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1、作文秘籍原稿My New FriendHello, everyone. My name is Jenny and this is my new friend Lily Smith. Lily is twelve years old and she is from England. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. They are at the same hospital. Her grandfather is a farm worker. Lilys favourite sport is table tennis. its a

2、 very good sport. Her favourite colour is green, because it is pretty. Its means spring is coming. Lily likes reading. Her favourite food is vegetables, it is healthy. Lily is a very nice girl, I like her very much.13Step 1 确认作文要求、写作人称改正单词及语法错误My New FriendHello, everyone. My name is Jenny and this

3、is my new friend Lily Smith. Lily is twelve years old and she is from England. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. They are at the same hospital. Her grandfather is a farm worker. Lilys favourite sport is table tennis. its a very good sport.（Its good for her health.） Her favourite colo

4、ur is green, because it is pretty. It（It）means spring is coming. Lily likes reading. Her favourite food is vegetables, it （. It）is healthy. Lily is a very nice girl, I （. I）like her very much.一个完整的句子有主语、谓语（动词、be动词）、宾语及其它修饰语等。He is a student. (不能再加其它句子，除非用but或and链接，如：He is a student, but he has a job

5、. 错：He is a student, he has a job.)I love her. (不能是I am love her)Step 2 分段：同一个主题的内容要归到一个段落。文章要有：开头、正文（12段）、结尾。My New FriendHello, everyone. My name is Jenny and this is my new friend Lily Smith. She is twelve years old and she is from England. Lily is a student. Her favourite sport is table tennis.

6、Its good for her health. Her favourite colour is green, because it is pretty. It is the colour of spring. Lily likes reading. Her favourite food is vegetables. It is healthy. Look! They are Lilys parents and her grandfather. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. They are at the same hosp

7、ital. Her grandfather is a farm worker on a farm. Lily is a very nice girl. I like her very much.Step 3润色：将作文提高的最后冲刺（文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩，可使文章高端大气上档次！）My New FriendHello, everyone. My name is Jenny and this is my new friend Lily Smith. Now, let me introduce(介绍) her for you! Lily is a student. She is twelve

8、 years old and she is from England. Her favourite sport is table tennis. Its good for her health. Her favourite food is vegetables. It is healthy. Her favourite colour is green. In Lilys eyes(在Lily看来), it is the colour of spring. So it is very pretty. Lily likes reading, and she is good at (擅长于)writ

9、ing. Look! They are Lilys parents and her grandfather. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. They are at the same hospital. Her grandfather is a farm worker on a farm. She loves them very much.Lily is a very nice girl. I like her very much. Do you want to make friends with her?作文小宝典1. 不会写的句子或单词不要冒险去写，避免出错，除非你觉得写成功的话，能够帮助你的作文惊艳四座。2. 审题要仔细，内容要全面，人称要正确。3. 作文的句子要通顺，注意一个句子的结构。尽量套用课文中的好句。不要中式！（Good good study, day day up.）4. 段落分明确，一个段落里不要出现不相关的句子。（I dont like English! It is a good day.）5. 用上属于你自己的法宝们。将平时课外积累的好词好句用在作文中，为作文锦上添花。