed, calmed, release

11、d ached 词块：* Pounding eased in her chest* Breathing slowed* Rapid beat of her heart became calmer* Sweat dried on her brow* Blood surged round her body* Released the tension in her body* Grateful for his narrow escape佳句：She began to calm down and her heart started to slow, but the panic had left an

12、ache in her head and a ringing in her ears.Slowly, the pounding eased in her chest and the sweat dried on her brow.She could feel the blood surging round her body and releasing the tension.Her breathing grew slower, as a new calm settled over her.四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情词语：Nouns Heart, pulse, breath, thr

13、oat Anger, rage, fury, temper, wrath, disgust, contempt, resentment Adjectives Cross, furious, raging Jealous, envious, resentful Irritating, frustrating Bitter, vicious, poisonous Breathless, sweating Verbs Swept, pouredPounded, exploded, erupted Shook, trembled, writhed Raced, hammered Clenched, g

14、ripped 词块：* Red mist* Spitting bundle of rage* Vicious flash of temper* Hard lump at the back of her throat* Left him breathless* Made his heart race* Hammered in his head* Swept through him like a tidal wave* Burning with rage* Wrath exploded like a volcano* Poured from her like an acid* Surrounded

15、 him like a foul stench* Poisoned the air around him佳句：He was sweating and burning with rage.She saw his face through narrowed eyes and a fog of rage.Her reply fuelled his anger and he erupted like a volcano.The anger had returned like a hard lump at the back of her throat.His fury knew no limits on

16、e vicious flash of temper after another.Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench.五、如何表达胆小、害怕词语：Nouns Fear, dread, panic, terror, horror, turmoil Thoughts, instinct Heart, chest, pulse, blood Head, brain, temples, forehead Breath, throat, windpipe, cheeks, tong

17、ue, bile Stomach, gut, cramps Skin, hair, shivers, tingle, prickle Adjectives Numb, sick, nervous, uneasy Dry, tight, thick, heavy Long, deep, short, shallow Unsteady, shuddering, rasping Quick, fast, painful Cold, tingling Hot, sweaty Verbs Felt, thought, urged, warned, paralysed Rose, grew, swept,

18、 surged, seized Bubbled, gripped, clutched, choked, strangledBreathed, blew, hissed, sucked, gulped, gasped, tasted Beat, leapt, raced, banged, throbbed, pounded, hammered, quickened Crept, crawled, prickled, scuttled Ran, tore, pumped, drenched Dropped, fluttered, squeezed, tightened, gripped, stab

19、bed 词块：* Sick with fear* Throat was dry and tight* Tongue felt thick and heavy in his mouth* Fear was like a bitter bile at the back of his throat* Cold sweat* Prickle of fear in the bottom of his spine* Like an electric shock* Like a lead ball in his stomach* Numb and paralysed by fear* Dread swept

20、 through him like a tidal wave* Fear settled on him like a dark fog* Struck dead with terror* Terror surged through her* Fear seized him in its jaws* Thought of the consequences urged him on* Instincts screamed at him to . . .* Every nerve in his body warned him not to . . .* Could taste the fear in

21、 the back of his throat* Gulped air* Let out a gasp* Blew out her cheeks to stop herself howling* Took long, shuddering breaths* Panic rose in his chest* Panic bubbled in her throat* Fear choked him with its murderous hands* Snaked round his windpipe* Heart pounded* Pulse raced* Missed a beat* Bange

22、d against his ribs* Heart abandoned his chest to pound in his throat* Squeezed her heart like a vice* Blood pounded in her temples* Drenched in sweat* Cold sweat poured down his forehead* Skin crawled* Hairs prickled on the back of his neck* Shivers tore down her spine and racked her body* Like a hu

23、ndred spiders were scuttling down her back* Stomach dropped* Like a moth fluttering inside her stomach* Doubled over with cramps* Gripped with anxiety* Like a volcano erupting inside her佳句：Every nerve in his body warned him not to go any further.All his instincts screamed at him to slip away before

24、he was spotted.He was sick with fear, but the thought of the consequences urged him on.Her throat was dry, her tongue thick and heavy in her mouth.Fear choked him with its murderous hands. It gripped at his throat and strangled his breath into short, shallow gasps.She was struck dead with terror. He

25、r heart was beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs.Her heart missed a beat, squeezed like a vice by the shock.As the blood pounded in her temples, her brain quickened and all her senses were alert.Blowing out her cheeks, she drew a long, shuddering breath and tried to dampen the sense o

26、f impending doom.He felt uneasy. The hairs on the back of his neck prickled with dread and he was drenched in sweat.Fear settled on her like a dark fog, bringing a chill that crept over her and that no amount of heat could drive away.The fear was like an electric shock, pumping shivering waves teari

27、ng through his body and making his hair stand on end.He doubled over with cramps. It was as if a lead ball had been dropped in his stomach and was blocking his gut.Her stomach was gripped with anxiety, like a volcano erupting inside her.Something was making her feel very uneasy. It was gnawing at he

28、r stomach and fluttering as if she had swallowed a butterfly.六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬词语：Nouns Mind, senses, nerves, confusion, embarrassment Body, heart, breath, throat, tongue, mouth Hands, palms, stomach Adjectives Thick, dry, fuzzy Tense, sharp, alert Sweaty, breathless Verbs Shook, trembled Pounded, flutt

29、ered Gulped, swallowed Shrunk, shrivelled 词块：* Tongue was thick and fuzzy* Throat was dry* Like a nervous rabbit caught in the headlights* Blizzard of nerves and confusion* Heart pounded* Heart fluttered* Held their breath* Watched with bated breath* Trembled like a nervous rabbit* Butterflies flutt

30、ered in her stomach* Body was tense and her senses alert* Felt as if the whole world was watching* Insides shrivelled with embarrassment* Mist descended on his mind佳句：Her hands were shaking. Butterflies fluttered in her heart and stomach.A mist descended on her mind. She felt as if she was walking i

31、n a blizzard of nerves and confusion.She felt her body tense and her senses sharpen, as she watched with bated breath.He tried to speak, but his tongue was thick and fuzzy and pasted to the roof of his mouth.He felt as if the whole world was watching him, and his insides shrivelled with embarrassment.七、如何表达悲伤词语：Nouns Sadness, misery, grief, despair, loneliness, regret Heart, throat, lump, sobs Adjectives Cold, hollow Painful, horrible Verbs Filled, welled, choked, broke 词块：* Silent, shudd