ucwkrq吴俭托福写作讲义310.docx

1、ucwkrq吴俭托福写作讲义310、| !_一个人总要走陌生的路，看陌生的风景，听陌生的歌，然后在某个不经意的瞬间，你会发现，原本费尽心机想要忘记的事情真的就这么忘记了. 托福写作讲义吴俭wujianggTeaching Plan (10)第一次课 托福写作考试整体介绍 作文理论Briefing 学习目的及课堂安排第二次课 词法：30组托福经典词汇 语法：20组常犯语法错误 改错练习第三次课 独立写作综述 Beginning Paragraph的写法第四次课 Topic Sentence的写法 How to develop sentence (1)第五次课 Supporting Ideas的写

2、法第六次课 解题思路的扩展与总结 佳句赏析第七次课 让步式的写法 How to develop sentence (2)第八次课 结尾段的写法 写作流程总结及思路培养第九次课 综合写作综述 综合写作阅读及听力技巧 综合写作文章结构 综合写作模板使用第十次课 综合写作练习 托福写作最新考题分析 新托福考场备考策略及全攻略第一次课课程安排 托福写作考试整体介绍 作文理论Briefing 学习目的及课堂安排 托福作文考试简介50分钟/2篇作文（综合写作、独立写作） 综合写作（150字）5种关系（_） 独立写作（350字）3种出题方式3种基本话题 作文理论Briefing作文考试目标6分作文的三个标准

3、 写作面临的2大困惑 写作之中遵循的2个原则1. _ 2. _ 说明文（两段式） 议论文（三种传统理论） 传统段 对称式 让步式学习目的及课堂安排本课堂的学习内容1、 2、 3、 4、 第二次课课程安排 词法：30组托福经典词汇 语法：20组常犯语法错误 改错练习雅思四大话题30组经典词组和句子1. action/activityThe police took immediate _when they realized the situation was getting out of hand.Economic_ stagnated as the recession took hold.2.

4、advice/advise Can you_ me on the best course of action to take?He offered me some excellent _3. affect/effectCuts in spending will have a serious_ on the National Health Service.The strikes will seriously_ train services.4. appreciable/appreciative There is an_ difference between slaughter and murde

5、r.She was very_ of our efforts to help.5. assumption/presumptionThey raised taxes on the_ that it would help control spending.Its sheer_ for the government to suggest things have improved since they came to power.6. avoid/preventRapid government reforms managed to_ a revolution taking place.Hes alwa

6、ys trying to_ taking a decision if he can help it.7. besides/besideThe office is just_ the railway station. _ their regular daytime job, many people do extra work in the evening.8. briefly/shortly _ before the conflict began, the army pulled down the border post.The minister spoke _ about the need f

7、or political reform.9. channel/canal The television_ received a formal complaint about the program.The Suez_ was built in the second half of the nineteenth century.10. conscientious/conscious_ workers always take their work seriously. Most people are_ of the need to protect the environment.11. conti

8、nual/continuousA_ trade embargo has badly affected the economic infrastructure.The computer has given us_ problems ever since we installed it.12. control/inspectEnvironmental health officers regularly_ kitchens and other food preparation areas.The government plans to_ the price of meat to make sure

9、it doesnt go up too much.13. criticism/objectionsThey didnt raise any_ when we insisted on inspecting the figures.The governments plan was met with severe _.14. damage/injury/harmIt was a severe _ which needed immediate hospital treatment.A lot of_ was caused to buildings along the coast during the

10、storm.There is no _ in working out the details right now. 15. during/for/whileShops were closed _ the duration of the conflict._the transition from a dictatorship to democracy, the country experienced severe strikes.The bomb went off_ the president was making his speech.16. however/moreoverThe plan

11、was good in theory. _, in practice it was extremely difficult to implement.The plan was excellent. _, it was clear from the beginning that it was going to be a success.17. inconsiderate/inconsiderableAn _ amount of money was wasted. _ behavior makes life unpleasant for everybody.18. intolerable/into

12、lerantI consider his behavior to be quite _ The government is _ of other political parties.19. job/workEverybody has the right to a decent _ with good pay.Following the recession, many people are still looking for _20. lay(s)/lie(s) The city of Guito _ near the equator.The manager made it clear he i

13、ntended to _ down some strict rules.21. look at /watchWe must _the situation in Lugumba carefully, and be prepared to act if violence flares again.We need to _ the problem carefully and if there is anything we can do about it.22. permission/permitIm afraid cant_ photography in here.They received _ t

14、o attend the sessions as long as they didnt interrupt.23. possibility/chanceThere is always the _ that the government will reverse its decision.If we act now, we have a good _ of finding a cure for the disease.24. practice / practiceIts important to _your English whenever possible.You need more _ be

15、fore you take the exam.25. priceless/worthless _ paintings by artists like Van Gogh should not be in the hands of private collectors.At inflation spiraled out of control, paper money suddenly became_26. principal/principleThe_ of the college is an ardent non-smoker.The countrys _ products are paper

16、and wood.Not many people are familiar with the _ of nuclear physics.27. process/processionThe_ made its way down the avenue.Applying for a visa can be a long and frustrating_28. raise/riseAs prices _ , demand usually drops.In response to the current oil shortage, most airlines plan to _ their fares.

17、29. respectable/respectfulThe delegates listened in_ silence as the chairman spoke.They want to bring up their children in an area which is considered to be _30. treat/cureHospitals are so understaffed that they find it impossible to _ patients with minor injures.They were unable to_ the disease, an

18、d hundreds died as a result.1. There be结构错误表达：There have many people believe that computers are useful.正确表达：2. 情态动词（情态动词必须加一个动词原形）错误表达：We should be take some effective measures.正确表达：3. 不一致不一致包括主谓不一致，也包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等错误表达：When one have money, he can do what he want to.正确表达：4. 时态问题错误表达：Some people

19、 argued that women should join the army.正确表达：5. 语态问题错误表达：Some people think that old buildings should preserve.正确表达：6. 悬垂修饰语错误表达：To solve this problem, proper measures should be taken.正确表达：错误表达：Serving in the army, self-respect and confidence can be cultivated.正确表达：7. 词性使用错误表达：Nobody can negative the

20、 importance of education.正确表达：8. 介词短语加了句号错误表达：With the development of society. People begin to realize the importance of education.正确表达：9. 句子不完整错误表达：The question whether the internet is a blessing or a curse.正确表达：10. 固定词组的搭配错误表达：There is a great deal of violence shown in media to the purpose of maki

21、ng people relaxed.正确表达：11. 指代不清指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致错误表达：However, the internet also has their disadvantages.正确表达：12. such as和for example的区别错误表达：Computers enjoy a host of merits for example high speed, easy accessibility and great efficiency.正确表达：错误表达：Studying with teachers is benefici

22、al. Such as, we can acquire both useful knowledge and practical skills.正确表达：13. 逗号隔开了两个完整的句子错误表达：The human race has entered a marvelous age, the world is developing at an amazing rate.正确表达：14. 用词不当是指在特定的句子中如何适当的选用词语的问题，我们在作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是错误表达：The use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also gives ris

23、e to pollution.正确表达：15. 不连贯不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不通顺错误表达：As I see it, water shortage, it is the most pressing problem of the earth.正确表达：16. 名词单复数使用错误错误表达：Living in this information-explosion society, we can obtain an increasing number of informations.正确表达：17. 正式原则一般不能出现缩写形式错误表达：As is known to all, we

24、 cant do without advertisement.正确表达：特例：18. 大小写的错误每句开头第一个字母都得大写错误表达：as we all know, life is hope and hope is life.正确表达：19. 从句引导词错误错误表达：As is widely-accepted, that there are many people which fail to take into account the fact that the diversity of species is the greatest charm in the world.正确表达：20. 介

25、词使用不当错误表达：There is no yet absolute agreement in the question whether schools are of no use in the Computer Age.正确表达：错误表达：On a nutshell, we can conclude that media will still exert positive impacts on the societal development.正确表达：Correction Exercises1. The invention of computers makes people live mo

26、re comfortable and convenient.2. Dont put hand in pocket.3. Many traffic accidents occurred is the result of careless.4. Last night was too cold.5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages, such as it is very clean and cheap.6. Some people claim that fast food will instead of tr

27、aditional food.7. Despite he is very diligent at study, he still cannot pass the TOEFL test.8. I finished homework and went out of dormitory for a drink.9. Though the Internet has many benefits, but it also has some drawbacks.10. If you are convenient, please give me a hand.11. In the past, the pric

28、e of milk was so expensive that few people could hardly afford it.12. I forgot my watch at home.13. Smoking is harmful to your body.14. Under his help, we past the IELTS test.15. The two types of designs exist difference.16. The true fact is he never offers help to others.17. There are many people plan to study abroad.18. Keep pets are very popular among people live in big city.19. If let alone at home, many old people are very dangerous.20. The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease; however, they seldom do so.21. Today is very hot, I stay home