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1、沈阳书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析沈阳书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（安徽中考模拟）李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华, 请你给Jessica写一封信, 介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：1. 中秋节的时间；2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；3, 我最期待的活动。要求：1.80-100词开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。Dear Jessica, Im glad to hear from you. Now let

2、me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you._Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,Im glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. Its a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celeb

3、rate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat

4、mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的活动。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。

5、增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。2（浙江中考模拟） 为响应我市全面创建国家文明城市的号召，丽水市中小学开展“文明城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the cit

6、y clean, plant more trees,Your opinion（至少2条）注意：（1）词数80-100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, its our duty to_ _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, its our duty to help build a civilized city so that

7、 we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. Its better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And wed better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.In my opinion, Ill try my best to make our city cleaner and

8、more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。话题是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并给了一些提示和注意事项：（1）词数80-100左右，短文开头已给出，不

9、计入总词数；（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，要用上提示词，并适当发挥，要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，最后写出你的观点。注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。注意单词拼写，不要犯单词拼写错误，字数要符合要求。【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；要点全面，结构连贯；语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，没有单词拼写错误，字数符合题目要求。3（江苏中考模拟）书面表达随着中国国际地位的日益提高，越来越多的外国友人开始关注

10、中国。假定你是李明，你最近认识的澳大利亚笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想更多地了解中国。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容及你的了解用英语回复。To: Li Ming 163. comFrom: David bigpond. comDear Li Ming,How are you? Is everything going smoothly? Its February. Its very hot in Australia nowand Im having a long summer vacation. Im making a trip plan to China these days.

11、 Would youplease tell me more about China?Whats the season in China now?Whats the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during thefestival?Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there?What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives?I look f

12、orward to hearing from you soon.Best wishesDavid注意事项:1.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数;3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear David,Im really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with a long history. Im sure youll have a wonderful time here.Yours sincerel

13、y,Li Ming【答案】Dear Thomas,Im really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with along history.It is winter now and Spring Festival is the most popular at this time of year. Family members get together and then have a big dinner, After that, they watch lion dances and

14、fireworks.“East or west, Gulin landscape is best.” Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. You can take a boat trip along the Lijiang Rive or ride around the countryside. It is great fun.Guilin is a special city with strong local colour. You can choose many excellent gifts there, such as

15、Chinese paintings, paper fans and colorful clothes. Im sure youll have a wonderful time here.Yours sincerely.Li Hua【解析】【详解】这是一篇书信作文，根据电子邮件中的相关信息向澳大利亚笔友David介绍一下中国。所提供的材料中问到了关于中国的几个问题：Whats the season in China now? Whats the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the

16、 festival? Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there? What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives? 主要从这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含电子邮件上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一

17、】Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜欢自然风光，桂林值得一游。句子if you like natural views.是由if引导的条件状语从句。【高分句型二】Im sure youll have a wonderful time here. 我相信你会在这里过得很愉快。youll have a wonderful time here. 是宾语从句。4（宁夏银川二中中考模拟）假设你是李华。上周末你和同班同学去绿色农场郊游,大家玩的很开心。请你通过e-mail将此活动过程告知你的好友Tom，并简要谈谈你的感受。要点如下：

18、The trip to the Green FarmWhen4月22日早上8:00出发。下午5:00返回。Where学校大门口集合。绿色农场效游。How乘坐校车。What野炊、摘西红柿，放风筝等（至少提及三项活动）。Safety tips不要到河里游泳；不要单独行动:参考词汇：get close to the nature（亲近大自然）写作要求：1、词数6080；（开头和结尾已给出）2、文中不能出现真实的校名或人名；3、所给的要点必须都用上；4、紧扣主题，适当发挥。Dear Tom,Hows it going? Last weekend, I went to_ Yours, Li Hua【答案

19、】Dear TomHows it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my classmates.We set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd April.We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon.We met at the school gate.We went there by school bus . We had a picnic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so on.The teacher

20、told us not to swim in the river and do anything alone.We had a chance to get close to the nature.We had a good trip.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己上周末和同班同学去绿色农场郊游,大家玩的很开心。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关

21、系，语意连贯。5（黑龙江中考模拟）话题作文：构建文明和谐的社会是实现中国梦的一个重要组成部分，请你围绕构建和谐社会（build a harmonious society）写一篇文章。提示：（1）对国家、社会的热爱；（2） 对父母、师长、同学的尊重与关心；（3）对环境的保护。（B）图示作文：仔细观察下列图片，展开合理想象，写一篇作文。要求：（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一。（2）词数在80100词之间。（3）要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。_【答案】Build a harmonious societyBuilding a “harmonious society” play

22、s an important part in achieving Chinese Dreams. As middle school students, what should we do?First of all, we should love our motherland. Lets take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our schools activities. Secondly, lets fill the world with love. We sho

23、uld show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Finally, lets work together to save energy and protect our environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.Lets start right now and try our best a little bit every d

24、ay, every hour, and every minute!（B） My friend Li Ming had an accident yesterday.When school was over, Li Ming went to play basketball with his classmates on the playground. They played very happily. Suddenly, Li Ming fell down and hurt his legs. He couldnt help crying. His classmates hurried to tak

25、e him to the hospital. The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. His classmates all went to see him with some flowers. Li Ming felt very happy.What good children his classmates are!【解析】【详解】A篇：这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下如何才能构建文明和谐的社会。主要从对国家、社会的热爱；对父母、师长、同学的尊重与关心；对环境的保护这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟