1、高考作文之湖北高考英语作文范文2014湖北高考英语作文范文【篇一:湖北卷历年英语高考作文及范文】 2010年 请你根据以下提示,结合生活中的一个实例,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈微笑的作用。 the best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. a smile can help us get through diffident situations and find friends in a world of strangers. a smile can open doors and tear down
2、walls. 注意: 无须写标题; 内容只需涉及一个方面; 词数为100左右。 范文: one possible version i still remember how nervous i was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when i found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first english class. the teacher spoke english throughout the class, which was totally differen
3、t from the lessons i had taken before. in the morning class the next day, the english teacher came to me while i was reading the text aloud as other students. after listening to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. the smile shone on the whole day and the fo
4、llowing days. a week later, i volunteered to take charge of english study in my class. thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class, i began to be confident. 2011年 请根据以下提示,结合你校园生活中的一个事例,就与人合作这一话题,用英语写一篇短文。 working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn about team workteamwork sho
5、ws us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people 注意: 无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语; 除诗歌外,文体不限; 内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例; 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称; 词数为100左右。 范文: one possible version years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork
6、is the most important for me. in fact, i didnt realize its importance until i was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. at first, i did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities. as a result, i was tired out and depressed. then i turned to my
7、 teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. thus i began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class. it is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient. 2012年 请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。 you cannot c
8、hoose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it. 注意: 无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语; 除诗歌外,文体不限; 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 词数为120左右。 范文: one possible version three years ago i failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. disappointed as i felt at the shabby campus and t
9、he poorly-equipped classroom, i found the teachers patient and considerate. besides, i enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. i decided to make the best of it. i worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. whenever i had difficulties, they were always available. soon, i became
10、 one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. my experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are. 2013年 请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。 we all know that sticks and stones may break our bones, but
11、 we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too. 注意: 无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语; 除诗歌外,文体不限; 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 词数为120左右。 【思路点拨】 本文以“我们应该意识到,言语也可能会伤害别人”为题,让学生写一篇短文。体裁可为记叙文、议论文和说明文。但根据考生的实际情况,还是记叙文好些,可以通过自己的亲身体验来证明这句话。考生成文时应注意:1.结构上:采用三段成文,第一段引出话题;第二段讲自己的亲身体验;第三段说自己的认识,回归主题。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:第一人称。4.注意恰当使
12、用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。 范文: one possible version my classmate admires my fluent english very much and i usually feel encouraged by his compliments. one day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. i volunteered to do it by saying “m
13、y classmate is an eccentric boywhose clothes never fit him.” hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my classmates face turned red. after class, i learned from the teacher that my classmate would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others. my mindless words must have
14、hurt him deeply. not until then did i realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative. we should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak. 2014年 请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。 small things make a big difference. the small things we do can make us a responsible mem
15、ber of the society. 注意: 无须写标题; 除诗歌外,文体不限; 内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例; 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。 【考点】考察开放性作文 【写作指导】 本文属于开放性作文,要求我们就:我们做的微小的事情都可以对我们的社会产生很大的影响。告诉我们要关注生活中的小事。仍然属于议论文,可以使用一般现在时和第三人称。当然也可以写成记叙文,叙述一件小事让我们懂得要关注细节。 要点:1.叙述生活中发生的一件小事;以及这件小事对我们产生的影响。2.说明任何一件小事都会对我们的社会产生很大的影响。告诉我们要重视这样的小事。
16、首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。范文: one possible version it isnt hard to grow up into a responsible member of society. i can well remember an incident that happened on a
17、 rainy sunday afternoon. i was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. a man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and i joined in without hesitation. luckily she
18、was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. compared with the escaped driver, i am proud of what i did. as a member of the society, i am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society. 附 : 评分标准或原则 (1)评分时,按5个档次给分。根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该 档次的要求衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分
19、。 (2)词数少于80词数,降一个档次。紧扣主题,适当发挥(多于120词)不予扣分。 (3)评分时,关注点:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性 及语言的得体性。 (4)语法、拼写和标点符号等是语言准确性的重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响 程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 (5)如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。 2各档次的给分范围和要求: 第五档(很好):(20-25分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。 -覆盖所有内容要点。 -应用较多的语法结构和词汇。 -语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
20、 -有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档(好)(15-20分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 -虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。 -应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 -语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构、词汇所致。 -应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档(适当):(10-15) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 -虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。 -应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。【篇二:2014年湖北英语高考满分作文 事例作文模板】 2014年湖北高考满分作文
21、 - 王祖元 武汉市新洲区第一中学 去年写了一篇文章,号召湖北高考不要出事例作文,然而,今年还是事例。我心好烦。再次用去年的模板把今年的高考作文写一遍。 as is widely acknowledged, whatever small good deeds we do can definitely make a big difference in our life. i learned this from one of my experiences that i went through during my senior one school life. one day, when i wa
22、s wandering through the street, i suddenly witnessed an old man fall to the ground. without hesitation, i hurried to help him stand up and rested him in a street chair nearby. what surprised me most was that some classmates warned me not to do it again as the family might mistake me for the offender
23、. i was so frustrated that i almost accepted the fact that i had really done something improper. it was my parents approval and the teachers praise as well as the familys gratitude that helped me the good deed i had done. from then on, whenever possible and wherever necessary, i am always willing to
24、 give a helping hand to those in need. it wasnt long before i was chosen as one example in our school for helping others. from this story, i am absolutely convinced that small kind deeds are worth doing in spite that we may be wronged for this. only in this way can we contribute to building a harmon
25、ious society.【篇三:2014年全国高考各地英语作文及范文】 假定你是李华,计划暑假间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)注意:1词数100左右; 2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3参考词汇:住宿-accommodation 范文: i am a student in china and i plan to go to britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. ive seen your ad, and id like to know somethin
26、g more about your six-weekenglish course. first, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? besides, wish there would not be too many student in a class, d also like to knowhow much i have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. would there be host f
27、amily or university dormitory? i am looking forward to your early reply. 一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、 1、 家庭 2、 工作 3、 业余生活 注意:1、次数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好i often imagine what my life will be like in the future. 范文: i often imagine what my life will be like in the future. i thi
28、nk my life will be very different in ten years. i will be twenty-eight years old by then. i will have my own family. probably with a lovely child. i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer. i will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, i will do a good job in whate
29、ver i do. in my free time, i will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. on my为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了heart-to-heart专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie,收到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了你自己的困扰;近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下: 1. 表示理解并给予安慰; 2. 提出建议并说明理由。 注意: 1. 词数120
30、左右; 2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪 hi worried, im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. _ yours, jamie 范文: hi worried, first, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. this is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or
31、 yourself. second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. and third, remain optimistic about your future. such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. i hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. yours, jamie 第一节 (15分) 你给英国朋友chris写一封信,内容包括: 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游; 2.由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往; 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。 注意: 1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 dear chris, _
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