1高中英语作文满分技巧.docx

1、1高中英语作文满分技巧高中英语作文高分技巧英语作文在高考英语中占有很重要的地位。相对于其他题型，英语作文最容易在短期内有所突破。同时因为作文属于主观题，主观题就意味着需要人工阅卷而不是机器阅卷，只要考生抓住阅卷老师的心理，按照他们所期待的模式去写，必定能在高考中取得高分。英语作文在评阅时遵循语言第一位（语言高级），内容第二位（要点齐全），结构第三位（文章分段）的原则，也就是说阅卷老师最注重的是语言，换句话说是亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少定出档次，所以在英语作文中，语言上的亮点是得高分的关键。亮点一共有四种：1. 高级词汇和语法；2. 修辞手法；3. 有效的连词；4. 名人名言或谚语。以下

2、介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法，以及修辞手法当中一些技巧的使用。1肯定不如否定好修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”，如果写成The postman comes on time every day，就不如变成双重否定，The postman never fails to come on time，就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。“几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响”，写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a

3、 woman whose attitude towards life had not been affected by the earthquake.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为同学们加分。2陈述不如倒装妙在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共以下几种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，就足以应对书面表达。1. 否定词开头如果写出的句子中有否定词，例如：I will never marry you.不如变成倒装，用否定词开头Never will I marry you.就算作使用了高级语法。其他的否

4、定词，如not, seldom, hardly等单词开头后面的句子，如果采用倒装都属于更好的表达。2. 地点状语开头在很多年的高考书面表达中都有表达地点的句子，一个建筑位于什么位置，或什么地方有什么东西，都可以应用倒装。例如在2006年的全国卷中，图书馆位于学校的中央，Our library is in the center of our school.变成倒装就用地点状语开头：In the center of our school lies our library.表达“河岸上有很多花”：On the bank stand some flowers.“天空中繁星点点”：In the sky

5、hang little stars.在表达地点时，把地点状语放在句首，后面主谓倒装。这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。例如：In the center of our school lies our library，which is between the garden and the teaching building.3. Only+介词短语在2007年全国卷中，“只有通过这种方式我才能提高英语”，这句话可以写成Only in this way can I improve my English.

6、4. 形容词+as+主语+be动词例如：Young as I am, I can manage it.Rich as our country is, we have a lot of problems.在2000年的高考书面表达中：Badly injured as he was, he managed to take down the cars number.3主动不如被动巧在近些年的阅卷中，发现考生在写作中很少使用被动语态，也许是受中文思维的影响，几乎整篇文章都使用主动语态。其实在英文中，被动语态的使用是很重要的。英语是一门客观的语言，而汉语是主观的语言，具体体现则是：英语经常用被动语态，而

7、汉语经常用主动语态；英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态更符合英语的习惯。例如在2006年的高考中，很多学生在表达“我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天”时，都是用：We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.这句话如果写成：At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days，得分会更高。4分词结构不能少前文提到，阅卷老师

8、喜欢看到的高级语法是：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。在所有的高级语法中，阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构。口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词二看：看主语三改：改分词If such is the case, you

9、 should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改，第一步，去掉连词if；第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格；第三步，改分词，is 变成分词是being，所以最后变成Such being the case, you should apologize to her.就变成了独立主格。如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构，例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话Because I am a student, Id like to know the price for students. 改成Being a student, Id like to know

10、the price for students.总之，英语作文重在设计，设计出让阅卷老师眼前一亮的句子，写出有分词，倒装，强调，修辞的句子，使整篇文章句型丰富，不单一，有效地使用连接成分使文章连贯，方能让你的作文在高考中拿到高分。新知呈现：高考英语作文高分句型积累：1.As far as .is/am/are concerned就而言2.It can be said with certainty that可以肯定地说3.As the proverb says，正如谚语所说的，4.It has to be noticed that必须注意到5.Its generally recognized th

11、at普遍认为6.Its likely that 这可能是因为7.Its hardly that这是很难的8.Theres no denying the fact that毫无疑问，无可否认9.Nothing is more important than the fact that没有什么比更重要。10.whats far more important is that更重要的是02衔接句型1.A case in point is.一个典型的例子是.2.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore，然而问题并非如此简单，所以3.But its a pity

12、 that但遗憾的是4.In spite of the fact that尽管5.Further, we hold the opinion that此外，我们坚持认为，6.However , the difficulty lies in然而，困难在于7.Similarly, we should pay attention to同样，我们要注意8.As it has been mentioned above正如上面所提到的9.In this respect,从这个角度上，10.However,nevertheless, 然而， 03结尾句型1.I will conclude by saying.

13、最后我要说.2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that因此，我们有理由相信3.All things considered= In a word=In conclusion总而言之4.It may be safely said that它可以有把握地说5.Therefore, in my opinion,因此，在我看来，6.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论7.The data/statistics/f

14、igures lead us to the conclusion that通过数据我们得到的结论是，8.It can be concluded from the discussion that从讨论中我们可以得出的结论9.From my point of view, it would be better if在我看来，如果也许更好长难句分析和仿写：11. Once a decision has been made, all of us should stick to it.12. Children under 12 years of age in that country must be un

15、der adult supervision when in a public library.13. We are living in an age when many things are done on computer.14.He is the only one of the students who has been a winner of scholarship for three years.15. Is this the reason that he explained at the meeting for his carelessness in his work?16. As

16、is known to everybody, the moon travels round the earth once every month.17， It can be helpful to those who carefully choose the programmes that they watch(定语从句中含有另一个定语从句) and harmful to those who watch it too much.（定语从句）18， My family offers me warmth and cares, while my friends give me strength and

17、 courage.(对比从句)19，When it comes to friends, I desire those who will share my happiness, who possess wings of their own and who will fly with me.20， As far as I can see, there is only one possible way to keep away from the danger.21. Foshan paper cutting is a traditional folk art with a long history,

18、 which dates back to more than 1000 years ago.(佛山剪纸艺术是一种传统的民间艺术，历史悠久，起源于1000 多年前。)22. There are more than 30 shops for paper cutting in Foshan, and paper cutting products sell as far as in Southeast Asia (有三十多家经营剪纸的商店， 产品远销东南亚)23. The Lantern Festival, which falls on January 15th of the lunar calend

19、ar every year, is one of the most important traditional festivals in China and the first one after the Spring Festival as well. Nor only does the Lantern Festival mean the first night in the new year to see a full moon, but it is the symbol of a family reunion.高分范文分析：全国 I 卷 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国

20、朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.内容：学习唐诗；3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。范文Dear Leslie,How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and Im writing to tell you something about our next lesson.The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afte

21、rnoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. Youd better make full preparations before class and have a brief underst

22、anding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.If there is anything that I can help you, please dont hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua. 全国 II 卷 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展

23、览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。学生实例1（分数：24分 四川德阳中学）Dear HenryIm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now Im glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibit

24、ion held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition, the theme of which is beauty of China, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our clubs works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of pap

25、er-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. Im sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! Im looking forwa

26、rd to your reply.点评1.逻辑性较好，层次分明，连贯恰当；2.运用词块、句型丰富；3.个别用词需要改进比如说leader, leave a wonderful impression不符英语表达习惯；4.第一段不够简洁。 全国 III 卷 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1.球队活动；2.报名方式及截止日期。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。范文Dear Eric,I am Li Hua. Occasionally learning that you are

27、addicted to tennis, I am writing to sincerely invite you to join the table tennis team in our school aimed at developing our interests and improving our skills.Considering the enormous benefits, which we can earn steadily from tennis practice, including preventing us from getting shortsighted and ke

28、eping physically healthy, we are lost in training course. Definitely, as for the activities, we will be honor to be given high-level training by a professional coach every Friday around 3-5 pm. Meanwhile, we would be divided into several groups to conduct competitions every two weeks.If you are interested in what I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st.Im looking forward to your reply even your appearance in our training center soon.