高考英语复习专题20 读后续写情感刻画解析版Word格式.docx

1、 sth. well up on me / sth. swept over me A flood of fear welled up in me.一股恐惧涌上心头。高考真题：（1） 2020.7全国新爆米花 He was so delighted that he could hardly speak, but his bright smile face spoke for him.（2） 2020.1浙江给Poppy买狗作伴 Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog.（3） 2017.11浙江与善忘母亲一同旅游 Every tim

2、e we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey, a pleasant smile would spread over Moms face.三、动作反映法利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪下面文章片段中的句子：With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping_to_see_the_lake. （动作描写，说明Jane满怀期望） To

3、her surprise, （利用介词短语体现Jane的吃惊） she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. （寓情于景，体现Jane的无望失落） She suddenly realized that she was lost.四、句式变换法利用高级句式和修饰成分细化情感细节句型1：独立主格结构“Absolutely！” replied John, excitement shinning in his eyes. （利用名词excitement和独立主格结构，描写John的兴奋激动）约翰答道，“一定

4、”，他两眼兴奋地闪闪发光。句型2：so.that结构So angry was the bear that it roared and smacked the fence violently. （so . that倒装句型）熊怒火中烧，开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击护栏。句型3：how+宾语从句You can not imagine how frightened we were at the approach of the polar bear. （how引导的宾语从句，介词短语）你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们多么的恐惧。句式4：非常 I am more than + 情感类形容词 to Im m

5、ore than happy to learn that you are admitted to Peking University.得知你被北京大学录取，我非常高兴。句式5：让我非常的是 Much to my + 情感类名词, Much to my disappointment, no one came up to give me a helping hand.令我非常失望的是，没有人站过来帮助我。句子演练.按要求补全下面动作、情感和心理细节的句子1简又害怕又无助，靠着一棵树坐下，歇歇疼痛的双脚。 , Jane sat against a tree, . （形容词短语/非谓语动词作状语）2“

6、如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我现在就不会被困在这里了，”她想，悔恨的泪水模糊了她的眼睛。“ ，” she thought to herself . （虚拟语气的倒装句， with复合结构）3她挣扎着站起来寻找那个湖。 4她精疲力竭，她爬上一块大石头，躺了下来，很快睡着了。 （so . that状语从句，一连串的动作）5简醒来时天已经亮了。6尽管很沮丧，她还是决定继续前进。 , she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. （让步状语从句） , she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. （状语从句的省略

7、句）7随着小溪的声音，她向水边走去。 , she walked toward the water. （非谓语动词作状语）8突然，她注意到远处有一个熟悉的身影向她走来。 （非谓语动词作宾补）.将以上补全后的各句合并为短文，注意恰当的衔接过渡 参考答案.1Scared and helpless, Jane sat against a tree, resting her aching feet. （形容词短语/非谓语动词作状语）2“Had I not quarreled with Tom, I wouldnt have been trapped here，” she thought to herse

8、lf with regretful tears clouding her eyes. （虚拟语气的倒装句， with复合结构）3She struggled to her feet to search for the lake.4She became so exhausted that she climbed up onto a big rock, lay down and fell fast asleep. （so . that状语从句，一连串的动作）5It was daybreak when Jane woke up.6Although she was depressed, she deci

9、ded to continue forcing her way ahead. （让步状语从句）Although depressed, she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. （状语从句的省略句）7Following the sound of the stream, she walked toward the water. （非谓语动词作状语）8Suddenly she noticed a familiar figure at a distance coming towards her. （非谓语动词作宾补）.参考范文Scared and h

10、elpless, Jane sat against a tree, resting her aching feet. “Had I not quarreled with Tom, I wouldnt have been trapped here，” she thought to herself with regretful tears clouding her eyes. She struggled to her feet to search for the lake. However, she became so exhausted that she climbed up onto a bi

11、g rock, lay down and fell fast asleep. It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Although depressed, she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. Following the sound of the stream, she walked toward the water. Suddenly she noticed a familiar figure at a distance coming towards her.【补充语料1】1. 愤怒类（1） He was

12、fuming with rage. 他气得大发雷霆。（fume v. 发怒）（2） He could hardly control his rage. 他几乎控制不住怒火。（3） His face clouded with anger. 他气得脸色阴沉。（脸上一块乌云）2. 悲伤忧愁类（1） He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。（2） I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。（3） Her hands were sh

13、aking. She was on the verge of tears. 她手在颤抖，她快要哭了。（verge 边缘）（4） Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he was drowned with sadness. 听到消息，他淹没在悲伤中。（5） They sat there with glum looks on their face. 他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。3. 害怕类（1） 2018.6浙江卷：农场游玩迷路 Tears of fear and regret rolled down my cheeks.（2） 2017.6浙江卷

14、：与朋友骑车遇狼 After hearing Macs experience, they froze, their mouths hanging open.（3） He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. 他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。（4） Fears slowly crept upon her. 恐惧慢慢蔓延到她身上。（5） Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied. 她脸色苍白站在那里，舌头打结，说不出话。【补充语料2】关于情感句子的积累：（表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写），用so.

15、that.1、兴奋：I was so excited/thrilled that I gave a jump in the air.我激动得跳了起来2、开心：I was so happy/cheerful that I jumped up and down.我高兴得上蹿下跳。3、感动：I was so moved that I failed to say a word.我感动得一句话也说不出来。4、悲伤：I was so sad that I hid my face in my hands.我难过得用手捂住了脸。5、生气：I was so angry that I failed to say

16、a word. 我气得一句话也说不出来。6、害怕：I was so scared/frightened that my palms sweated and my heart pounded.我害怕得手心冒汗，心怦怦直跳。7、羞愧：I was so ashamed that I could feel my face burning.我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。模拟练习01读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Missus Sommersone day found herself the unexpected owner of fifteen dollars. It

17、seemed to her a very large amount ofmoney.For a day or two she walked around in a dreamy state as she thought about her choices. Her daughter Janie was wearing worn shoes and needed new ones. She would buy cloth for new shirts for the boys. Her daughter Mag should have anotherdress. And still there

18、would be enough left for new stockings for her children. The idea about how to spend the dollars made her restless with excitement.On the day she planned to go shopping with the money, she ate a light meal- no! Between getting the children fed and the house cleaned, and preparing herself to go shopp

19、ing, sheforgotto eat at all!When she arrived at the largedepartmentstore, she spotted a pile of silk stockings at the entrance. A sign nearby announced that they had been reduced in price a young girl behind the counter asked her if she wished to examine the silky leg coverings. She smiled as if she

20、 had been asked to inspect diamond jewelry, and started to feel the soft, expensive items. Missus Sommers picked up a black pair and looked at them closely. Two red marks suddenly showed on her pale face. She looked up at the shop girl and said proudly, “Well, I willbuythis pair.”Missus Sommers chan

21、ged her cotton stockings for the new silk ones in the ladies rest area. She had let herself be controlled by some machine-like force that directed her actions and freed her ofresponsibility. How good was the touch of the silk on her skin! Then she put her shoes back on and put her old stockings into

22、 her bag. Next, she went to the shoe department, where she tried on a pair of new boots. Her foot and ankle lookedlovely. She could not believe that they were a part of herself.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：After buying a pair

23、of new boots, she walked into the clothing department._Paragraph 2：She was about to leave the store when a kid running around reminded her of something.翻译小练习：1. 来到化妆镜前，上下打量着镜子里的自己，眼睛盯着鞋子，“如果我的鞋子和我身上完美的衣服搭配，我看起来会更漂亮吗？萨默斯太太心想，向部门的女售货员招手。2. 萨默斯太太问她今年的时装款式是什么，是否可以试穿一下。3. 她的要求得到了批准，萨默斯太太继续尝试她认为在她身上最好的东西。

24、4. 身上穿着不同的衣服，她在镜子前转来转去，像时装秀上的超级模特一样欣赏自己。5. 她一件接一件地试穿，深情地把它们放进购物车里。6. “多可爱的女人！“这是每个人看到我的反应。”萨默斯太太笑着说。7. “哦，天哪！亲爱的我！我把我的孩子都忘了！萨默斯太太大声喊道，意识到自己做错了什么事，开始自责。8. “对不起，女售货员，请您把我选的东西都放回去，因为我本来打算给我女儿珍妮买一双新鞋，买一件新衣服，给孩子们买新衬衫和新袜子，好吗？9. 我一定是昏了头！“一种关心孩子的责任感驱使她思考钱该往哪里去的正确想法。参考答案：Coming to a dressing mirror, looking at herself