英语备考 中考英语书面表达题型分析.docx

1、英语备考 中考英语书面表达题型分析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（四川中考模拟）书面表达现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已成为流行趋势，二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。1.方便，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。2.有很大的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。价格较便宜。3.买货容易退货难；实物和图片有差距。4.网络支付不安全。 _【答案】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.Its a new way of shopping. It has lots of adv

2、antages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you cant buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every

3、coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You cant see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and dont like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. Whats more, its not safe to pay through the internet.

4、We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】写作分析：本文需要写一篇小议论文，主题是网上购物，需要讨论到网上购物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章结构清晰，可以先总起陈述，然后用一段来描述优点，再用一段描述劣势和不足，最后一段收尾，这样的作文就会条理清晰，结构合理。具体来说，每个观点在陈述的时候要注意表达准确。写作亮点：首段总起介绍，挑明这篇作文的主题Internet Shopping。第二段开始描述优势，这里用到了“无论什么时候你喜欢/想要”（whenever you like）结构，在表达“.是开放的”也很准确，用了“be op

5、en”。比较级的应用也相对准确，例如cheaper。连词的使用也是亮点，besides意为“除此之外”。在谈到劣势的时候引用了俗语“Every coin has two sides.”，是个亮点。“Whats more”也被合理使用到了，意为“此外”，避免与besides重复，体现了文章语言的多样性。总体来说要点均被提及，语言准确富有活力。2（江苏中考模拟）书面表达在英语课上，同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。团队旅游有导游，不会迷路；不必自己找食宿结识朋友，互相帮助个人旅游自由安排时间；选择自己喜欢的旅游景点；学会照顾自

6、己你的想法注意事项：1文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节；2想法至少在两句以上；3词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：团队旅游travel with a group 个人旅游travel aloneRecently, we have discussed the ways to go travellingHere is the resultSome students choose to travel with a group_【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travellingHere is the resultS

7、ome students choose to travel with a groupWith a guides help, they wont get lost and they dont need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselvesBesides, they can make friends and help each other while travellingHowever, other students prefer to travel alone Thats because they can arrange their ti

8、me freely and choose to visit their favourite sightsWhats more, its a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselvesFor me, Id like to travel aloneI want to spend enough time visiting the places I like In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better【解析】这是一篇图表，要求谈谈自己对不同的旅游方式的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用

9、正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。3（江苏中考模拟）书面表达难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。注意:1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;2.短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺;

10、3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also fr

11、om the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didnt do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths pr

12、oblems. Besides, I didnt have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】试题

13、分析：本篇书面表达以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中 not only but also，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and,

14、a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了自己愿望与想法，使文章增色不少，值得学习。4（山东中考模拟）初中生活即将结束，学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。内容要点如下：1. 初中科目更多，好的学习方法很重要；2. 锻炼身体，保持健康；3. 参加社团活动，使学校生活丰富；4. 多读书，多交朋友；5

15、. 补充一两点个人想法。注意：1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；2. 词数：6080；3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；4. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：method n. 方法club n社团colorful adj.丰富的Welcome to our school!_【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore Id like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you

16、 to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a goo

17、d choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，自己即将毕业，给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。结合所给的材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，以第一人称

18、为主，要注意主谓一致，所写的句子要符合英语语法，用自己熟悉的单词和句式来写。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，开头两句很自然地过渡到正文上来。用了短语和句式，如：graduate from毕业于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用来一些过渡词或短语，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文衔接很自然。5（湖北中考模拟）学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下提示，并结合自己的观点，以How Can We Protect Ourselves?为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应

19、该怎样自我保护（self-protection）。提示：1. never swim alone;2. be careful to make friends;3. call the police when you are in danger;4. eat healthy food;5. dont crowd（go upstairs and downstairs）. 要求：1. 句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯；2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。How Can We Protect Ourselves?_【答案】How Can We Protect Ourselves?Self

20、-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves sa

21、fe. Also, we ought to eat healthy. Besides, we shouldnt crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember its dangerous to swim alone.In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.【解析】这篇作文要求我们以

22、How can we protect ourselves为题，谈一谈青少年在日常生活中应该如何保护自己。这是一篇话题作文，文章中只给出了写作的题目，而未给出具体的内容，因此首先学生们应结合自己的日常生活，发挥想象力，先列出文章具体内容的提纲，然后根据题纲来组织语言，最后成文。这样的题目是有点难度的，但也一定程度上放开了学生的思维，学生们可以根据自己所想来写作，而不用受到内容的限制。写之前，要注意确定文章应使用的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇作文应以第一人称we为主，一般现在时态来叙述。注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，以主谓宾和主系表的结构为基础，写出正确的

23、句子，然后为提升文章档次，使用几个较复杂的句型，如复合句、非谓语动词、被动结构等等。还应注意语句之间的连接，使用一些短语、副词等，使整篇文章意思连贯。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容符合题目要求，并且内容充实、完整，表达清楚、明了。作者从三个方面讲述了自己的看法，这几个方面都非常符合实际，所提建议很合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态、第一人称为主，语法规范、准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 和Sec

24、ond, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.两句话中使用了状语从句；再如In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.中非谓语动词的使用。文章各部分之间使用了较好的连接成分，如First, Second, Also, Besides, In short等等，这些词汇和短语的使用让文章具有连贯性。6（四川雅安中学中考

25、模拟）书面表达。假如你们学校要开展主题为：“如何保护地球”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。提示：1. 现在存在的环境问题。2. 采取措施，保护环境。1） 关闭工厂，不乱扔垃圾。 2） 节约用水、用电的方法。3） 使用购物袋代替塑料袋, 尽量乘坐公共交通。4） 回收利用废品等。要求： 1.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。2.词数80-100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不记入字数。Hello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well. Thanks for listening!【答案】How to Protect

26、the EarthHello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.However it becomes dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature. Its time to take measures to protect the e

27、nvironment. First of all, close the factory and dont litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.I hope our home will become better and better.Thanks for listenin