高中英语选修7 unit3 under the sea写作.docx

1、高中英语选修7 unit3 under the sea写作Book 7 Unit3 Under the seaWriting 随 笔投诉信【学习目标】让学生学会写投诉抱怨类信件。【自主学习】 一、什么是投诉信投诉、抱怨类的信件也是考试常常涉及到的内容，一般是当自己的正常生活受到骚扰、自己的利益受到侵害或当社会规范有失规范时，用来表达不满情绪和提出批评。所有的投诉信都有一个共同点，就是最终是要收信人解决问题，所以需要提出解决方案。注意: 如果题目中没有给出解决方案，那么就要根据投诉内容中的不满提出自己的解决方案。二、怎样写投诉信1、首段：表明来信所要投诉的问题，尽可能做到客观礼貌，给读者留下好印

2、象。2、主体段落：写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果。可以说具体的理由，也可以说问题的具体体现方式。3、结尾段：提出解决方案，不需展开。这段应体现书信的礼貌原则，可以用类似“如果你能，我将十分感激”这样的表达方式。一般情况下，可以按照下面的思路行文：a抱怨投诉行为b投诉内容具体描述c要求弥补纠正赔偿d. 对被投诉人的敦促或威胁【知识拓展】抱怨投诉行为：Im writing to complain about/that .投诉内容具体描述:I felt really angry about.I find it difficult to.to be honest, I am not prepa

3、red to put up with.I would appreciate it very much if you could.对被投诉人的敦促或威胁:I hope you could deal with it as soon as possible.If you cant give me a satisfactory answer, I will .【合作探究】范例：情景介绍 假如你是一名乘客，名叫李华，对这次航班不满意，理由有如下四个：（1）航空公司给你弄丢了一个重要的包，内有公司机密文件；（2）飞机迟到一个半小时；（3）飞机上的食物很差；（4）乘务员的服务态度不好。（5）请就此事给航空公

4、司写一封投诉信。100词左右。一给出模版Dear_: My name is . Im writing this letter about. Im sorry to say that Im very unhappy about . First of all,. secondly,.Thirdly,. Fourthly, I hate to say this, but. Honestly speaking,.The focus of my complaint is . I do hope.2范文My name is LuHua, a passenger of your airline. Im wr

5、iting this letter about your bad service.Im sorry to say that Im very unhappy about you airline. First of all, your airline lost one of my bags, in which there is an important paper of our company. Secondly, my plane was one and a half hour late. You know, I had to attend an important meeting in tim

6、e. Thirdly, the food on the plane was terrible. Fourthly, I hate to say this, but I think the attendants (服务员)on the plane were unfriendly and impolite to me. Honestly speaking, this is the worst airline I know in the world. The focus of my complaint is where is my bags is. I do hope you can help me

7、 find my bag and improve your service.3高考链接（08年湖北）假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。要点：1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信； 该产品已售完，无法更换； 型号新，无配件，无法维修。2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。注意：1. 词数为100左右；2. 参考词汇：配件- spare part;3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）；4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。（以下内容不得抄入答题卡）Dear Sir,I am writing t

8、o you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr. 2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Bu Manyi【范文】Dear Sir, I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten day

9、s after that, it didnt ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment, he said since it was a new model in China, it was

10、impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I cannot wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely yours, Bu Manyi【名师点评】本文内容要点齐全，语言丰富，结构合理，如头两句说明了购买手机

11、后发现故障的情况，中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，最后明确提出自己的要求，明白流畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚，较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调，结合主动语态与被动语态，并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词，使文章结构完整严密。固定短语，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。【巩固练习】你的邻居王先生的女儿总是在晚上练习钢琴，总是吵得你无法复习功课。请写一封抱怨信给王先生，要求包含以下要点：1.噪音使得你无法学习和休息；2.要求王先生把练琴时间安排到傍晚；3.请王先生马上改善状况，否则将不得不采取法律行动。_【课后反思】：feel 触摸 felt feltblow 吹 blew blownshrink 收缩 shrank /shrunk shrunk / shrunkenset 安置 set setbite 咬 bit bitten / bitspend 花费 spent spentdeal 处理 dealt dealtovertake 超车，赶上 overtook overtakenshoot 射击 shot shotkeep 保持 kept kept