最新中考英语书面表达培优题经典.docx

1、最新中考英语书面表达培优题经典最新中考英语书面表达培优题经典一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1 最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。现 状大约70%学生眼睛近视主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等预防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动2. 养成正确的用眼习惯你的观点 .（至少一条）参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The survey shows that

2、 many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spen

3、d too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our e

4、yes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【详解】这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成正确的用眼习惯（have the good habit of

5、）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。（I think ；try ones best to do sth.）。常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of等。2安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。提示：1. 体育锻炼2. 上下楼梯3. 交朋结友4. 食品卫生要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；2短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。3词数：80100词。短文开头

6、已给出，不计入总词数。Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students._ _【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having

7、 sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So dont crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, dont quarrel or even fight. Last but not least

8、 , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, its important to remember these for us all.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。3书面表达假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是

9、否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数80左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my heal

10、th. Now Id like to tell you something about the haze. _ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now Id like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year

11、. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to

12、work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份

13、给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】

14、这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the d

15、octor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the

16、 environment.等。4书面表达假设你将代表你校2009届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的内容要点如下：回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。注意：1. 90词左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is

17、 a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank you for listening!【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great y

18、ears for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers efforts, our parents support and our classmates help. At this moment, I would like to thank al

19、l of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿，在写作中适当发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿的格

20、式，没有出现自己的真实姓名。5为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。内容提示：1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。要求：1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。【答案】Long long ago

21、, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didnt wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in

22、 the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand i

23、n the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were.注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。6中央电视台经典咏流传节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示，以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读

24、过的一本书或首诗，并建议大家多读书，读好书。要点提示：读书的重要性1. 获取知识，开阔眼界；2. 提升自我，增强自信读过的一本书或一首诗1. 作品内容简介；2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。多读书，读好书1. 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯；2. 多读经典文学作品注意：1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：classic 经典作品； open up ones eyes 开阔眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；

25、responsibility 责任；cooperation 合作。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. 【答案】Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us

26、more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.These days I am reading a book whose title is Ja

27、ne Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The books writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in 1816.She had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard

28、 life, but she was self-confident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.【解析】这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己读过的一本书。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一，三人称，一般现在时态和过去时态，注意标点符号

29、及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。7中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。你的烦恼你的做法个头不高，相貌平常不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少学会沟通，友善待人学习压力大，课外活动少（自主发挥，至少两点）要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. Id like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. T